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Reviews for Alpha

By : bookworm810
  • From ANON - mckey on December 08, 2012
    Interesting concept! Cant wait to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - Kate on December 08, 2012
    I like this story can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Clara on December 08, 2012
    Very nice set up.

    People I'd like to see Harry with(dom)are Fleur, Tonks, Sirius, Remus, Kingsley but that's just my opinion.

    Please update soon
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  • From djaddict on December 08, 2012
    *Chuckles*

    Oh, this is going to be fun!
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  • From despairs on December 08, 2012
    Typically i'm a Slash reader, i love the Yaoi. And i have a feeling that Harry will be given at least one female mate, not just males. But i'm glad that i read this first chapter, i found it very interesting. Good luck with your story, have fun! =D
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  • From ANON - Seliki on December 08, 2012
    I am so excited this is looking so good!! This is looking to be a really great story, I can't wait!!
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  • From ladilyndi on December 08, 2012
    I almost passed this over as I prefer plot accented with sex rather than the other way around. However, as I was bored, I read it and I'm certainly glad I did. What a great premise and I hope there will be more to the story than reading about a bunch of bunnies. I look forward to seeing what you do with this story. Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Kain on December 08, 2012
    Alright....ya got my interest piqued. I'm very interested in seeing a possible Yuri pairing....perhaps Susan and Hermione? ;D

    And I believe another reviewer brought it up, but how would a Muggleborn child feel being taken from his or her family? I understand it's for there own good but i doubt anyone would be happy about it.

    Awesome start, Mpreg and yaoi isn't usually my thing and i usually stick to yuri but i dabble in reading these types every now and then.
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  • From Woodlandspirit on December 08, 2012
    Great story! Can't wait for more, update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Kazumi-sama on December 08, 2012
    This is a very interesting story. I can't wait for more.
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  • From bloodshound on December 08, 2012
    what a fascinating approach... and you've explained it all, laying it out clearly so there's very little confusion (though wouldn't the mb's resent being essentially ripped away from their family? unless the parents in Q were obliviated but then what do u do with the kid... especially if the kid had siblings who also showed magic? or is it more a case of essentially moving out early?
    how do they keep the kids from knocking each other up if they're going at it like bunnies? do they have counseling or something for those who might have some ingrained hang ups or have kinkier than 'normal' sexual appetites? taking the kid from their parents at 14/ 15 doesn't erase the previous 13/14 years of raising.
    at any rate, there were a few typos in both words and names so keep an eye on that. nothing kills a good story faster than bad spelling/grammar.
    that being said, this sounds very interesting and i look forward to seeing more.
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoenix on December 08, 2012
    I absolutely adore the premise of this story-if only life was so simple as to have a ritual to sort out your preferences! I also like how you gave a similiarity between the headdmaster, the minister and Harry: that is a lovely bit of symmetry. Please do not wait too long to update.
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