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Reviews for Weasley's Wizard Wheezes

By : CryingCinderella
  • From ANON - Vaila on August 05, 2015
    And that is callled an updating marathon! Not that I am complaining! So this Nigel did mess everything between them. And I only regret it that Hermione didn't catch them in moore compromising situation, moro steemy one.... I hope there is more coming soon.
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  • From ANON - starr on August 05, 2015
    they are so complicated and so hard to read , both of them....he is so hard cord that I don't know if Hermione will service with him...either she gets harder or he calms a bit...good thou Thanks for the update !!!!!
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  • From Rosajean on August 05, 2015
    Holy hell! I don't even know what to think. Poor Hermione. What agony to find him giving a lesson to the blondie and then basically have him throw her out of the house, even if just for a night. She doesn't have to know everything about him to care for him, but he seems to have it in his head that she does or that she's only there for the sex. What an explosive mess of things they've made. I really cannot wait to read more! Seriously, holy hell!
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  • From azalea33 on August 05, 2015
    Oh, the angst...so frustrating...so delicious. Well done! The romantic part of me wants it to work out between them for an eventual happy ending, but right now the rational part of me is thinking, "Go, Hermione! Get some distance from him!" I would love to see her gain some emotional footing so that she can deal with the situation better. Thank you for the frequent updates!
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  • From ANON - chelsey on August 05, 2015
    Amazingn i wonder where she goes.
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  • From naughty_megs on August 05, 2015
    OMG! what is happening! Can't wait for the next chapter and some explanations!
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  • From ANON - Tami on August 05, 2015
    I can't believe he threw her out. I know they both need to work out there feelings but I can't believe he threw her out. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Amarenima on August 04, 2015
    Very interesting!
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  • From ANON - Silver Birch on August 04, 2015
    Oh, no, nasty Severus, throwing her out! This was a twist I was not expecting, as things had been progressing so nicely. And I was surprised to hear he had been with more men than women. Hopefully he is just protecting himself from how he really feels about her...
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  • From ANON - lemonade8 on August 04, 2015
    ps, Hermione was a little rapey for a minute, though. So... just wanted to make that clear that I didn't miss her bad behavior.
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  • From ANON - lemonade8 on August 04, 2015
    Oh, NO HE DIDN'T!!!! Did he just tell her she had to go have sex with a stranger? Kick her out in the cold in her nightgown, without even shoes, a wand, or a knut to her name??? He'll be lucky if she only moves out. She had BETTER eat those scallops and not even leave one for him! He doesn't deserve them. And she also knows this curse with birds...

    He did lie. She has had reason to trust him in the past and in the present. That he is insistent on making her rethink her trust, I don't know what the end game is to that. If she does sleep with some stranger, that's not going to help her. Empty sex is just that, and sex with one person when you are in love with another is awful, no matter how 'good' it is. The fallout from an emotionally traumatized woman having a coerced booty call might be too much for Severus to handle. Either he thinks she won't be harmed by this or he knows she won't do it and it will make her think. I don't know which or if it is an entire other motivation.

    He's in the doghouse with me right now, though. Throwing her out in that neighborhood!!! Better hope Molly doesn't find out...


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  • From ANON - Laurenlemon on August 03, 2015
    Thank you for updating (both stories) -- awesome chapter and you've left so many interesting open ends. Nice Seminar drop by the way. This is one of my all-time favorite stories to read and can't wait for more. I'm amazed at your creativity and character development. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - lemonade8 on August 01, 2015
    Okay, a few mysteries and a few revelations. First, his strange reaction to the 'milk duds'. I'm wondering if it's because he might like it too much, or if it's because he DOESN'T like it. He acted like it was a taboo, but the second time he seemed to want to linger. Or maybe it's just a thing he'd never done, unlike everything else so far, and the new experience threw him off. I can't imagine him liking surprises at this time in his life. Dunno.
    Second, wow. He's really opening up to her in a big way. I noticed he only took the chance after he had decided she was in love with him, though. Still careful and guarded.I also noticed he is guiding her through the realization of his love life. I would have been upset on her behalf when he presented her with an obvious previous lover, allows profuse familiarity with his person, then throws a quip into the ether about jealousy-- except that his defining traits as a youth WERE jealousy and envy. Knowing about his past, it felt less like a bait and stab than a "This has been my life, can you deal?" It did take a little thinking on my part to come to that conclusion, though.
    And George!!! Really? He doesn't think that his 'little sister' would mind doing sex acts on her former professor in front of hundreds of people? Is he out of his cotton pickin' mind?? Unless they are allowed to disguise themselves somehow... Is that why Severus is so casual about it? Because I could see that sort of thing inviting stalkers like crazy. Probably not Severus as much, he doesn't come across as accessible and victim-y enough, but Hermione DEFINITELY. Um, if you have that planned, sorry to expose it. If not, I'm not sorry. ;D
    Regardless, I wonder how much he likes her open appreciation of him. I think it must be a lot, and maybe it's valuable because of what they both had been through.
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  • From OracleObscured on August 01, 2015
    Great, now I want to peg someone. The next guy I date is going to have to be seriously comfortable with his sexuality.
    Favorite line this chapter:
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  • From Midnight_Fairy on August 01, 2015
    Great chapter! That last sence was very sweet, I hope Hermione wakes up to Severus still laying next to her or I fear she may have her feeling hurt. Keep writing. The spay on Mermaid would of been fun joke product for the main store if the girls breast where better covered and one didn't have to be naked for the product to work. I could imagine teens would love the idea of transforming into a mermaid and other creatures. Imagine George turning Ron's arms into spider legs, he would of screamed the house down.
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