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Reviews for Angel in My Head

By : Aridethdar
  • From BlackRasalas on June 24, 2022

    I was expecting for more Harrycentric or more Harry/Voldie, not for the story to eventually (coz I know it will when authors decide to insert themselves as kind and funny characters) standup comedy of an SI. They will certainly overtake the story and the plot will be all about their hijinks. Eh, boring. Could be worse tho, could be that author inserts themself as "Fate" or any "goddess." Cue my eyes rolling it might pop.

    And, yes, Belinda is certainly author-san.


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  • From WillZel on April 29, 2019

    Wonderfully written. I clicked on it hopigg it was a complete story sadly it isn't but a brilliant one either way


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  • From LovelessKure on June 25, 2018

    OMG! YOU CAN NOT GET A SORRY GOING THIS GOD AND LEAVE IT AS A CLIFFHANGER! COME ON!!! :-!


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  • From Nighttheraven on June 02, 2018

    What's up with the psychiatrist? Hopefully not too much in the story since oc's are meh. Please do more!


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  • From ANON - Purr on October 10, 2016

    Sorry, I was really enjoying your story up to this chapter - but Harry Potter is about an ENGLISH schoolboy, and is set in the England of the 1980's and 1990's.  If you were going to deliberately alter this (there are stories on this site that do that, and do it well), you ought to have made that clear, but since you didn't, I can only assume that you intended following canon in your fic; and that's where the problem (for me) lies ... There were no armed police wandering the streets in those days (or these, in fact).  I can say this with complete certainty, having lived here my entire life (they even filmed the suburban Knight Bus scenes near to where I grew up).

    Even though England has changed a little over the decades, our regular uniformed police don't carry guns, and certainly not on what would be a routine street patrol. Our very few armed response teams have incredibly strict regulations to follow. The mere idea of an English policeman brandishing a gun anywhere near a group of teens, however rowdy, is totally ludicrous. The media would crucify anyone who was in any way involved in such a thing ...

    I was really looking forward to seeing how you were going to develop 'Fallen, until I got to the gun part ... after that, no way could I take any of the rest of this chapter seriously, in fact I'll be honest and say that I'm disappointed enough to probably give up on this story-thread entirely.  

    When writing Harry along the same lines as JKR's original books this sort of Americanism is unforgiveable: it totally spoils any credibility your treatment of the character might have achieved, by flaunting to your reader that you have set 'pen to paper' without first checking your facts.   

     

    Sorry - I did think your fic had quite a lot of merit until then ...

     

    'Purr

     


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  • From acetwolf94 on June 19, 2016
    I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
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  • From Marcus-Flints_Girl on May 13, 2015
    Hey um yea I'm new and this is the first story I have read on this thing so far and I really liked it and I hope there will be more maybe sometime soon.
    Anyway I liked it and good luck on the rest I will be waiting :D
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  • From ANON - The Pink Fuzzy Elephant on January 24, 2014
    I would love to read more of this. :D
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  • From ANON - Morgan on January 05, 2014
    I love this! Keep going! Also want to point out that you mean psychologist, not psychiatrist. A psychiatrist is someone who specializes more in medicine. A psychologist specializes in actual practice or research. If a patient needs medicine, a psychologist will send them to a psychiatrist to determine whether they actually need medicine and what kind(s). Just wanted to let you know.

    And I'm not kidding when I say I like the story. Please continue writing!
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  • From ANON - Candi on December 31, 2013
    love it. can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Tess on August 28, 2013
    I'm on my knees begging! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! I love this story (so far) and hope to keep loving it!
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  • From Genuka on July 13, 2013
    You know you're evil. Can I have more?
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  • From ANON - Clare Doherty on July 06, 2013
    Loving the story plase write more... Clare
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  • From ANON - Amu_4ever on May 15, 2013
    OHHH Come on!!! Update! Please! Please Please PLEASE !!! You can't serously leave it like that!!! I will annoy you with a real long review for chapter two or three, if you don't update soon! And it will be REALLY annoying *evil grin*

    So please please please update *.*

    Pretty PLEASE

    Oh and great story^^
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  • From ANON - Amu_4ever on May 15, 2013
    Funny thing really...I just started a story with some alike aspects in the first chapter. I dindn't publish it jet, but since I noticed your first chapter is similar I just wanted to tell you in case I publish it later.

    I hope you don't have a problem with it. The main point of my story will be different. But as example the pairing is the same...
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