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By : CryingCinderella

From ANON - lunarose on August 22, 2015
I have been following this story for over a year and I am completely in love with this story and your characters. The manipulation from Snape and the emotional fraughtness from Hermione are exactly what I'd expect post-war. I get excited every time there's an update and can't wait for more! Please add me to your email list. Maybe then I'll stop checking every day for updates! :)
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From ANON - Beki on August 22, 2015
Hey,
I stumbled across your story after seeing a recommendation online and am extremely pleased that I followed it up! I'm loving the story so far; my only is the sex brilliant, Snape is beyond frustrating and I do lo e inaccessible Snape! Please add me to your mailing list for updates and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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From ANON - Mandy on August 22, 2015
Easily one of the best fanfics i've read. Please keep me updated on new installments!
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From HarryGinny4eva on August 20, 2015
thanks for the update once again. You intro was informative, as I had forgotten how much trauma they've both experienced. I am sorry Hermione had such an awful time and then worse aftermath with Charlie, but I am sorrier that she didn't really learn anything from it. I don't know what Severus' deal is, but she needs to stick to her current plan of separating her home and work lives. He is far too complicated for her to deal with until she has A LOT of counseling and a few thousand pounds of psychotic drugs. lol Thanks, hon! HG4eva
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From Rosajean on August 20, 2015
This was great and also agonizing! Everything between them is so fraught with tension and no wonder Hermione is going mad. I would be too if I spent my days trying to decipher Severus Snape. This was a really great chapter and I can't wait to read more! Please update again soon, I really want to know where it goes from here. I really doubt Hermione will be able to stick to her plan of only interacting in the workshop, but maybe if she does Severus will realize that he does want more with her and that even though she drives him crazy, it'll drive him crazier to not have her. Seriously though, I'm dying for an update!
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From ANON - Hannah on August 20, 2015
First off, I like the twist of a grungy Charlie. Great job!
I agree this was a much needed chapter for Hermione and Severus.Hermione being with Charlie didn't bother me as much as the event with Nigel in the last chapter. I guess that's because Severus asked for it so he got what was coming. Hermione was blindsided. I think Severus realized that Hermione isn't going to play his games much longer. She opened his eyes by not fighting back before the Charlie event and he admits to expecting her to. Almost wanting her to. I thought he was on the right track when Nigel made an appearance that morning because he didn't want Hermione to leave but then he screwed that up and had the nerve to "reprimand" Hermione as she was leaving. I did have a different feel about Nigel this time though. I thought I was going to be a little touchy about him because of chapter 15 but I felt this time that perhaps there is a different kind of relationship between them then what I see on the surface. Yea Nigel seemed upset but when severus told him he wasn't his boyfriend he just agreed. Like he knew it already and wasn't really worried about it. I just think he likes to get Hermione riled up. Good for Hermione though...I hope she sticks to the "keeping it professional" scheme for a little while. Maybe Severus will see a difference in her behavior towards him. I can feel her aggravation and heart aching from supposedly unrequited love. Can't wait for the next chapter. Your writing is impeccable!
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From ANON - Missycam on August 20, 2015
Love this chapter!
I don't know why but I kinda want a sex scene (sort of threesome) between Hermione/Severus/Nigel ^^

