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Reviews for A Godfather\'s duty

By : KusanoSaku
  • From ANON - ajablue on March 22, 2013
    I was really enjoying this story and though I very much dislike it, I can usually push past some child abuse. However I can't stomach the idea any mother would put their nine year old out there or that any legal organization would condone it. It has made the story unreadable to me. There are no justifications that would ever let me allow a child of mine do something so horrific. A parents job is to protect a child, not offer them up as sacrifice. The reasoning of, well she's heard this type of thing before, makes no logical sense to me in a magical world where we just had silencing charms used in the very same story. There is no reason Tonks should have even known about this let alone be allowed to participate.

    I don't mean to simply tear at your story and you need to write the story you want to tell. I do wish you luck with it. I have enjoyed several of your stories in the past and most likely will again in the future. This simply won't be one of them anymore and I do think you may want to put a bit more reasoning behind such a huge point of contention in the future. Saying a child who isn't yet eligible for a wand and hogwarts can outsmart her fully capable, magical parents doesn't gel as decent reasoning for such actions to me.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 22, 2013
    That was also disturbing, but I understand why it must me done. Thanks for updating.
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  • From WolfPup5683 on March 20, 2013
    Great story, although I must admit reaching into the pedo section makes me leery I do understand the plot point and in my personal opinion it helps to make people realize just how disgusting a thing it is. I would like to be added to the email list, my email is Wolfpup5683@live.com please put the story name in the subject. thank you
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 14, 2013
    This story just took a more disturbing turn, but it's still good.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 12, 2013
    How sad that it sounds like it will take awhile to get close to Harry even. All that he has to through! And Dora! Nuff said.
    I hope all this doesn't come back to bite Lucius in the back with Narcissa & everyone.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 10, 2013
    Somehow I missed some chapters but am caught up now. Wish AFF had email notification. This is getting better & better. Poor Harry!! Love that Remus & Severus have finally gotten together & that they fit together so well as well as Remus knowing some of Sev's bad childhood. It should help Remus understand why Sev thinks & does as he does.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 10, 2013
    Exceeds expectations!
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  • From jujukitty on March 05, 2013
    interesting story so far, saw you re-used the description of merrivale from another of your fics lol. i'm curious to see how this thing with harry having a twin plays out, but so far it's going well. when lolly was giving sev instructions on holding cora, while what she said was right, it wasn't necessarily accurate for a baby cora and harry's age - usually after a few months they lose the whole "bobble-head" thing and can support their own heads. keep up the good work, i'm looking foward to seeing where you go with this
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  • From jujukitty on March 05, 2013
    ch 5- couple little issues i found: 1)Luc tells sev "The Dark Lord is at Lestrange Castle still"...ummmm?! so they know where he's at and haven't bothered to tell anyone else yet? he's supposed to be dead, right? 2)you said the young werewolves shifted to wolves and let cora play with them, maybe i just misunderstood, but i thought they couldn't shift at will and that they couldn't retain their human minds when they did?
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  • From Demarzi on February 17, 2013
    Your story is so amazing, it's totally captivating. Please update soon :D
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on January 30, 2013
    I realize it actually hasn't been that long since your last update but it feels longer because my laptop was on the fritz and I was using my mother's laptop. It still feels too short, though.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on January 30, 2013
    That was entiresly too short for a such a long hiatus.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on January 06, 2013
    At least Severus was able to do something constructive to find Harry. So I don't mind the dark turn. Excellent update.
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  • From bloodshound on December 20, 2012
    ty for writing that with me in mind but, but, but... *whimpers over har's misery.
    i hope they find him before permanent damage is done to the poor kid. it's a pity they can't use cora in some way to help track him down. is he really in an orphanage or do the dursleys have him stashed in the cupboard?
    yes, i'm a bit confused about where the kid could possibly be. i may have to go and re read things to try and get a better pic.

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  • From ANON - Kris on December 18, 2012
    I like the story so far, just one continuity issue. You had a character refer to Harry as the-boy-who-lived. But from the sounds of it he shouldn't be referred to that. They still don't know what happened that night and that the dark lord tried to kill him. Otherwise I think your plot is going well =)
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