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Reviews for Victim of the Fall

By : PrettyDesdemona
  • From ANON - dh_reader on November 29, 2012
    I like what you write. I miss HP and the way it ended - though I absolutely love JKR - left me with this unyielding feeling that something was missing.
    I wonder how Draco and Hermione will get together in this context but the way you're writing Hermione's character is really realistic. It feels right so I do hope you'll keep writing this story --- do I need to precise that I'm totally hooked?
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  • From deathraven on November 29, 2012
    I really like your story so far!! I do hope that in the next chapter or so that Hermione will go get her parents, I think she should, they should be there for her, she thinks she is sparing them but really she is making it harder and more painful to herself. KEEP IT UP!! Can't wait for your next update! Hopefully it will be soon, fingers crossed!
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  • From ANON - B on November 29, 2012
    Howdy.
    After reading the first few chapters, I am intrigued and can't wait to read more. I've enjoyed your approach so far, and your character for Hermione. I hope that you post again soon!
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  • From ANON - chester on November 28, 2012
    Loving this story!!!! I agree with the above reviews. This is what I imagined things would be after the war. No jumping up and down happy and going back to school happy. The loss and grief is so pervasive that kids have a hard time coping. They are kids who fought in a war for years! Anyway, I will stop now before I go on a rant. I am curious as to what is happening to Draco. I am also curious what will be the fallout between Hermione and Harry and Ron. I don't know if you plan to have Ginny and Hermione ever reconcile. Are you going to kill off Hermione's parents? Lots of questions only because I am impatient and really like where this story is heading. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Tori on November 28, 2012
    What a chapter, you know something I had this vision of Hermoine as a dark lady, and Draco her dark lord when she was thinking of the state of the Minstery of Magic, I feel like she'd be the type of person who'd be a fair dark lady to keep things in hand ya know? Because I feeeel that something has changed about Herm, and for all her knoweldge and courage there's always been a level of creative sylitherin to keep things balanced. I agree with the fact that humanity will continue to breed darkness due to prejudice nature, so why not counter it and retain control of said nature. Its a nice play on things. Ok my rammmblings went on far to long* tee hee* Chapter length was wonderful I was indeed content, though I wished for more I fell in love with Herms new home and loved how we saw draco run away, but for the most part, I wonder how he and his family are doing ya know, now that the war is over with, did his father buy his way out, is Delores still making laws, did nothing change? What lines have been blurred that a young man sent to fight evil at his age, that the death toll has been so high, that even after this war will people still cling to there own ways. When will it come to pass that men won't cling to there traditions of old and hold there fear as mass moments of confusion to allow a mad man like another Voldemort/half blood to once again to pull the wool over there eyes to make them see, or will it take the proper steps forward to embrace both past and future. Will Herm finally snap at Ginny and will Ginny finally break herself as she takes on the roles she taken. I would like to see the inner workings that make Hermonie Tick, and wonder if all a long she was the hero that was destined for greatness than harry potter ever was. Love ya bye

    Tori
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  • From ANON - Tori on November 28, 2012
    First off I have to say thank you! This story is a fresh breath of air for Her/draco story and post war story that follows your line of thinking and planing asures me of what a true ending would have consisted of. Though I wish the chapters where a bit longer I'm thankful for the continued comment to writing and posting the way you are so I'm not concern as there's something to look forward to at the end of the day. I would like to see how you write the other characters, I like how harry and ron turned out and even molly. The soul grabbing anguish is understandably real and tastefully done so I look forward to more. Plot wise I cannot wait to see how you continue to unweave the plight of the wizarding world after the war. Its all very exciting and I can't wait. I hope you like the review as I don't give many out cause I'm shy about how to tell someone about another's work, I don't like passing judgement on someone else cause its not fair but I hope you like this as I'm a teacher so awesome work kay!

    Tori
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  • From CafeAuLait on November 28, 2012
    I'm glad that you're going to take this story slow. I want to know what happened b/w her and Ron. Ugh, I would be sooo happy if you broke up Ginny and Harry, but I doubt you're going to do it. I'm sooo over reading about them in Dramione books.

    Looking forward to the next chapter.

    YAY, I found this story on ff.net, now I can follow it.
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  • From CafeAuLait on November 27, 2012
    You are off to a good start. I thought the writing was strong, descriptive, and fluid.

    So far, this seems like the type of story that would do well on ff.net. I would highly recommend you posting there as well if you want more reviews.
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  • From ANON - Jade on November 27, 2012
    This is a really good story. I was very in to it from the first line. I do hope you will continue it!!
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  • From pepperdoc on November 26, 2012
    I'm really looking forward to the next chapters!! What a great way to start!
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  • From ANON - ECM on November 26, 2012
    Love this already!
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