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Reviews for The Heart of the Matter

By : Jad
  • From kadajclone on September 28, 2012
    Parvati Patil came running down the stairs in her nightdress, latching onto Lavender's arm with a tight grip. 'She's gone and killed the room,' she hissed. 'Actually killed it .'

    had me cracking up again.

    love where you have taken this story. It's in a class of it's own and kudos on the Chimera idea, don't believe that's ever been done before, at least from other stories i have read.
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  • From kadajclone on September 28, 2012
    Draco headed towards the Slytherin table, smiling all thirty-two of his teeth, every eye in the hall watching him. From across the room in the direction of the Gryffindor table, he was pretty sure he heard someone demand, 'Is that my broom?'

    the last line just killed me lol.
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  • From ChaosLady on September 28, 2012
    That was good! I loved Pansy's joke on Gryffindor House. And Harry's reaction.
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  • From demonsangel on September 28, 2012
    Nice chapter. I actually like the idea of combining house colors and mascots while they have to share. I mean, not doing so leaves half the student population feeling out of sorts and out of place. Not exactly a healthy work or living environment. It just adds to the stress. It was rather pig-headed of people to take such offense. After all, it was a good color combination and took into account both houses. Eh, what can you do. So where is Snape in all of this? I mean, shouldn't both heads be involved?
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  • From moodysavage on September 28, 2012
    oh wow... I was wondering how Harry and Theodore were going to be separated. Obviously Potter did not willingly let him go and knows there is a good chance that he won't see him again. This will be really hard on Harry.
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  • From ChaosLady on September 28, 2012
    Dumbledore definitely believes in 'shock and awe', doesn't he? Excellent update!
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  • From ChaosLady on September 28, 2012
    Where the hell are they?
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  • From demonsangel on September 27, 2012
    Interesting chapter. The combined houses are definitely going to be amusing.
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  • From demonsangel on September 27, 2012
    Wow, snarky snarly males galore lol. Sounds like if you put moody and jack in the same room, they could give snape a run for his money. Till he hexes them a new one. Interesting chapter.
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  • From ChaosLady on September 27, 2012
    Why did Theodore leave? Otherwise excellent update.
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  • From demonsangel on September 26, 2012
    Oy, now that is just an evil place to leave off XD Now I have to wait till the next chapter to find out more about Theo. How evil of you! Good chapter though. Interesting take on the potion. Moon dust, very nice.
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  • From demonsangel on September 26, 2012
    I must admit that I wasn't sure if I would continue this, and was even hesitant to start it. The pairing isn't one I normally read but it sounded interesting and after the first chapter, I was pretty much hooked. I look forward to reading more and seeing how this plays out!
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  • From kadajclone on September 25, 2012
    lol im surprised that after everything that has already happened Snape hasn't just said "fuck it, I'm done with this shit". Can't imagine how stressed out these kids are making him and its gonna suck when Ginny(who I happen to adore and am glad you have not made into some turbo bitch like other authors have a habit of doing for the sake of their yaoi coupling) finds out about harry and Theodore..........unless you have some perverse 'menage a trois' planned out lol. Love the story, keep up the good work.
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  • From ChaosLady on September 25, 2012
    We can always trust Snape to give us a dramatic entrance! Great update!
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  • From ANON - tiggator on September 25, 2012
    Okay, not going to lie. I get excited every time you update this story. I'm just so drawn in. The feelings, the descriptions.. just everything! Amazing work.
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