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By : PrettyDesdemona

From ANON - tabitoo on March 07, 2013
"Love is selfish." Yes! That whole line you wrote about Love is so true it's epic. I've never heard or read it described that way but Yes...that's it. That should go up there with the most memorable quotes of all time!
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From ANON - Polfso on March 07, 2013
Victory is mine!!! I have finally caught up to the newest chapter truth be told I was worried that by the time I caught up the story would be over and I wouldn't be able to tell you just how much this story has consumed my life for the past week or so. Literally up till 3am reading it, reading in class just everywhere!! I really enjoy this story I like how they are still going to school but they are all adults love how you make the characters so human!!!!! Along my journey of catching up I had so many questions.....but I have forgotten all of them! Thanks so much for an awesome read ill be checking up for updates :)
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From Green_Eyed_Aunt on March 07, 2013
Kain, PrettyDesdemona - Genius. Both of you. Skype + booze. Seriously. I'm in love.

Now, the story - I'm going to have a coronary reading before this is over. I-N-T-E-N-S-E. I'm so blown away by your level of talent! Love, Love, Love! I also noticed that, between this site and ff.net, you've got over 1000 reviews! FANTASTIC! I'm so glad others are enjoying it as much as I am!

The idea of Hermione ending up with the giant squid - What the Jolly Fuck?
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From ANON - Cat on March 06, 2013
well now that I'm caught up on this story I feel like I can respond, first of all sorry for not reviewing I was on a much needed vacation. I was so excited to come back and have a few posts to read. I have to admit, I didn't see alot of this coming which is always a good thing. Though, I'm kind of over Hermione's thought of Draco's betrayal....we all make mistakes, and really does she know for sure how he meant it? Maybe he thought it was the only way to get her to snap out of Voldyshorts ideas. I just want him to step up and be like so when did you get a job in a court because obviously you do nothing but judge. And the whole Ron thing, love him he's a sweetheart, but gah he needs to not be around her. I'm glad Ginny is okay and kinda hoping Harry is though, I liked Blaise and Ginny (tho I mean comeon his bad memory was her looking at him as if it was his fault......if he was truly not on anyside he wouldn't have been there at all or felt bad at all). Can't wait to read more!
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From ANON - kit on March 06, 2013
I'm so sorry for not having reviewed the past few chapters. I always look forward to reading this story and since I have been away for a while, I was able to read 2 chapters. The latest chapter had me captivated. Hermione had so many obstacles to overcome and I'm glad she was able to. I liked seeing the memories of the tovarasi. Very interesting to see all that they had to deal with. What I can't get over is what Draco said to Hermione when she was possessed. I almost thought her soul would be corrupted and that the wizarding world would be in trouble. I'm hoping that he really doesn't still worship Voldermort and instead acted that way to help Hermione. Can't wait to read about how their relationship continues....IF any sort of relationship continues! But really there has to be. I'm not particularly fond of a ron/hermione romance. haha
There is just so much to say and question. How is Harry gonna recover if he survives? Will Harry and Ginny end up together or will Ginny stay with Blaise?!! It'd be quite unfortunate for blaise, if ginny gets back with harry, since I think he has grown to really care for her. Thanks for the updates! Cant wait to read the next chapter.
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From Green_Eyed_Aunt on March 06, 2013
I don't think I took a breath the entire time I was reading that chapter! Your writing in this one is so visual! Does anyone else here wanna slap the piss out of Draco and tell him to pull his head out of his ass?!
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From DB1 on March 06, 2013
@37. Wow it's taken me a day or so to catch up on with the story. Love it!! Very clever idea with Harry and voldemort n update soon.

DB
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From ANON - tabitoo on March 05, 2013
Excellent, she did it. Poor Draco....at least now Hermione has closure and she has no question as to where Draco's loyalty lies. Sniff, but hey I always liked Ron. :)
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From ANON - Tori on March 05, 2013
Oh pretty desmona how we love you so! I've been so busy and this is my first time reviewing in a very long time and reading in fact I've had to go back 6 chapters to read and I'm blown away by the intensity of the characters and the growth of the plot. I've been a busy bee starting up my company and doing art work its been so busy. But I am very happy and enjoying this and can't wait to see what happens next. Trust me you'll have more reviews I believe in you and your writing. Oh check out intistudi0.deviantart.com, and Been working on so much and I lost my uncle and grandma as well in in 2 months. So its been a hard time.

O child
My gifts have been tainted
touched by screaming darkness
revealed through rose glasses
thy sight blinded by power
will thou seek such taint again
O child o child...

Tori
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From ANON - lisha on March 05, 2013
This is getting too emotional for me. If they dont get back together Im going to combust. Love this story so much. Please continue!
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From ANON - Mara on March 05, 2013
Wow! This fanfic is really amazing! I'm so happy for finding it! Can't wait to See what's gonna happen! I can't help but fins Draco quite undeserving after the later happenings... I wonder how is he going to redeem himself.
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From ANON - Aranel on March 05, 2013
I always wondered if hermione would someday see that if she was in charge, the world would just run better. Wow, that chapter took a lot out of me. How is Harry gonna talk his way out of this one? He possessed his ex girlfriend! That's a deal breaker. So happy to finally read this chapter though. I've been moving and it has been hellish. It's nice to read quality writing and just relax then get riled up, then relax again lol. Can't wait for more.
Oh and WTF Draco?!? Till the very end he is the boundless dip shit. My glob boy... Pick a side...you know what, no. He has picked a side. He has chosen and now he has to live with it. No more mudblood fanny for him. Okay, now I wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - Bogarto on March 05, 2013
Wow, what an epic chapter!

I liked the spell flicking, it's just a shame that it was followed up with her making a mistake. The moment of Voldemione gave a perfect picture in my mind of Fellowship of the Ring. I could picture the insanity and raw power in that moment. The line being similar just cemented it...great moment!

So, I thought that Draco would need to hit rock bottom but I didn't think it would happen this way. I never thought he truly betrayed her or anyone else up to this point. He was a scared little kid that deserved an ass kicking before, but betrayal had seemed too harsh. And now...I guess I hoped that his rock bottom moment would occur before the ultimate conflict to give him that chance of redemption. Now that he has done it just before the end, I don't know how he can recover. Honestly I don't know how to feel about his action since this truly was a betrayal. At first I thought he might be doing it on purpose to help ground her or something...obviously his reaction after the fact proves he's more of a coward then I ever imagined.

I find myself nervous that the story will end without any redemption for him. I am a hopeless romantic at heart and absolutely hate it when my favored pair don't make it together in the end. There have been a couple novel style Dramione stories I have read in the past that have ended with them parted and I usually am in a funk for days after. That may sound odd but I think it is a testament to the well written stories and characters that it would have that kind of effect. I know for sure that I will feel the same if this one ends that way. I guess now I will try to brace myself for that possibility since I just can't see a path for Draco's redemption. I still have a sliver of hope that you will think of a way somehow. Either way it has been a fun ride and thanks for taking us on it!
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From ANON - anaidra on March 05, 2013
You know, sometimes I wish you'd let us peep inside Draco's mind. It'd be sooo helpful ;). Well, I guess I will have to wait and see what will happen, how much you will tell us know... I'm sure you have perfect timing for everything :).
Look forward to reading more.
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From kadajclone on March 05, 2013
Have work, will read and post review in a couple of hours.......And yes I do read you replies lol ;}. You me and Mist are drinking this upcoming Saturday btw.
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