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Reviews for Victim of the Fall

By : PrettyDesdemona
  • From ANON - Cat on January 02, 2013
    What can I say about this chapter.....maybe that it was practically perfect? Draco just seems so real and so out of his comfortzone but its cute. and the way you wrote the build up and kiss was great! Can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Kain on January 02, 2013
    In a bit of a hurry so alas, this review will be short and sweet.

    Loved it.

    The last 2 chapters have been real feelgood types. I liked how you showed a real human side to Draco and i lol'ed at him being so out of his comfort zone. Other stories tend to make him out to be some kind of marty stu, unflinching sex god of a man, but you portray him much closer to canon as a young man with many flaws and insecurities, and i applaud you for that. That kiss..was..PERFECT, the setting and the build up along with the description made that scene pure gold. It will be interesting too see where they go from here. This is probably the only story on this freaking site where i actually like Draco. You are one of the very few writers who actually takes time to properly build up the DracoxHermione relationship without resorting to character assassination,cheap cop outs or cliches.

    The fact that i am not a big fan of Malfoys/Slytherins/douchebags etc is a testament to your skills as a writer.

    -Waits.....and hungers-


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  • From ANON - Melusine on January 01, 2013
    I'm not going to lie, but I've been obsessively checking and refreshing the page to check on this story since the last update. I love this story and I love the way you're writing it and your characters. Also, I just sat here grinning like an idiot through the whole last part of the latest chapter. I'm probably going to read it again and have the same results. Looking forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - Dramine on December 31, 2012
    I read this story in about 24 hours I just could not stop reading! and you also made me register (finally) so I could leave a review. It hit me on so many different levels and took me back to a very dark time in my life. It was therapeutic though reading through it thus far. Its amazing to me that I would have found such a strong well written writing on such a "Knockturn Alley" of the internet lol. There was one line Draco said that just broke me down, when he said that he testified against his father. Anyway, this some how brought some healing to me just knowing that someone else has gone through some intense pain and been able to come back to life.
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  • From ANON - Andriela on December 31, 2012
    I'd like to offer you a well thought out and insightful review of your story - but as I just read everything in one go all I can really says is AHAHA! How amazing is this story? I've read a lot of fan fiction over the years but this one is by far my absolute favorite. I am a hopeless romantic and love to read Draco/Hermione fan fictions - but generally I find them to a little - well - unbelievable. I just kind of roll my eyes a little and just ignore things that I find to be out of character. At the same time I love the pairing and even with my eye rolls I still enjoy the heck out of them. Your story is facinating and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm intrigued with the blood magic and the slowly developing relationship between Hermione and Draco. I take great pleasure it how you are building relationship, it makes it seem more plausable. I usually don't read stories that aren't completed because, frankly, I hate waiting but I'm so glad that I read this one. You are a gifted and amazing writer and I can't wait to read the remainder of this story. I find it refreshing that you are taking an honest approach at the aftermath of the war and how it can leave people damaged. As someone who suffers from panic attacks myself I find how you are dealing with Hermione's to be truthful and not so over the top. Sometimes there just isn't enough oxygen in the world you know? :) If I had one complaint (and really - I don't) I wish that sometimes we could hear from Draco. It would be wonderful to hear this story from Draco's perspective. There are certain moments and I would just love to see through Draco. But honestly. BEST STORY EVER. I await your next chapter with great anticipation. :)
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  • From ANON - aisha on December 30, 2012
    I love your story, it is the most well written post series I have ever read. I don't think I have been moved so much by a story in quite a long time. Love it and will stalk the next chapter with anticpation.

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  • From ANON - Jocat on December 30, 2012
    All I want is a tim tam right now! Great story really has me hooked!
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  • From ANON - Aranel on December 30, 2012
    Oh hermione, she wouldn't be herself if she weren't so bloody difficult. I just love Draco so much right now. He is so patient and really in love. I hope that hermione can learn to forgive soon. Still crazy afraid of Harry though. I'm scared of Ron as well, they're like dark clouds in the corner waiting to soak everything!
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  • From ANON - ldeetz on December 29, 2012
    I love this story. I've been reading it straight since last night! I can hardly wait to see what happens next.
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  • From MrsMalfoyy on December 29, 2012
    I freaking love this story!!! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Carly on December 27, 2012
    Merry Christmas! Thank you so much for this intense chapter! Sorry my reviews have been scarce but I have been keeping up. I don't think I've ever loved a story like I do this one!
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  • From ANON - Cat on December 27, 2012
    So I have figured out my problem with reviewing, it doesn't post if you do it on my kindle. Weird right? Anyway great as usual! Your character development is a breath of fresh air compared to some stories and it makes the story so much stronger. I can't believe I missed the hint of blood magic, then again it seems I'm not the only one. I can't decide if I want to go back and look for more clues or be surprised lol. Malfoy seems to really be progressing while staying his own semidouchebag self, I kept trying to imagine thinking of what magic would look like and all I could think of was an acid trip while surrounded by tiedye lol. Way to leave it on a cliff tho, can't wait to see how she reacts//what happens since I'm assuming they're still going to be under the effects for a bit. :)
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  • From ANON - Sailor Sol on December 26, 2012
    Just read 18 and 19. Very well done, and very moving. Again, sounds like you have some personal experience there, or maybe secondhand experience. This is DEFINITELY one of the better stories I've read here, and it's at the top of my 'check for updates' list.
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  • From pepperdoc on December 26, 2012
    You don't have to review any of my stories, I just wanted to let you know I absolutely LOVE this story soooooooooo much. You have such an amazing way of describing things. Love it!
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  • From deathraven on December 25, 2012
    Loving this!! Was so happy with I checked out to see if there had been an update and yes!! 3 chapters!! Your amazing, loving where the story is going maybe Malfoy and Hermione will get alittle frisky and she can releave some tension and work out some of her pain.. wink*wink* chapter 20 PLLLLLEASE!!
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