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Reviews for Victim of the Fall

By : PrettyDesdemona
  • From ANON - scarlet on February 27, 2014
    omg this feels so real, your hermione feels the realest I have read
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  • From ANON - scarlet on February 27, 2014
    i want a flat like that lol and where was crookshanks all the time
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  • From ANON - scarlet on February 27, 2014
    omg this is surprisingly good
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  • From tsita on January 23, 2014
    Never in my fanfic reading years have I been so comitted or conected to a story. I cried, I laughed, I had to take 15 min breaks cause it was getting really intense to keep reading but then the suspense would be too much and I had to see what happend next! You are beyond spectacular in writing. Thank you for sharing an amazing fanfic that was so enjoyable to read.
    The only thing I wondered about was what happened to Noah and the other first years. I thought they would come back and help Hermione with an innocent point of view on one of her problems but they disappeared.

    Thank you again for this incredible story and I'll keep an eye out for the sequels you promised. Good luck!
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  • From ANON - mamabear on August 17, 2013
    I really *never* review anything, but I had to tell you, the line "It eased the tension between her shoulder blades and soothed the angry little girl that had been running around in the back of her mind for months, setting everything in there on fire." is *really* awesome. :-) I love this story so far.
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  • From ANON - BELLATRICX on August 09, 2013
    Omg I felt the emotions and the heart break at the end of the 38th chapter. I could literally feel what she was feeling as Draco left her...how love is selfish and you stay with someone even though you know that you are no good for them and they are no good for you. You don't always leave someone because you want to, you leave them because you don't know what else to do. Gosh, this chapter seriously hit home, wow. You are truly a gifted writer, knowing how to really get in touch with a person's humanity, emotions, thoughts and behaviors. I will continue to follow your stories in the future. Thank you for creating such a wonderful and descriptive fanfic.
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  • From FaeChild on May 04, 2013
    I feel sad. I'm not angry that the story is over, it was a beautiful story. I feel sad because I have just witnessed the end of something beautiful.... I promise, you're on my list of favorite writers as of right now.
    And I had a question, can I borrow your beta? Seriously, I'm stuck.
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  • From FaeChild on May 03, 2013
    I feel so horrible. You probably think I abandoned you. My last review was way back on chapter 28 or 29. I'm still around, I was just working and I had a free moment to breathe and I was wondering what was going on with this story, so here I am! Anywho, just finished chapter 30, must say that I loved it! Can't wait to continue reading. I'll save up all my review thoughts until I get through to the latest chapter, which is 41, I believe!
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  • From ANON - SL on April 17, 2013
    I do particularly enjoy how the story cleverly weaves between the canon ending and its epilogue. I also like the (somewhat) ambiguity of the ending: yes, HG went back to seek DM. But did they really manage to stay together? Could HG really accept DM's possible ultimate betrayal in extreme circumstance, and really trusted him, no matter how much she wanted him ?
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  • From ANON - miss potter on March 22, 2013
    I found the video ok it was gr8!!
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on March 18, 2013
    I liked it. I really loved the direction it took and how you kept to the story line of the original. Great story! I hope to read more of your work soon.
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  • From UniciaScout on March 18, 2013
    Really loved the story, just amazing!!
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  • From Green_Eyed_Aunt on March 18, 2013
    I'm having such mixed emotions right now. I LOVE the way you ended this story! I'm sad that it's over!

    Ok, down to business. I do love that you incorporated some of the original epilogue. I love the poem you used in Draco's truth. I think it was perfect that you explained how Hermione had honestly been feeling about her marriage for a while, instead of "Well, everything's fantastic, but I'm leaving you for Draco." It was great that she took some time after she left Ron to get her head on straight instead of obsessing about a possible future with Draco. It gives their future a stronger foundation than just jumping in the day she decides to end it with the father of her children. Brilliant.

    The way you built this story is amazing. Your notes about the inspiration for the Dividing Line made me laugh so hard - but it was an amazingly original piece in the plot - almost a character in itself!

    I'm not going to lie, your character development was so thorough that, even being a ginger myself, (yeah, guilty) I didn't once feel bad about pulling for Draco. This is the first Dramione story I've read, so I was surprised how badly I wanted them to work out!

    Can't wait to read more of your genius, miss! Though, I won't be selfish - you deserve a lovely vacation.

    Enjoy your break, although I'm sure you'll have marvelous story ideas floating around in your head all the while. :)

    We'll chat soon Love!
    ~Green_Eyed_Mist~

    Kain - You are a reviewing prodigy. Seriously, don't ever stop. When I get notice that there's a new chapter, two things come to mind, "Yay, can't wait to see what PrettyDesdemona does with this story!" and, "I'm so stoked to see what Kain has to say!" Your GIFs are legendary.
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  • From ANON - Carly on March 17, 2013
    You are beautiful and wonderful and I can't wait for the sequel. Rest up and relax. Thank you for everything and the trailer.... Holy fuck.
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  • From ANON - kit on March 17, 2013
    The final chapter was amazing!! I'll admit, I was a bit disappointed at the beginning when everything turned out to be just like the original epilogue but I am very much satisfied now. Great job of putting a little twist to the original epilogue, making the relations much more realistic.
    I did feel bad for ron though...hermione divorced him at such a nice moment, son playing in the park after getting some ice cream. harsh.
    I can not wait to read the follow-up story to this. It will definitely be worth the wait though. The final chapter just left me with more questions...ah!! who died? what situation a year ago? What happened to that one girl who helped ron fine hermione's parents? These are all questions that I am sure you will address in the next story.
    I find it so sweet and cute that your family read over your stuff, especially having your dad read over chapter 29.

    well, now I am off to watch the trailer!! :D
    Again, thanks for this amazing story!!
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