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Reviews for In Loco Parentis

By : Phoenixstrike
  • From bloodshound on November 04, 2012
    oh, oh, oh, yeah this bodes extremely bad things. at least the rescue party is going to be on the move a lot faster with both har AND scorpi missing.
    so, was the bloke someone polijuiced as draco or was draco forced/ black mailed etc.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 04, 2012
    Oops! how is Draco going to explain where Harry & Scorp are? Did he really love his wife so much? In which case I feel sad for Harry. I'd always feel 2nd best...a make do. Was that Draco maybe & he was going to run away with Scopius? He grabbed the portkey, Scorp & wisked away to who knows where while the bad guy got left behind? Did Draco wake up at the same time & run out & see..maybe even got the bad guy (assuming it wasn't him? Seems like Harry is getting the short stick again!!
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  • From Woodlandspirit on November 04, 2012
    Oh No!
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  • From savannah19742001 on October 23, 2012
    Whoa! About time they got together and little Scorp is so cute. Great chapter and I look for more.
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  • From ANON - eyrna1109 on October 23, 2012
    Nooo.its.a.cliffhanger
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  • From Zakaira on October 23, 2012
    Great chapter!
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  • From bloodshound on October 23, 2012
    i hope draco can be patient while scorpi gets used to him.
    wow, it was really REALLY stupid of them to leave draco alive.
    That's like burying the evidence in a really easy to find spot and now that King's knows about it, yeah, there's going to be trouble. they'd have hells own time getting to draco and scorpi now. Har is already extremely protective.
    i'm with draco. i don't think har is asexual, he just hasn't met the right person yet. I think draco will be only to happy to help with that.

    hmmm, well, i can understand har's reservations, but theres no need to rush the relationship. they can take it slow if they need to... or not. :P what made draco decide har was bottoming?

    well, that last line is downright foreboding.

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  • From Zakaira on October 23, 2012
    This chapter was very fun to read! The dialog between Harry and Draco was my favorite and I think you could have fit in another awesome chapter, if you turned more of the story into great dialog like that. Personally, I'm hoping for some more Scorpius/Harry/Draco family bonding scenes next :)
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  • From Zakaira on October 23, 2012
    In general, I am greatly enjoying this story, but I did find this chapter a bit too dense with Draco's story. I think you could have made it more captivating if you had the information spaced out, and reveal it to us more slowly. I would like to see some short conversations between Harry and Draco, where Draco reveals a little bit of information and then maybe some fluff with Scorpio. That being said, I love this story and can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 23, 2012
    Something bad is going to happen? Can't Harry catch a break? "Yep 100% gay"... funny Harry funny! Surprised that Ron took the news so well.
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  • From ANON - remey on October 19, 2012
    Please add more

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  • From moodysavage on October 18, 2012
    lol you go Draco!
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  • From savannah19742001 on October 17, 2012
    Wow, they are so cute together. I really love this story and can't wait for more.
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  • From alexkdp on October 17, 2012
    he's gonna go to draco's room after this!!! ohmyay! haha. thanks for the great read. good chappie. i liked how there was sadness and then compassion, understanding and then full on passion. see ya next time :)
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  • From bloodshound on October 11, 2012
    well, hell, sucks to be draco and how, hard core. did they heal him up after each session or couple of sessions or stick to spells that wouldn;t do him to much in the way of physical damage?
    Still, leaving him alive and with his will was a mistake that's gonna cost them... and draco is going to need soooooo much therapy and support to get through this. Still, i'm glad draco found his will. Now he has some rather nifty non verbal and wandless skills should he need them. Kind of reminds me a bit of Siri's stich... but without the dementors and siri didn't really have a reason to exert himself before he recognized wormtail. Draco literally had nothing left to lose.
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