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Reviews for Victim of the Fall

By : PrettyDesdemona
  • From ANON - Bella on February 22, 2013
    I LOVE, ADORE, THIS STORY!!! I just want to know if draco and germione will ever get back together like ever because its so sad that Draco's first reaction was to go back to Voldemort and i think he is very scared that if he does't go back then voldemort/hary will take her away and i feel like hermione needs a vacation or something because she is stressing her sel out with everything. i think they should both stop take a second to breathe and think about what they want for themselve before making any hasty decisions, i really love your story it so different and original its definately going to my top.
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  • From ANON - lisha on February 21, 2013
    draco has been my favourite character in harry potter and when something bad is happening to him I am not happy, haha. I just want him and hermione to make up. i love this story a lot though.
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  • From Green_Eyed_Aunt on February 21, 2013
    Sidenote: I believe Ani Difranco owes you some thanks. Because of your story, I'm actually starting to listen to her music. :)
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  • From Green_Eyed_Aunt on February 21, 2013
    Phew! Seriously, your writing is so good that I can actually feel my body tensing up as I read! I'm so stoked that you said only 2 more days. I'm starting to love you even more. Seriously, completely addictive. I work full time and I'm a university student and I'm having a hard time focusing on my schoolwork because my mind keeps wandering back to your story! Keep it up, you! I hope you are incredibly proud of the work you've done, it is excellent!
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  • From kadajclone on February 20, 2013
    As always loved the chapter but:

    "Kingsley
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  • From ANON - Anon123 on February 20, 2013
    I've been lurking for a long time on this site, reading and not reviewing, but this story is so wonderful that I feel the need to review for the first time ever. I really love the way you've developed the characters, and I've never felt a connection to a story in this way. I'm not sure what else to say, except please keep going, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on February 20, 2013
    Thanks for posting again and so soon. Nice! If, I were Hermione I would have had a breakdown. Draco, Ron, Harry, and fighting Voldemort "Again"...too much. Poor girl, talk about stress.
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  • From Oishiinam on February 20, 2013
    I have caught up and all I can really say is wow! The depth you have reached with these characters has surpassed all of my expectations! I find myself really feeling bad for both Draco and Ron, they both love her, but both are just so...wounded...I hope that when this is all over there is healing for them both, as well as everyone else. I have found that I just couldn't stop reading, much like with Rowling's original works. Through reading this I am FINALLY understanding what everyone sees in Draco, beyond his obvious abilities as a white ferret! I really hope in the end that They find happiness together!
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  • From ANON - Aranel on February 20, 2013
    Oh lookie here, Ronald putting his big boy pants on and prancing about. Lol, I need to stop. My hate for Ron has just gone too far. I never try to see things from his weird ginger point of view. Anyhow, glad he is handling this so well. He really does care for Harry, love a good bromance. Oh Harry, why so obsessed with hermione? I hope for naughty reasons.
    Ginny is such a hopeful love, poor Zabini baby. He'll be okay. Can't wait to see this thing climax. And oh my goodness Draco, my wee lamb, pick a side! Gawd that is just so slytherin. No alliance means they can exploit the side that wins. Man...I keep correlating Harry potter characters to surgeons (damn you grey's anatomy). Hermione would so be a brain surgeon or a cardiac surgeon, Draco would be a orthopaedic surgeon, Harry would be in trauma, Ron would be in general, Zabini would be in plastics hehehe. I have problems...
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  • From ANON - Cat on February 19, 2013
    Ron defending Draco? Alright who replaced him with a robot? Tho Hermione needs to take a chill pill and or lay off the bitchieo's.
    Post soon, I want to know how this plays out!!!!
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  • From ayVrrtak on February 18, 2013
    I was not expecting the horcrux twist, but definitely good. I can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully Ron can talk some sense into Hermione, and she stops being pigheaded in regards to Draco cause they're cute together.
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  • From ANON - lisha on February 18, 2013
    i hate you.
    this has to be the wirst cliff hanger ever.
    and if draco and hermione dont make up I think I might die.
    this is a briliant story though.
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  • From ANON - Aranel on February 18, 2013
    Oh Draco bear, still so afraid of standing up for what's right, so afraid of failure and rejection.
    Hermione and him are both being right little bitches right now aren't they? Gotta love a crying Draco. Wanna drink those tears.
    I thought of another song. Mumford and sons thistles and weeds. Great song that is.
    Ron and Draco in the same building and they aren't killing each other. Nice.
    So glad you had a nice break and that you can now do regular postings again. Only seven more to go?!? Wow cool. :D
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  • From Oishiinam on February 18, 2013
    I just finished chapter 9 and have to say that it was so well written and very touching. I am sitting here drying my eyes as I type this and finding myself looking forward to the rest. In keeping with the theme...Thank you!
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on February 18, 2013
    OMG, Ron and Draco in the same room....How am I going to be able to wait an entire week for another post?
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