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Reviews for Perfect Bliss (REVAMPED)

By : TheGreatAng
  • From ANON - Susan on December 13, 2014
    I absolutely love your story. I really hope you will update soon. The characters and plot are so very original and thought out, that together they pull you into the story and don't want to let go. I can't wait to find out what comes next.
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  • From ANON - sinfulwolf on November 30, 2014
    Hi. I have been following this story since before your first revision. I am glad you decided to stick with as it does have a very interesting premise. I am interested as to where the story will go. I do want to say, don't second guess yourself. This is your story and your journey we are just along for the ride. You did mention in an author's note that you have been having difficulty keeping everything organized. I don't know if you have a solution but I thought to suggest a flow chart to keep your plot point and thoughts organized. I have tried it myself and it helped I just ended in the worst writers block of life. Sigh. One day. But anyway... thank you for keeping this story going I hope college life is treating you better.
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  • From ANON - Yuki_Coon on November 05, 2014
    Very nice story I love the plot and characters. Please update when you can. Thank you for your time.
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  • From ANON - Jackie B on October 20, 2014
    Ignore the assholes. Do what you need to do to live your life well. I think this is going smashingly well. I will wait patiently and excitedly squeeeee every single time I see that this story has been updated. ^_^ Because I enjoy it very much.
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  • From ANON - HEARTSTAR on October 19, 2014
    Oh OH OH thank you for the update and I ask when you can to please update again thank you lol
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  • From Leania07 on October 15, 2014
    Oh a new chapter!! *does a happy dance* I'm sorry you had some pesky reviewer that said all the wrong things, but let me just tell you how excited I am to see this pop back up on the first page. I understand about having too little time, though I don't do all you are, I do have a full time job working 50 hours a week...when there are no call outs. I'll be patient but just remember you have a lot of understanding readers. Anxious for more of this story!

    Leania
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  • From ANON - MaryRoyale on October 14, 2014
    This story has been one of my favs for a long time. It's been out there in WIP-limbo, but I try to check on it every now and again. I know that work/school/life can suck all of the energy out of you so I have tried to just be patient and wait. This, though, (squeals incoherently) I've been *waiting* for Dom!Harry (see what I did there?) to meet some of his family. I'm so glad that he has Jaden, and hopefully now his parents' extended family.

    This story is a funny one for me because it's the opposite of how I normally read. In *this* one the sex is lovely, but I'm more interested in Harry's family. Don't get me wrong, I think his mates are adorable. It's just that you've made his family story so tragic and heartbreaking. There are his parents who have been driven mad by the damage done to their bond. Then there is the Darkwing family who have been missing, and longing for, their missing members for almost twenty years. I can't even imagine how devastating that would be for Harry's grandparents, aunts and uncles.

    (I'm hoping that Harry welcomes Alstair with open arms. I'm feeling sorry for him, poor darling.)
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  • From ANON - sherlocked17 on October 14, 2014
    Sorry to say but I found an error. The story takes place 1997 am I right. Minor detail Euro's were introduced in 2001.
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  • From ANON - Nikte on October 13, 2014
    So glad you are back!!! Loved this chapter, think it was a great way to bring Ron close to his mates and Harry close to his family. Can
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  • From BAFan on October 13, 2014
    Ch. 18

    "I have gone back and edited chapter 3, dear person who has made multiple accounts to tell me how bad I messed up over and over again. Hopefully it meets your standards."

    I can only assume you are referring to me, since I haven't noticed anyone else offering critique on that chapter. Well, not on AFF, at least. I'm not sure what you mean by "made multiple accounts to tell [you] how bad [you] messed up over and over again," however. It's true that I am a member of two other HP fansites, and I suppose it's possible that I've left more or less the same review on one or both of them if you posted to those sites. That would certainly account for the deja vu feeling as I was writing this one, but I figured it must have been from my comments on the original version. But I hope you don't truly believe that I joined these sites solely for the purpose of criticizing your story, because that's just . . . well, not true. I am very sorry if my comments made you "feel like shit" because that was certainly not my intention. I thought I was offering a helpful critique. I went back and re-read Chapter Three, which now makes sense though I'm sorry it caused you so much stress. And now that I know what an insane schedule you're leading, between jobs, health issues, etc., I promise no more critiques or corrections.
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  • From BAFan on October 12, 2014
    Ch. 13

    Great battle scene! Go, Charlie!

    "...Stigus Mortinson was impossible to find. It seemed his brothel, office, and home didn
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  • From BAFan on October 12, 2014
    Ch. 12

    Whew! This chapter and the previous one were . . . wow! Well done. I've read about sounding done with toys, but never with a finger - even a pinky. Doesn't sound appealing to me! *g*
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  • From ANON - Christytolson1989 on October 12, 2014
    I love your story this is defently different then any story I have read I don't see I problems your writing is fine great job on this idea and putting it in writing
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2014
    Loved the update.
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  • From BAFan on October 12, 2014
    Ch. 3

    I remember the original version of this, and you've done a good job of fleshing out the story and characters. However . . .

    "At the time there was nothing I could do and I had to [no]* proof of foul play. It was also around this time that whispers [began]* of a man named Tom Riddle who had taken the role of the menace Lord Voldemort, but no one could really remember much about him other than that he was dangerous. You can see how this seemed odd to me and the other goblins, but as I said there was no proof and nothing that could be done.
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