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By : PrettyDesdemona

From FaeChild on January 26, 2013
I'm just so in love with this story. And like I said in my first review, you have converted me into a Dramione fan. But only for this fic. I have found no other fic yet that has done Dramione the justice that you do it. And I cried, like, seriously cried, when Isobel told Hermione that she loves her. I used to have to friendships like that. I might still have a couple of them floating around, but it is usually me calling my friends and telling them 'I love you' just so they don't forget that I'm here for them. Which is kinda depressing in a way. I'm glad to see that Draco and Hermione are going to have some real fun in the next chapter, I hope... *crosses my fingers, closes my eyes and wishes hard* I trust where you're going with this!
I'm going to wait very patiently for your next update!
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From aisha on January 26, 2013
Loved this chapter so sweet, very curious as to what is going to happen next Blaise and Ginny?! :O Hope Draco and Hermione get through the night with out either one of them self destructing. Wonder how Draco will deal with showing his dark mark. So excited can't wait.
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From ANON - Cat on January 26, 2013
I think "awwww" sums it up pretty well! can't wait for more
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From ANON - Aranel on January 25, 2013
Oh snap! Is my Draco baby gonna get some?!? I think I can handle this level of fluff, so long as its swiftly followed by a good level of kink. I always wondered what reasonable Draco would be into. Dawh! Some one making you feel all lovely inside! That's awesome, best wishes to you both.
Ginny getting her rebound on I see, nice. Still don't like her, the evil Mary-sue. Finally found out why I hate her, long story.
Harry Ron and now George are scaring me... Hmmm...kinda looking forward to it.
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From deathraven on January 25, 2013
Hello my darling mistress, i know that i have been away for awhile please do not take that as disinterest on the contrary im still very much in love with your story!! Where should i begin?? Well scary Harry i mean my o my have you created a creepy little shit head if you dont mind me saying. Love where youre headed with Draco and Hermione!! I do hope that you dont throw them any major curve balls, and screw that auror bitch, skank in my opinion!! When are they going to take their potions.. soon i hope, maybe they can finally do the dirty while they are under the influence as it were! :-) wishing hoping praying to my goddess that you'll update soon!! I check everyday just so you know my mistress so, please dont keep your loyal subject wait for too long :) as i've said before ill be here just waiting...waiting....waiting for the next chapter!!!
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From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on January 25, 2013
Well...that was not a nice place to stop. HA. Anywho, I was kind of hoping for Luna and Blaise not Ginny and Blaise...hint hint
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From ANON - Kain on January 25, 2013
Work is once again a bitch, so i must keep this one short.

first things first, Isobel's "I love you" to Hermione

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sorry, was in the process of crying like a girl in the corner of my room while screaming into my pillow. I could read an entire story about just those 2 interacting and being besties. And once again I totally thought that when Isobel alluded to liking someone else you were gonna reveal some latent bi-curious feelings she might have for Hermione but then ya pulled the rug out from under me and had her state it was an Auror. Which in and of itself would be quite interesting given her background and most Auror's aren't exactly fond of anyone with death eater affiliations be them former or otherwise, or familial. I mean hot damn I totally thought I was going to hate this girl when you introduced her since she came off as a bit of a bitch but now I adore her and she seems to have never even been a bigot but just went with the flow. I know you said that this story would be from Hermione's perspective only but is there any chance that when you complete this that you could write a few short stories detailing how the other tovarasi have changed as the story progressed? And I don't know what it is about the girl but something about Isobel has me intrigued, she has become an 'ensemble dark horse' to me. I am also curious, is she still being bullied? It's no secret that Sytherins are kind of the school dicks/douches/" that asshole who forgot to buy extra toilet paper despite it being his turn that week and you having just downed a full box of turbo lax on a very very foolish dare......God damn it marcus".......ahem so it goes to say that she might have dabbled in being a bitch in her early years and is now on the receiving end of such treatment. As I stated in a previous review they have shown so much character development but since it's all from Hermione's perspective it's still up in the air on how it came to be, which is why i asked about possible short stories. Isobel's and Blaise's are the ones I would be most stoked to read. It is also sad to see the Golden trio so broken at the moment. Hell it was there love for each other and the intense bond they had that saved them from death on an almost monthly to yearly bases. One is now AWOL, the other is either insane or being influenced and the other has decided to move on.

