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By : PrettyDesdemona

From ANON - lisha on March 17, 2013
Yayayayayayay youve made me so happy with the ending. This story was brilliant, might read it again because its beautiul. Can't wait for the sequel! And I love you too, you talented woman, you!
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From DB1 on March 17, 2013
@41. Sad that it has ended but happy there will be a sequel!! I loved this story and I am very happy with how you ended it. I think it's right that they didn't just rush into being together, that they spent years with other people first. It makes it seem more real, as everything does not always work out perfectly at the beginning. But it's sweet they found each other again after so many years!!

Looking forward to the sequel!!

DB
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From kadajclone on March 17, 2013
..There are no words...none at all that I can use to express how very much I have enjoyed this story, hell I don't even think I have any GIF's prepared. Although I have never been of fan of time skips of any length, it is a testament to your writing ability that I was okay with this one. I totally thought you would save an ending like this for the sequel and I am cringing at the thought of which of the Toravasi bit the dust as was hinted.

Now on to the full review:

WOW....ya blew me away, this was not the ending I saw coming. It was very bittersweet and yet so very real. While I personally think it was a low move for Draco to drop that bomb on Hermione so soon after he and Astoria decided to call it quits, he was not lying when he said it was honesty. Probably the most honest he has been on years. the subsequent end of Hermione and Ron's relationship was sad as well and all those months that she stayed with Isobel, was he able to see his kid? What were their other friends reactions? Did Ron go after Draco at work for the stunt he pulled? What did the children think about everything that was happening? There really is no right or wrong, villain or hero in this situation, and that is what has really drawn me to your story, the characters are so flawed and the things they do can range from extremely selfish to heroically selfless. Very surprised to see that Draco became an Auror and would love to see how he got in to the program and completed his heel-face turn for good. Good to see Isobel and Bo are still going strong and even got a kid....SQEEE!......Ahem I mean....cute.

While their may be some who feel this ending was a bit of a cop out and a bit rushed to get back to dramione, I felt it was perfect and a true personification of what this story has been about and I am sure you will delve more deeply into how things got to this point in the sequel. Btw, just watched the trailer............

You
MAGNIFICENT
Bitch

That was beautiful.

Now as for:

(Kain - So now for your special present! I really want to write a fic just for you, for making me laugh and giving me so much unyielding support. So please send me a request! I'll do any pairing, any timeline. I love you, thank you so much.)

First off, love you too

and second, I am terrible at using Hotmail so I will write my request on FF.net, if that is alright with you.

-It has been an honor to read this story and I wait patiently for the sequel-

P.S aha! I found a GIf:

the culmination of my thoughts on this story from start: http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ma0evu2nMo1ry10fwo1_500.gif

to Finish:http://25.media.tumblr.com/810f3377e074514e92cc3368470b8d5a/tumblr_mgxmvz3oXr1rpxkmvo1_500.gif

Ain't nobody going to surpass you.

Peace. http://25.media.tumblr.com/62fc994ea9a269d0c3fba950930a79e3/tumblr_mjs7dtutaU1s7g81uo1_500.gif
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From anaidra on March 17, 2013
OMG! And I couldn't believe when I started to read the last chapter and there she was...married to Ron. And as I continued to read I had tears falling down my face because it felt wrong. Their (Draco and Hermione's) relationship was special! They experienced so much together and ....and I don't know felt right. I never had the same felling about her and Ron. BUT I was happy they found each other in the end.

Anyway, I loved this story! You are so talented and I can't wait to read more from you and also for the sequel ;).

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From aisha on March 15, 2013
sorry sorry my dear I have not been reviewing for a while but I have been follwing your story as I am just a little bit obsessed. love it, never have I cried so much. So real and raw going to be very sad when it ends. :(
what will I do for my fix then?

much love
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From ANON - Anon on March 14, 2013
@Miss Potter, Ted Tonks is Nymphadora's father, not her son. Yes, Teddy LUPIN is very much still living.
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From ANON - Miss Potter on March 14, 2013
You said Ted Tonks is one of the dead at the beginning but now Teddy is liveing with Andromada Tonks can you please explain the discrepancy??
Thanks for mataching the chapters with songs i hlps give meaning to melencoly words.
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From Green_Eyed_Aunt on March 13, 2013
I think this is one of my favorite chapters. Hermione is finally taking care of Hermione. I love that you show so much strength in her just being herself. No extra-crazy blood magic, simply Hermione growing and healing. Yes, I want her to be with Draco - although I'll adore you regardless of how this story 'ends,' but I don't want her to be some zombified version of Hermione. She should be a happy, strong, healthy woman. Yes, I do feel that strongly about a fictional character's well-being. (Ok, maybe I'm projecting a bit...)

