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Reviews for Dark Knight

By : xDAISUKIx
  • From ANON - on November 11, 2016

    This is an awesome story.  I've really been enjoying it and now I get to the end to find its not finished. I hope you come back to finish this. It's rather refreshing to have a creature story that builds more slowly with actual attention to the plot. I was just starting to fall in love with this world that you've built and i would love to read more. Ill be keeping an eye out so please come back! Good luck and happy writing!


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  • From ANON - e. pressnell on November 06, 2013
    it is just BRILLIANT !!!!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 07, 2013
    about #20..

    Oookay! Now we iz gettin' somewhere! :-) That was a nice 'interlude'.
    Hope you had a nice time on your trip.
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  • From ANON - really? on June 03, 2013
    Ok. Just so you know, Dumbledore would never allow that to happen to his golden boy. Never would he allow him to go so close to death (without good reason, of course. getting rid of voldemort is one thing, dying from injuries is another) stupid. can't write. your story sucks.
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  • From ANON - well... on June 02, 2013
    I don't really think you're ready to be writing for an audience. You write with things happening that only you really understand. There are too many holes and jumps that a person can't string from one to another. The purpose of writing to an audience is to allow them to understand the message that you are attempting to compose. Therefore, you have to assume the reader knows very little. You have to give up a certain amount of knowledge. The "oh, harry's friends know" without writing it out doesn't cut it. We're not supposed to assume what happens. Granted, the writer (yourself) should assume that we know the Harry Potter universe. Otherwise, why are we here reading it? But you cannot assume that we understand what's going on in your mind. That's your job to let us know by explaining it.
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on May 24, 2013
    Ch. 20 is great!
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  • From bloodshound on May 01, 2013
    got to be the most blatant set up in history... i wondered about that. i thought they were playing a bit fast n loose with hars health there.
    anyway, yay, i'm back and my stupid intermawebs is finally working again. *pouts... I WAS NET DEPRIVED! *shudders.

    anyway good luck with your rl endeavors... they sound exhausting.
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  • From ANON - jaws on April 11, 2013
    this chapter was nice .i like the tought of collin as a mate stories like that are so few. oh can't wait to see harry come more into his dominant side .
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  • From ANON - XTakesheX on April 11, 2013
    New chappy, YAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY!

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  • From DB1 on March 25, 2013
    @19 oh my god it's been ages since I've then able to read this story!! Loving the new chapters!!! Can't wait for more. Update soon

    DB
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on March 24, 2013
    That was such a good chapter! Was Draco feeling Harry's emotions?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on March 23, 2013
    about #19..

    I completely forgot about this story, got caught up going page by
    page looking at the other stories in this section, until I came to page
    one. Notice there are 69 pages. :-)

    I loved the 'Red Lipstick' chapter...and I'm glad you made that comment on
    reading the story & seeing what pace the story is at. Because a lot of authors
    don't understand when readers start asking the question of 'well when is it going
    to happen???', they just assume all readers are just impatient. No, you're [all authors that is] just
    taking too much of your sweet time getting there, though there are impatient readers & yes there
    needs to be a buildup in the story...before the ''coming'' together.

    But, still...there has to be something else in the story to take our minds of the ''eventually''.

    Despite all that, from my POV, I am more interested in the Sc
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  • From Jan on March 23, 2013
    Poor boys having to suffer through one of Dumbledores games, but I do love how everything is developing. Please update chapter 20 soon.
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  • From ANON - XTakesheX on March 23, 2013
    Whoa! This hasnt been updated regularly for a long time and perhqps you woukd do netter if you did. ANYWAY the romance seems to be going strong. Ohwait your going to go over the older chapters? Bummer
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  • From ANON - pandagog on March 23, 2013
    you do know dumbledor is dead right and has no place starting a speech in the great hall at all
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