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By : PrettyDesdemona

From kadajclone on March 10, 2013
only because I just came by this image.

Harry and Hermione: http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m4cpqdhEeX1qg3rkjo1_500.jpg
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From ANON - tabitoo on March 10, 2013
Wonderful. Can't wait for the next one.
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From ANON - Aranel on March 10, 2013
If I had my way she would have a lot more problems than the war could ever dish out. All of which would be followed up with her brilliantly finding a way to fix it all and be with the man she loves at the end of it all. But yes... Everyone. Sexually dependant hermione just does it for me.
I can't believe this story is almost done... It's driving me crazy! I check the index every few hours to see if it is updated yet.
Now you know that having Zabini and hermione there at the end is gonna put thoughts in my head! But in all honesty I hope they are able to get help. I just really applaud this story and your ability to see from so many different perspectives. Okay. I have a rash and I need to stop typing and go to sleep! Awesome chapter!!!
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From ANON - anaidra on March 10, 2013
I dont even dare to guess how this will end... whether Draco and Hermione end up together or... (of course, I want them to be together :)).
You know, she can forgive some people so easily and with others it seems just.. like impossible. Well, with some it hurts more 'cause your feelings are so much intense I think.
Anyway, I love your story and cant wait for the next part!
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From ANON - Cat on March 10, 2013
I wish I had the energy to give this review the thought it deserves but I'm ever so tired so I shall once again thank you for allowing us to read your brilliance and say how much I love this story. I'm glad you still have more up your sleeve and that our dear Miione has decided to get some help, and that it was Blaise that is going with her since he's such a great character too! Okay off to dream land. Can't wait for more.
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From kadajclone on March 10, 2013
Got a birthday party to get to so this will be short I am afraid.

From start to finish this chapter made me react like this: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcd98cD7o41r4sdzx.gif
(I...I was literally outside doing this for like 5 minutes)

Now my dear, in regards to the Skype suggestion, I am afraid this FOF or as I have taken to calling it,this "fuckton of Fail" Laptop of mine would not be able to handle that....the lady who I have backing up the data on my previous computer STILL isn't even done lol. But rest assured...that one day

IT
WILL
HAPPEN.

much love, Kain

-waits patiently for next chapter-

P.S, Can't wait to see some jackass try to bully Isobel now that she has started to endear herself to the rest of the golden trio.Hermione was a good enough deterrent to bullying as it was and now that the Voldy scare is done, it's time to get back in the game and back to basics and now that Harry seems to like her despite her familial ties, people are really going to think twice about messing with her now.

P.P.S now that Voldemort has been put down for good, will the alleged sequel perhaps turn the focus back to the everyday lives of the Toravasi and how those in the school view them and whether or not anyone else supports what they are trying to do. Like say someone who has lost someone due to a death eater could see Isobel,Blaise and especially Draco's involvement as a slap in the face to what they lost and do something, while someone else perhaps say a Pure Blood fanatic could see it as a betrayal and try to undermine it.
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From ANON - HellYeah on March 09, 2013
Never bothered with reading this story, and BOY DO I REGRET THIS NOW. What a fucking brilliant read!
One of the best I have ever read. Seriously, read it in 3 days (Mind you, 3 days which I should have sopend working. so thanks for that ;) )
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From ANON - Kain on March 08, 2013
Yo yo yo!! Kain is back in the house. Funny story, literally on the day of your last update prior to this chapter I was writing my review for chapter 37....when my motherboard decided it had quite enough of my shit and decided to to die on me....so I am now using an inferior laptop and have to wait until tomorrow to get the data off of my old one to transfer here, so do forgive my lateness in getting my reviews out. double review time!!:

chapter 37: http://24.media.tumblr.com/b391669daae5e4bf444c32399e2760f9/tumblr_mjbcn4Fghv1s768dvo1_500.jpg

It was simply beautiful, I really wish I could say more, but my god from start to finish you nailed it. The memory flashes absolutely killed me...especially Susan's...for obvious reasons. Does it make me a bad person that I went "oh fuck yea Voldy, bout to school our girl Hermione on how the original dark lord handles shit"...only to laugh when it kind of fails lol. He showed that he was just as dangerous as he has always been, regardless of the body he is using. The scene where Hermione took his soul into her own body was so epically powerful. It was a perfect call back to Harry's first possession in order of the phoenix when she uses love and all her emotion to not only force him out but permanently END his ass. What makes it so awesome....is that Voldemort was put down for good....by a MUGGLEBORN. Poetic justice at it's finest. Draco draco draco....baby why do ya constantly fuck yourself over lol.

