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By : Talented_Mrs_Lupin
  • From demonsangel on March 04, 2013
    That went exactly as I expected it ^^; Sev panicked. He needs to grab her, cling to her and just yeah...not let go. Let her know how scared he is, and that he does love her, he's just terrified. I hope she doesn't terminate though, I think that would kill both of them. I mean, she is panicked at the moment too, but look at how she reacts over every little thing involving the loss or abuse of a life. It would kill her in a sense. Anyways, great chapter, can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Iheartsnape on March 04, 2013
    I've been dying to know how severus would take the news! Personally I think hermione and severus should be apart for a while, but how are they going to overcome people finding out? What consequences are ahead for the couple when the news is out? Anxiously awaiting for further chapters and thank you for writing an amazing story.
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  • From Mrs_HH on March 04, 2013
    He's just in shock. I think she should certainly walk out but it should be sorted quickly. whoever she goes to should tell her he's in shock and whoever he speaks to should shout some sense into him and make him realise he is good enough to be a father. But this should be decided within a couple of days (next chapter) Perhaps there should be a scare and hermione ends up in the infirmary with a risk of her losing the baby and he's so worried her and gets protective of the baby too.
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  • From Hardygirl133 on March 04, 2013
    I vote you keep them apart for like 1 or 2 months... Enough time for them to wallow, and for Lucy and Remmy to tell Sevvy he's being a complete arse.... That way you can kill like 5 birds with one stone lol

    Ps
    LOVE LOVE your stories!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cat on March 04, 2013
    As much as having them be apart would add drama, i'm casting my vote that they should be together.
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  • From ANON - April on March 03, 2013
    Such a great story! I wonder who Ron will react to Serverus claiming Hermione publicly.
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  • From ANON - Snow Queen on March 03, 2013
    I loved the "Remus' Memory" chapter. It was really well-done and you wrote Remus and Tonks beautifully. You should consider writing a Remus/Tonks story in the future since you write them brilliantly and you managed to maintain the spirit of both characters in your writing.

    I'm also pleased to see the progress of Snape and Hermione's relationship. I'm now eagerly waiting to see how they'll both react to their shared news. It's also very amusing to read about how some of the people who are close to them either suspect or have figured out the source of Hermione's illness. I

    Keep up the great writing. Also, thank you for giving us peeks into the relationships of the other characters, since I find that it keeps things interesting in your story.
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  • From demonsangel on March 03, 2013
    Well, now two people know lol. I hope Hermione finds out soon before something happens. I also hope Sev isn't mad at her. I mean, it takes two..Nice to see Tonks is still the tough little thing that she is. I almost feel sorry for that man...almost lol Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Annie on March 03, 2013
    Love the story. I assume the story is headed towards a pregnant Hermione storyline. Is it wrong that a large part of me wants Remus to be the new daddy?
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  • From DB1 on March 03, 2013
    @21. Me thinks hermione might be pregnant. Update soon

    DB
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 02, 2013
    Thanks for the update! I wonder who will figure it out first. lol Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From Bawetta on March 02, 2013
    Somebody forgot about contaception? ;-)
    Great story, keep going. Maybe another bit of HG/SS/LM?
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  • From demonsangel on March 02, 2013
    Great chapter! Did you make Hermione pregnant? That is the only thing I can think of for her sickness lol. I think Molly knows too...anyways, I'm glad Sev is willing to talk to her! So much was announced at dinner geeze, It's a wonder they aren't all drunk off their ass lol. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From demonsangel on March 01, 2013
    Great chapter, I am glad that Remus and Tonks are able to move on and be stronger for it together. Tonks must really love him to go through all that.
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  • From ANON - Snow Queen on February 28, 2013
    I love your story and the direction you're taking the relationship between Snape and Hermione.

    I do hope you consider writing either a flashback or an outtake of Remus and Tonks after her training with the Malfoys, since I'm curious to know how she broke the news to him.
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