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By : PrettyDesdemona
  • From ANON - Odrade on December 08, 2012
    So loving this gripping story! This chapter and this small diverse group coming together to help Hermione and to learn her deep pain is heartfelt and fantastic. Draco really stepped up, huh? Cannot wait for more. I'm newish to AFF - how can I be notified of updates?
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  • From ANON - SMS04 on December 08, 2012
    I'm so in love with this story. I found it yesterday while browsing and the raw nature of it has captured me! I am very curious to see how each character handles and deals with the others burdens. I really can't wait to see Hermione and Draco interact and grow to trust each other!Please continue this awesome story and know that you've made a fan out of me!
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  • From ANON - Odrade on December 08, 2012
    I really like Slughorn's boasting and though she was overwhelmed by Diagonal Alley I think you portrayed it very well - from the earlier feel, to the horror it became before the Dark Lord's fall, and now back to the reconstruction.
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  • From ANON - Odrade on December 08, 2012
    Sad, but promising first chapter! :)))
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  • From EvaBrick on December 08, 2012
    This is the best fanfiction I've ever read, and I've read thousands upon thousands. It's VERY good and I check back everyday before I get out of bed to see if there's another chapter posted. You're a great writer - thanks for the wonderful read. :)
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  • From ANON - dh_reader on December 08, 2012
    This chapter was i-n-t-e-n-s-e! At first, I didn't really like how weak she seemed. I didn't want others to witness her weak state and then
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  • From deathraven on December 08, 2012
    AHHH loving it!! What a great chapter, both 10 and 11! Loved, loved, loved the Blaise and Hermione scene, that was classic!! I wonder what Draco is going to say to Hermione now that he's been in her mind?? Hmmmm?? I can't wait until the next chapter you have me on the edge on me seat!! I am curious as to what Harry has been up to all this time, but I'm sure you have your plans, I just hope you don't make him all "dark Harry" hate it when people do that. Yeah he's always been an angstie guy with narcissistic tendencies but not evil, hmm where are you taking us?? I don't know but I'm enjoying the ride!! Update soon I hope, I've got my fingers, toe, arms, legs, and eyes crossed for the next one to come up in an hour?...tomorrow??..the next day?? :) I'll be waiting!
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  • From ANON - Kain on December 08, 2012
    Well this was quite an interesting chapter. This little gem here just happened to stand out in particular to me


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  • From deathraven on December 08, 2012
    @chpt 9: First YAY UPDATES!! I'm loving Teodora, she is great and I love that you created someone that Hermione also can confide in! Loving the gypsy-ish aspect of her too, awesome! I'm glad that Hermione still has problems with Draco, yes of course I want to see them together in the end, but I think its realistic that she still basically hates him still..make him work for it ;). I understand why you went there with her also but I'm glad now that you've seem to have taken her out of that and are making her heal! Now with all that said...the class scene, very rarely does a story move me to get faclimped and normally when I do I'm 50 chapters deep and invested ya know? But when you had all the students say what she Ron and Harry did for them, made me all teary, even shed a couple. Very nice double thumbs up! Keep it up loving this story! oh almost forgot, there were a couple of grammatical errors in this chapter might wanna go and fix those just so ya know love :) now on to chapter 10!!! **excited squeal!!*
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  • From ANON - aranel on December 08, 2012
    i really love this story! im very interested to see how she will finally let draco in. if you know what i mean...sorry that was a horrible meme plug... great story, cant wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - dh_reader on December 07, 2012
    Phewwwwww!
    I'm glad Ginny & Hermione seem to be friends again. I do think they need to talk, though.
    I'm glad Hermione contacted George.
    I'm glad Hermione made concessions and even befriended Zabini.
    I'm a little afraid Ron is going to be a git. I like his character, even when I've never been fond of Ron/Hermione. However, if for the sake of the story he needs to become the "bad guy", I guess I'll accept it.
    I'm a little afraid Hermione is going to harm herself again. Doesn't she have a potion to prevent this? Did she even take it? Please, someone, save her! Or better, Hermione, save yourself! lol But we wouldn't have our good deal of drama if it was so easy, right? I do hope you'll write chapters and chapters of this story.

    Now, about the Dividing Lines, what do we think? Nod-nod, interesting. We want to know more about it, even if that means Hermione being (fake?) friends with Malfoy.

    Oh, by the way! I laughed so much at your "Rupert" reference! So, what do you follow more here? The books, the films or both?
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  • From ANON - Kain on December 07, 2012
    Oh man i totally can relate with Hermione as far as her scene with Teodora goes. I hate it when i am having a talk with an 'authority figure' and i am feeling all righteous and my bloods boiling and they manage to turn the shit I say on me so smoothly and totally put out my flame........and i can't freaking argue against their point lol. Hermione is justified in feeling what she feels towards the Slytherins and predominately Malfoy but Teodora definitely made a point and was right to call Hermione out for adding fuel to the fire(although i do love conflict ;D) when she should by all accounts be the better person. But when ya think about it, Hermione has been the better person for almost 7 years, never letting Malfoy get to her until he really crossed a line (anything serious involving her loved ones). Hell, Harry and Ron got angrier than she did and she had to hold them back and play peacemaker and the rare times he got a reaction from her she either put him on his ass or had a sick burn to throw. I sincerely hope there is no truth to the joke Hermione made about Teodora putting a compulsion on them and that there interaction is hopefully natural. I suppose it is nice to see Hermione and Blaise reach some sort of peace and I guess it makes the most sense since in canon(books at least) Blaise really did come off as a true neutral and never took part in any of the bullying Slytherin was known for and more or less just kind of hung out in the back ground.I'm guessing the ending to the chapter was that whole 2 steps forward, 3 steps back kind of deal with Hermione's panic attack eh?

    Another perfect chapter.
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  • From ANON - Carly on December 06, 2012
    I was sitting in a Pei Wei reading that last chapter and burst out into tears. Beautiful.
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  • From ANON - dh_reader on December 06, 2012
    PS: I didn't comment on Teodora's first class because you already have great reviews about it but I still have to say: I was really moved by that part. I'm really sorry, I don't remember the name of the reviewer but he/she made a very good point: I also hope that Harry and Ron can have a therapy like this one. As well, I hope it'll help Ginny understand that Hermione suffered too. It's not a competition to know who has a right to complain or who suffered the most but Hermione did suffer and she earned her right to be a little selfish, I just hope Ginny will understand that through this first class.
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  • From ANON - dh_reader on December 06, 2012
    Did I say that last chapter was my favourite? Because I think I lied! I read this chapter twice and even now, it's hard to express why I love it so much.

    The Dividing Lines: the mystery around them is a good distraction from the surrounding post-war trauma. I like how you don't focus your whole plot on relationships and characters' inner battles, though I do love that about your plot too
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