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Reviews for Unintentional Inveiglement

By : onecelestialbeing
  • From guiltypleasure on October 19, 2012
    OMG, what a chapter.. That was amazing. Thank you for all the hard work and time you put into it. Not one minute was wasted I assure you. I think I have to go back and re-read it from the beginning again there was so much to take in.

    And by the way, it was the perfect place to end it. The next chapter I am sure is going to be more than I could hope for.
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  • From ANON - Missycam on October 19, 2012
    Ahhhhh thank you for this update it made my day ;-)
    I can't wait to see the big show now ;-P

    Update ASAP please :-)
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  • From ANON - ZenZen on October 19, 2012
    Noooooo! You cannot do this. SO close! *sigh*.

    Excellent story - as always.

    And I hope you don't mind me saying, but I think it's Inveiglement - with an i.:-)

    Hope you update soon!
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  • From perfecthought on October 19, 2012
    I really like this story so far. It really becomes aparent when the authors' have read the books; makes reading the stories so much better. I also love how you don't make Snape into some pathetic whinner, or that he has always loved Hermione. He is true to character. My favorite Snape/Hermione stories are of when Hermione is still at hogwarts pre-HBP. I never liked the ones where Hermione had already graduated. It misses the whole point of Snape's appeal. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!
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  • From demonsangel on October 19, 2012
    Seriously? You leave us hanging THERE of all places? How cruel! Great chapter. Well, chapters as I ended up reading two. Loved hearing about Ron and Harry's impromptu art class XD
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on October 18, 2012
    Please let her get pregnant anyway!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2012
    SO GLAD YOU UPDATED!! MORE ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2012
    Love it! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - melkS on October 16, 2012
    i love it!!!!!!
    keep on! i cn't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From tbird1965 on October 13, 2012
    This just keeps getting better and better. I love the slow build up to the main event. I hope she can get him kissing more.
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  • From missmeoki on October 12, 2012
    I love everything about this story! Absolutely everything. Your writing style is amazing, the way you portray Snape is perfect, and the sex is so delicious. I would really enjoy seeing their "relationship" continue at Hogwarts in some way. Who doesn't like detention sex? ;) Keep up the good work! *feeds your muse some cookies*
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  • From ANON - nightqueen on October 12, 2012
    OMG!! This story is sooooo awesome! I love the way that both characters are portrayed!! I love the banter between Severus and Hermione and OMG Do I love the sexual tension! These scenes are sooo unbelievably hot!! More Please!!!
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  • From snape1sh on October 12, 2012
    Loved the kiss. I can't wait them to kiss more.

    And ohmygod that was hot.

    Is she going to wake up curled up against him...gahhhh
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  • From anyesha on October 12, 2012
    amazinggggggggggggg............this is awesome......oh please make severus do more..where hermione donot habe to initiate but snape does the naughty stuff.....and i hope when they go to hogswart they do more and more naughty stufffffffffff yeahhhhhhhhhh
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  • From ANON - Missycam on October 12, 2012
    Oh! Ohhhhhh! Bloody Fucking Hell!!!!
    I LOVE your writing!!!!! :-D
    That was fucking hot!!!

    Please tell me you will be writing more soon?! ;-)
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