A Half-Blood

A Muggleborn

And a Pureblood

There relationship alone was the ultimate fuck you to Voldemort's cause and all Pureblood propaganda. I think TV tropes.org said it best:

"They are closer than siblings, and even closer than lovers. Their loyalty to each other is absolute, even if they spend most of the text arguing over something petty. Come a real problem, and they are back together again".

Shit just doesn't seem to work without them holding it together. Now I completely adore the tovarasi and the concept behind it and I understand how much the they have helped her move forward in her life and are unquestionably good for her, but they have a way's to go before they can surpass what came before. Caring for each other is one thing,being ready and willing to die for the other is another.

-waits patiently for update-
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From ANON - Gremlin87 on January 23, 2013
Just wanted to say that I think this is a great story! I think your portrayals of the characters are really realistic and I love how they are developing together! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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From aisha on January 22, 2013
I'm not usually an agnst fan goes ages my nature, but I love this story so much. It's so raw and seems so natural after all the characters have been through in the books. Can not wait for the next chapter :) Xx
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From ANON - carly on January 20, 2013
go Hermione!! I love how real and believable your characters are . you never cease to wow me!
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From ANON - anaidra on January 20, 2013
I am glad Hermione was not mad at Draco. Sometimes it's good to analyse things just like she does. ;)
I like it that Draco can stay calm and say what he thinks and that he is looking out for Hermione. And I think it was kind of understandable he wouldn't forgive himself for the way he reacted....I don't know, it's just like him.
Oh, and poor Hermione! It must be awful to realize you lost your best friend. And what a way to lose him. I wonder what is wrong with Harry...look forward to reading what you will come up with. :)
Anyway, good chapter.
One more thing, I like it that you reply to reviews. It's nice of you.
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From ANON - Aranel on January 20, 2013
This chapter really touched me, hermione's depression quite mirrored my own recent depression. Grieving is sometimes really hard to do, to let go of something lost and truly move on in your life. It's not an easy task... Luckily, the the sickly in the head, sexual therapy works wonders so if we can get that tasty ball rolling. Oh my sweet broken Draco baby, can't wait to see him come apart. I wish I wasn't so impatient, really wanna enjoy chapters like this. I need to study this kind of character development for my own stories. Lovely work from you per usual. I am in love with how patient her friends are being with her. It does wonders for a person to be able to work through things and not be told "just get over it". Is it bad that I just don't care about how Ginny is feeling? I'm happy that she is being a good friend but I just can't bring myself to invest emotionally in Ginny. Such a strange character, I can never seem to fully understand her...
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From ANON - Cat on January 20, 2013
I was once told that I'm a master at masking my feelings and glossing over my own emotional needs, but damn is Hermione more like that than anything else I'm just glad she finally cried for her past and for herself. I wanted to slap Max for that scene I mean common Oh yeah I really dont mind blood status even tho I just spewed how she's not worthy. bologna. And how Hermione is angry the like eh mox nix. Like no, I'm sorry I get you're just coming to yourself again after a wee bit of a comatose state but seriously. Sorry....rant....anyway I'm excited to see how you'll answer my other questions and glad that Hermione is finally taking some time to work on herself internally and that it was Draco who made her see that she can't just gloss over the present with views of the past. She needs a good cry to clear her head and I mean common what better place to be than in Draco's lap, even if its just for comfort. Here's hoping it pushes them even further together, as long as he accepts that she really isn't mad at him. I just want to shake them both and make them see how stubborn they're being. I'm excited to see if you do have everyone together for the night its such a fun idea.

Oh and sorry for my dutchy side coming out (mox nix means it doesnt matter in pa dutch if you didn't know) but most stories don't get me that riled up.

Can't wait for more!
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From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on January 20, 2013
I DO like this chapter. Thank you for writing it. I'm really scared for Harry though.
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From FaeChild on January 19, 2013
I really gotta quit reading this right after you post a chapter >.>.... Only because I'm stuck having to wait until the next one comes out to read more about Hermione.... Yay! Hermione's gonna be okay, though. That's a relief. Thank you for this chapter, I'm -patiently- awaiting the next one!!
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