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By : Talented_Mrs_Lupin
  • From DB1 on March 11, 2013
    @31 aww severus is adorable when nervous and scared

    DB
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  • From ANON - SL on March 11, 2013
    What a cute story - thank you! I feel like the story is at a crossroad: it could get wrapped up pretty soon (Ch. 30), but it also has potential of stirring the plot further.
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  • From demonsangel on March 10, 2013
    First off, I think a sequel would be a great idea. It's like a second chapter of their lives. Second, poor Sev, I think what he needs right now is a lot of comfort and reassurance about both Hermione and the child. Though I think it should happen fairly fast as the first few days/months are very important for a baby when it comes to it's parents. Well, the first years as well, but that is beside the point. I liked the explanation of the Malfoy line as well as how Veela's came into existence and evolved. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 10, 2013
    Nice update! I was moved by his crying, but disheartened by his lack of care for his son. :-( I hope one day he understands how awful that was to say. Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From guiltypleasure on March 10, 2013
    So just to make sure, was Lucius able to bring her back or was that the work of Venus.

    I forgive, but did you really need to make Severus suffer like that? That poor man has been through enough in my book.

    Tristan Severus Snape, lovely.


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  • From demonsangel on March 10, 2013
    "It's a veela thing." lol such a flippant Malfoy answer. I knew you wouldn't kill Hermione off entirely! Glad to see I was right because that probably would have killed Sev. Clearly he was being honest when he said he does not share easily. I think that no matter how much he comes to love his son, Hermione will always mean more to him. Great chapter! Love the twist with Lucy and Aphrodite.
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  • From ANON - jenny on March 10, 2013
    thank you for writing this. I have read this and think your doing a great job. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From demonsangel on March 09, 2013
    *throws a cookie at you* Yes, that is n evil spot to end lol. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From guiltypleasure on March 09, 2013
    "May be a sad one?"

    I'm not saying anything until I read the next chapter, I "may" forgive you and I "may" not.

    :D
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 08, 2013
    Sorry for the lack of reviews, but it's hard to do when reading on your phone. I am still reading and enjoying. I love his nerves, his love, and his loss of composure. And, I loved his instant proposal. They are simply lovely. :-) I em also really enjoying the friendship of Tonks, Narcissa and Hermione. Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From guiltypleasure on March 08, 2013
    So glad he did and I love his conversation with Remus and Lucius.

    I am surprised at Lucius and hope that he doesn't make Draco uncomfortable. A child is still your child no matter what. Unconditional love should not just be for your dogs.

    Thanks for the update. :D
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  • From ANON - Snow Queen on March 08, 2013
    I loved these last two chapters! The slice-of-life feel of them worked well and I loved the conversations between Hermione, Narcissa, and Tonks.

    I'm very happy to see that Snape finally proposed to Hermione, since it was about time he did that. I'm looking forward to your next update.

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  • From demonsangel on March 07, 2013
    *laughs* Great chapter. Sev does realize that babies don't actually get "food" from the mom right....just nutrients? o.O All well.
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  • From ANON - ruby on March 07, 2013
    My thoughts are I agree with Snape. She shouldn't have been moving the stuff around without his input.
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  • From MidnightLilly on March 07, 2013
    Geez I would think they would be sore after having sex several times a day.
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