Plus, the imagery you used makes me wish Spring would hurry up and get here! (where I live, at least, we're still hanging out in Winterville)I want fresh air and to walk around barefoot outside! I want a good reason for a decent pedicure!

I also love that Isobel has finally figured out who she is and Hermione accepts her and loves her - that her admission didn't change anything about their relationship. Awesomesauce.

Kain - Your gifs had me busting up! I LOVE Once Upon A Time! Your reviews always have me in stitches.

Now, to the important details - I'm thinking Daiquiris. Who's with me?!
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From ANON - Cat on March 13, 2013
I love that you actually read and respond to the reviews. I'm always excited to see when you post. I feel like Hermione is coming full circle through all of this and that they all have grown so much. I love that we find out Draco tried, though its sad he feels like he failed because Ron did it first, it shows how different he really is. And Isobel is quite possibly my favorite character!
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From ANON - Aranel on March 13, 2013
I hate it when things end. It always makes me sad. I'm tempted to pull a doctor who and never read the last page so it can go on forever.
A harem! For me!? Oh, you shouldn't have!
I shall check out your Luna fan fiction simply because you're awesome and I'm kinda curious to see what could go down there.
Hermione and closure, that thing I never let her have. You've done a wicked crazy job making these characters come to life and for it all to come to a close like this is blowing my mind. Still holding on to some kind of hope for my wee lamb Draco, but you know best for your story. I expect I'll be crying with the last chapter since it will truly be the end for this version of hermione and the gang. I will miss them.
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From ANON - marymary on March 13, 2013
I love this story and I love your writing! And I often wish I could see what others have said because you're responses to them make me so curious! I can't wait for more of your creativity!
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From Bogarto on March 13, 2013
So you got me choked up at work reading the family reunion (granted I probably deserved it since I was reading it at work
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From kadajclone on March 13, 2013
This was the ultimate feel good chapter... Honestly if you ended it at this point I doubt anyone would mind.....But I am sure you would prefer to go out with a bang lol.

oh man, where do I even begin, this was simply heartwarming from start to finish, everyone coming together as one at the Burrow really felt like everything had been made right. People who were once enemies hanging out together and to top it all off Ron gave Hermione the best gift of all, her mom and dad. And don't even get me started on the Hermione and Isobel Interaction near the end:
http://media.tumblr.com/7c8d955f672d3b60fe4871a6d4ae1057/tumblr_inline_mjh2zaNFTd1qz4rgp.gif

http://media.tumblr.com/684902ae9ceb81883007b691bc0e71f7/tumblr_inline_mjh2zfx86s1qz4rgp.gif

sums up all of my feels for the emotional aspect of the chapter.

...NOW on to my girl Isobel.

Ya know in the back and my mind I just knew it........ that little thought in the back of my mind was at times going

"hmm could she be..."
or
"Oh yea, she totally is"

Honestly whether you know it or not, you are an expert on misdirection. I had thought that you would reveal that Isobel had a bit of a crush on Hermione from being saved by her, because lets be real:

http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m6bb09HMXY1qbmigs.gif

and the whole mystery suitor was just a front and then:

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From DB1 on March 11, 2013
@39. Sad that it didn't work for Blaise and Ginny but I'm glad that hermione and him could confide with one another and get therapised!!
Can't wait for more.

DB
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From ANON - kit on March 11, 2013
great chapter! I just can't figure out how everything is going to turn out...ah!!! i can't wait to read more, but at the same time I'm dreading it because in two chapters it is going to be all over. I'm glad that Hermione has agreed to go to therapy, along with blaise.
I'm especially looking forward to the trailer for Victim of the Fall.
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