Chapter 38: Ahem first things first:

Of course. Isobel. Her best friend. Her soul mate.
http://24.media.tumblr.com/1d1c223a7d452dec9350ce5b6c37675b/tumblr_mjbfc8ASE11rm5pgwo1_500.gif

seriously though, I know I have cracked a few jokes about them hooking up if only because they would make the cutest pair, but their Friendship is simply too Beautiful for words. I would read an entire story just dedicated to them hanging out and being BFF's.

and If I learned anything from this chapter, it's that when properly motivated, Hermione

.Can
.Not
.Be
.Stopped.

She is called the brightest witch of her age for a fucking reason and when pressed will gladly show anyone why they should believe the hype. Her devotion to Harry and vice versa has always been one of my favorite things about Canon and
I am glad that you have shown it so strongly here. The thing I loved about them most was how natural it was, their was never a moment where shit got awkward between the them, they were buds...family. They would always have each others backs and if anyone ever gave either of them shit, they would bring the wrath of god on to that person. It just sucks that Harry is going to catch the shit storm for the things Voldy made him do but it is good too know that Hermione will stay at hi side through it all.

....And holy shit on a cracker....did..did Draco just throw a bone to Ron!!?!???
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m8t28cnW2p1rzz3r3o1_500.gif

Now as for the whole Dramione thing, It would honetly be a twit if they didn't hook up by the end of this story. And besides even if they didn't....there is always the sequel...wink wink.

Now in closing, Hermione dear in the immortal words of Hellboy:

"Your in love, Have a bear"

-waits patiently for next chapter-

P.S, I hate this inferior computer...do you have any freaking clue as to how long it took to type this when have of the key's stick lol!?!?!?!?

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From ayVrrtak on March 08, 2013
Good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens now that Harry is awake again. Also, please hunt Draco down and beat him with the stick he has shoved up his ass, because he looks lovely with Hermione.
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From ANON - lisha on March 07, 2013
I got really happy when Draco went to find Hermione and then you just destroyed my happiness with the ending omg. The suspense is killing me but I shall continue reading until the end, whatever the ending may be. :')
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From DB1 on March 07, 2013
@38. Getting excited to see how it ends!! But sad at the same time. I've enjoyed this story!!
DB
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From ANON - Cat on March 07, 2013
It was amazing, and yet not. Who would have thought a wheelchair would make such a difference, oh well. This chapter is amazingly tragic. I don't want this to come to an end even tho it must, hopefully you'll have something else up your sleeve. I don't know what else to say considering I am a little shocked as to how that whole thing worked out.....I guess I will wait and see.
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From Bogarto on March 07, 2013
I hope I didn't frustrate you with my worrying! I will say that even though I wouldn't be thrilled with the end result if they didn't end up together, that you still have written one hell of a story. I have never written more reviews to a story before this one and I've enjoyed reading it the whole way!

Oh, this pair is so broken. It almost seems like they are meant for each other because they are both so lost. I was happy to see Hermione make some progress and allow herself to think about her life's turmoils. It was as if the fact that Voldemort was still alive still was holding her and everyone else back even though for most of the time they didn't even know it. Once she purged his last remaining essence it has allowed them all the hope that they can move on.

I felt almost sick for Hermione when the burns were discovered. She already has scars and has endured so much pain, but the thought that her entire body could be scarred forever was such a sad thought. Her outer appearance doesn't doesn't define her, but no one deserves that. It was a big relief that the scarring will heal.

I did think that it would take some huge act of redemption for Draco to be forgiven. The story has had so many chaotic and hurt feelings all along that I didn't think cooler heads would ever prevail. It figures you would trip us up now and let honesty and calm come into the picture! I think that I am happy with Draco's remorse but he must still be broken inside. Neither one of them seems to know how to live their life now that their old ones have seemingly come to a close. I think I could deal with them not ending up together a little easier after their chat (though still hoping they can make it!). Still, even though they had a bit of closure from the recent fallout, it seems like they will still need each other moving forward. Maybe if they can start fresh with a clean slate they can learn to live their new lives together. I guess we will have to wait and see!

Thanks for the great writing again and I can't wait to read the conclusion!
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From ANON - Aranel on March 07, 2013
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From ANON - ideefixe77 on March 07, 2013
So I have been diligently following along since the beginning, but I willingly admit I am a horrible reviewer. This chapter, though, wrung it out of me. So emotional! Spectacular. I can't wait to see what happens. I truly love that this story is so much about Hermiones growth as a person through trauma and finding both strength and weakness on the other side. I love the complexity you have brought to this story. Thank you for writing.
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