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Reviews for A Surprise to Them All

By : snapalicous

From ANON - stevielj66 on November 08, 2012
Looking forward to more. Definately has my interest.
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From ANON - IheartsnapeLoving on November 05, 2012
I am eager for you to continue the story, anxious to see what lies ahead..please update soon!
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From ANON - chester on November 04, 2012
I really like it - please continue it but I must insist on one thing - happy ending. But overall - really good first chapter!
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From Burnedx2 on November 04, 2012
I like what you have. I'm curious to know what Snape thinks of Hermione helping him. I hope you continue!
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From ANON - colao on November 04, 2012
I would love for you to continue. I cannot offer constructive criticism as I didn't notice any problems (can't say that means that definitly aren't any, just nothing blaring:)
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From ANON - Z on November 04, 2012
Good stuff, keep writing.

Did he run away or was he just taken to the hospital/infirmary?
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From xcrystaldragonx on November 04, 2012
I would like to see you continue this. Keep up the good work!
Hugs, TCQ
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From ANON - nik on November 04, 2012
I'm eager to see where you are going with this! I love the stories where he hates her for saving his life at first. Then he realizes there is so many more enjoyable things to do once your master is gone and an eager young lass willing to help you through a trying time ;)

You have not got to any plot points as of yet, though I already like the way you write. I hope this could be a multi chaptered story in the near future!

Good Luck!
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