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Reviews for Weasley's Wizard Wheezes

By : CryingCinderella
  • From DinaTheCat on August 01, 2015
    I really love this story. I actually had a dream about it last night (that's what I get for reading fan fiction before bed!).
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  • From ANON - Vaila on August 01, 2015
    This was unexpected. I thought that Nigel will be some new co-worker in the shop who will make Severus jealous. But it turned out just the opposite. And this conference of George and the public display of having sex will be domething very interesting. The chapter was miraculously long like the previous one. I hope there are more scenes with Nigel. I hope that Hermione sees Sev having a go with Nigel. This can stimulate her too. The story is going very well and it is becoming more and more interesting. I can hardy wait for the next chapters.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 01, 2015
    I was all prepared to skip past parts, but there's just something about the way you write that compels me to keep reading. The clinical-ness of some it made it easy to read and Hermione's never ending thoughts, worries, and inner monologue made it less squicky. lol I would love to know more about Nigel and Severus' past as a "teacher," too! :-) Thank you once again, hon!! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Missycam on July 31, 2015
    OMG!!! I'm feeling like a bad fangirl because I'm just finish to read this chapter and I want the next one ^^
    Amazing as always Dearie ;-)
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  • From ANON - Belissima on July 31, 2015
    Ooooooooh!!!!! GAH! I... Just... Need... MORE
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  • From ANON - Silver Birch on July 31, 2015
    Another brilliant chapter, and I love how the characters and their relationship keep developing. As always, I'm very curious to see what happens next. Where was Severus, and how will Hermione handle performing for a crowd? Keep these chapters coming, please!
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  • From ANON - starr on July 30, 2015
    that was way out there but ok???!!!! and george is loosing it now he wants them to do it in front of others , don't kno man !!!!!! thanks for the update !!!!!
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  • From ANON - Amarenima on July 30, 2015
    Brilliant chapter! It was very emotional. I hope we find out where Severus went.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2015
    Please please please please update. This story is so great and has totally pulled me in. I can't wait to see how the story and the characters develop
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  • From naughty_megs on July 28, 2015
    Love this story! I'm interested to see what happens with their 'relationship'! Even how George fits in.
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  • From ANON - Mary on July 25, 2015
    Such and amazing story, you are a great writer. Do you have anything on other sites?
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  • From ANON - Belissima on July 24, 2015
    DARLING, I really can't wait anymore for the next chapter. It's making me restless and anxious not knowing what sticky situation is coming next. Pun intended.
    PLEASE find it in your heart to put a poor girl at ease, and thank you for all of the steamy goodness.
    Sincerely,
    Waiting on the edge of her seat
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  • From ANON - Kazavan on July 24, 2015
    Yay, so glad this has updated. I absolutely love the way you write severus' reaction to the whips. Do keep writing please :)
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  • From Lady_Wolfe on July 23, 2015
    Such a good chapter! Love the fact that she finally got under his skin! Please add me to he update emails ldewulfe@aol.com
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2015
    Hello, I'm the asininely meticulous Anon :) It seems that I have a reputation to live up to now... :P Just to clarify, I didn't mean to be disparaging (or even to do such a close reading) - I noticed a few things then it just snowballed from there...

    That being said, I didn't do as close of a reading for this chapter and I think a lot of the problems were fixed as well. There were fewer semicolons, which was great. I think most were used properly but just make sure the two parts of the sentence are complete clauses. Just two I picked up on:
    Eg: "But Hermione checked her impulse and waited in the silence; the only sound that filled the room WAS the crackling from the hearth." --> the change in tense makes the second part complete.
    Eg: "Hermione could feel her heart racing in her chest, the thundering echoing so loud she was certain he could hear it as well." --> I'd actually change the semicolon to a comma but you could also change the echoing to echoed.

    One last thing:
    "How would it effect their work with George?" --> Make sure it's affect (verb) not effect (noun)

    As always, great job with the characters - I'm glad Hermione and Severus are finally coming together and opening up to each other. I like how Severus is slowly softening but still maintaining his prickly exterior. Also, I marvel at your creativity and how you have come up with so many different toys. Thank you for the quick update and I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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