I can't wait to be able to read the next chapter!
Thank you ;-)
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From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2015
Oooh, I'm so excited! I haven't checked this site in a couple of months, but I did today with specific goal of seeing if this story had been updated, and lo and behold... I'm full of yay and squee right now, you are excellent, this story is wonderful, and now I'm off to read. Thank you :)
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From ANON - Nancy on August 19, 2015
Wow. This was a really great chapter. I like Severus admitting that he's damaged as well. He has definitely acted like his greater experience in the bedroom and in life made him a more "together" person than Hermione. I like him admitting that he's fucked up too.
I also liked Hermione unburdening herself, she was so isolated and it seems like in reaching out she has opened up possibilities of a greater support network.
I would love for her to set up firm boundaries with Severus. He said she's not his girlfriend, then he needs to stay out of her bed, physical interactions are limited to work and she can ask around and find out how much a room to rent is and start paying him. Or move out. But stop giving him all the power.
I love this story and yes as another reviewer said, the sex is freaking HOTTTTT!!!
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From ANON - dhyan on August 18, 2015
This is probably one of my all-time favorite SSHG stories at this point, and I'm caught up. The concept made me smile -- almost a silly excuse to get the bow-wow track going. But perfectly reasonable, for all that. But it's not silly at all, aside from some of Fred's inventions, and that's requisite. I love the sheer quantity of sex in this -- more than in standard PWP -- and I love the rough sex especially. But it's the complexity, interest, and probably uniqueness of they're relationship that has me so enthralled. I really hope it's still active, and that you'll add me to your update list if that's still going. Thank you!
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From Midnight_Fairy on August 18, 2015
Wow! Interesting chapter and full of drama. If Severus is not careful he is going to lose Hermione. I wonder if she will try to move into the potters house for a few days to clear her head. Keep writing and I look forward to read many more chapter! This story is currently one of my favourite.
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From ANON - Amarenima on August 18, 2015
Brilliant! I think Severus is finally starting to come around.
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From ANON - lemonade8 on August 18, 2015
Woo hoo.... update on my birthday!!!

Well, at least he followed her, even though he failed her by believing that she wouldn't take his order at face value and defer to his experience. It looks from here that he actually does have feelings for her, but doesn't want to give them to her. I think that she is smart to give him what he asked for (no relationship), at least for now. It seems like he needs to decide if she makes his life better or not, and if he really wants to give her a chance to make it so.

I did have a little sympathy for Nigel in the beginning. He clearly adores Snape, and Hermione's jealousy prompts her to say some pretty ugly things about him, even though she's not cruel enough to say it to his face. I haven't actually seen any evidence of a sexual/romantic relationship yet, though. Teaching him things about D/s isn't necessarily the same thing as having a sexual and romantic relationship, even though that can be the result. If it isn't romantic and physical, then both Nigel and Severus are toying with her. If it is, Severus is toying with both of them, but one possibility is that it is out of ignorance/dysfunction, so there is a bit of a chance that he is not a complete bastard and is just damaged.

I also think that Nigel deciding to open the door to her bedroom was inexcusably rude. That was NOT Severus' bedroom for him to feel free to enter. It was a very purposeful, Slytherin move. That he felt justified because he had been stood up was not good enough, and I don't know that Severus is going to take kindly to the maneuver. But, to be fair to his characterization, it's the kind of thing that a younger person is apt to do. Insulting a woman- his rival- after she had such a horrible day (caused by Severus) and had expressed her love for Severus was also a bit of bad luck for poor Nigel. But also, in Nigel's defense, Severus is responsible for sending him lots of signals as well. Own up, grow up, Sev. Those two are not the only children playing on the playground today!

But dog gone it, he does care for her, takes care of her and tries to protect her. I can't get too mad at him when he does that kind of thing. It's too sweet, even if he's really bad at the emotional thing.

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From Luna8 on August 18, 2015
Hey, readers! Is someone else wondering about Nigel and how was it that Sev met him? I guess Sev's previous life as a death eater and his present baggage of guilt have something to do with that.
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From ANON - Sakura on August 18, 2015
Just finished reading the newest chapter! :D I get so excited when I get the email saying it's updated. I stop reading whatever other fanfiction that has caught my interest and read the latest chapter. :3 I will admit the ending nearly killed me. I didn't realize I was near the bottom until I read Severus' last line and tried to scroll down more to find that was it. >.< I love the way you write your story. It's unlike any other fiction on here, but the way you write their interactions and thoughts is so believable. I think that's part of the reason I like this story so much. Their interactions and growth does actually make sense and makes for a fantastic story. :3 I absolutely can't wait until the next chapter is up. Keep up the super duper amazing work! :D

As a side note, I've been on this site a little over 10 years now, and you are one of three authors out of hundreds that I have actually left a review for. Bad I know, but I really only post on ones that I really love and I'm dedicated to. You are the only one I've reviewed twice. Although, the other author made a Facebook page for her writing and I added her on there too. :3 Just wanted to let you know that you are awesome and will always have a fan in me.
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