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By : xDAISUKIx
  • From KittyChen on October 28, 2012
    haha... just found myself wondering- is Remus still alive?

    p.s I'd totally go for Charlie if you put him in- AND SNAPE, @.@ Snapey is just too yummyliscious
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  • From ANON - 917brat on October 27, 2012
    forgot my password so....anyway I really like what you have happening so far and can wait for more so please keep it up and updat again soon. As fo voting can I still vote for Charlie weasely if you have him?
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  • From Woodlandspirit on October 27, 2012
    Poor tail just born and already got a scar, but then again the tail does belong to Harry so it should probably just be glad it was only a small wound.
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  • From KittyChen on October 27, 2012
    Ehehehe- i can think of ALOT of nasty things Harry can do with his tail~ HWEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!!!

    Entertaining chapter! I'm curious too- Ryr sounds like he could be a major player.

    So when can we vote? a scene where all candidates are seen... so like a Scath speedating?

    Lol, cant wait for the next one- a week sounds way too long!
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on October 26, 2012
    another nice chapter, i'm curious how ryr is going to fit into things in the future and how harry's going to handle hiding his tail. can't wait to see how DADA goes as well. one little thing, harry's name -Carion- umm, you might want to rethink that name, carrion is what dead things are called (defined as "dead and putrefying flesh") and that's all i could think of when i read that name lol. otherwise, keep up the good work, can't wait to see more :)
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  • From GravyBaby on October 22, 2012
    "I am of mind to make him Harry
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  • From KittyChen on October 21, 2012
    Nice, looking forward to more story-

    DominantXDominant?
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  • From bloodshound on October 20, 2012
    hey, ask and you shall receive. you asked for thoughts and ideas, so u gottem. :P
    well, burn, no one but his closest recognized har? and they're all so nosy to boot.
    So, what is the new defense teacher and why did he keep those two from going after har?
    creevey as cute... shudders.
    draco's a dom? Oh, this WILL be fun. mwhahahahaha.
    What brought on har's critter tanty? Will there be more in the future? Also, will that scratch he placed on ron and mio have an influence on things?
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  • From ANON - XTakesheX on October 20, 2012
    I agree with the previous reviewer! Colin is adorable, fluffy andandandandand JUST TOO CUTE!! Cmon Harry, chomp him! XD
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on October 19, 2012
    i liked the chapter, i thought it came out pretty well. i liked everybody's reactions to harry (well draco and colin anyway lol). and colin was just so... well basically, he's like prey, a little white fluffy bunny and harry's definitely the wolf ready to devour him lmfao. i could see him as a mate, but at the same time eh lol. keep up the good work, can't wait for more :)
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  • From ANON - APPLECHAN on October 17, 2012
    love this! looking forward to more!
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  • From moodysavage on October 15, 2012
    Neville and Snape? ohhhhh... that would be good too :)
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  • From ANON - KaylusCHU on October 15, 2012
    Update soon!
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  • From bloodshound on October 14, 2012
    GAH! how could i have forgetten the twins! *facepalm.
    at any rate, i've seen both twins/har and twins/draco but the twins were dom role in both. i think the twins as switches in a har/twins/draco blend would be interesting too... i seem determined to make a super sub of draco don't i? >>
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  • From bloodshound on October 14, 2012
    snickers... har's first official use for his powers was to find a bloody portkey. That's just classic... and hilarious.
    I'm with nev on this one. Draco and his mob are just pitiful, trying desperately to cling to something that's long gone.
    well, ouch, we knew his critter make over had altered har to all hell n gone but really, so much that his old school mates didn't recognise him? That hurts. at least nev would be familiar with critter inheritance coming forth.

    So far in this, i'm liking draco for a sub mate. He really needs something to hold on to and i think har could give him that.
    I agree with a previous reviewer in that in this story Blaise doesn't have much of a presence, so unless you built his personality up some, he'd just be another sub mate i think.
    What really intrigued me was the idea of Moody as a mate and as a switch. I could honestly see that working, though it would be hella hard to write.
    Snape has possibilities but he and draco are used far to often (though draco is practically begging for it in this)
    people like Kingsley have potential or an oc, but kings is busy doing minister stuff and an Oc is whatever u make it.
    Now that i think about it, there aren't really a lot of people to pick from, unless you're going to draft Vic or other Durmstrang lads. Dean and sean have made their opinion known. I think nev would probably be a restful mate to have. He's such a kind kid, though he has his own brand of strength and courage. he'd be like a detox mate.
    the creevies... winces, a little two high strung and hero worshipy. Har really isn't comfortable with that.
    pity Ced got dead, he would have been in the running, though i doubt his parents would have been very understanding.
    The only un attached weasleys are charley and percy yeah? I've seen both of those done, (though percy usually needs a bit of a personality modification to make him bearable. >> ) I Draco/charlie mix could be fun. especially if you tossed in moody. that would be an absolute scream... though probably also a bitch to write. :P
    So far i think i like the idea of a draco/charlie/moody mix or a draco/charlie/nev mix. the first has lots of strong personalities for potential clashing (which have charlie as the grounder since he's used to volatile beings. ^^) though if har was dom for this lot he'd have his work cut out for him. The second, i think charlie and nev would sort of bond to handle the volatile draco and i'm not sure if har would sub/dom or switch for that group. Probably dom though charlie would probably have to help guide is utterly inexperienced self along...
    >> well anyway. there are some ideas you can play with. enjoy! ^^
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