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By : Elena009
  • From ANON - steve on March 01, 2013
    never understood, in most story hermonie cheat and end up with with a great man, and the weasly all love her. in story where ron cheat, his family hate him, so does harry and the girl he cheat leave him. why the double standerd.
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  • From demonsangel on February 28, 2013
    Yay, new chapter. Great job hun, I really liked it. I can't believe Ron would be such an ass! Glad Hermione is ok, what is Narcissa planning?
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  • From DB1 on January 21, 2013
    @6 great story can't wait for more. Update soon.

    DB
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  • From demonsangel on January 08, 2013
    Well, first off, thank you for answering question! That was very nice. Second, loved this chapter. Go Hermione! lol Loved how they interacted, though Narcissa watching them at the end was a bit creepy XD But maybe she is just making sure they don't kill each other. Can't wait to read more! Maybe now they will sit down, have a talk and start to get over the past and go back to being friends.
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on January 08, 2013
    wooohoo I am very glad you got another chapter out.
    But you caught up on your rest.
    I hope you have a safe trip back home :)

    Well this chapter was just... WOW.
    Can't wait for another chapter whenever you are able to post one :)
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  • From Draco_Fan on January 07, 2013
    Hurry hurry hurry! I want more! lol
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on January 06, 2013
    ohhh please post soon!!!!!
    I really want to read what happens next. And since I'm going on vacation on Wednesday I'd really lovw to read the next chapter before I go.
    But regardless I loved this chapter.
    I can't believe hermione did that but I'm glad she did hehe. :D

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  • From demonsangel on January 06, 2013
    Nice chapter, I love how Hermione snuck up on Draco at the end. Who is Harry dating?

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  • From demonsangel on January 04, 2013
    Ha ha Ron, you end up with nothing! Serves you right. Loved the twist with the Fae, curious as to if you will go further with that. Poor woman. I would feel terrible if I called someone a bitch thinking they were just a jealous ex or something and then finding out you were the other woman. That in and of itself must be a terrible feeling. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on January 04, 2013
    I'm so Happy that Ron now has no girl when he was playing both girls.
    I can't wait till Draco comes home!!!!
    Post more soon
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on January 03, 2013
    Good chapters. cant wait to read more, please update soon.
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  • From demonsangel on January 03, 2013
    You're welcome hun! I am glad I was able to help. Thank you for putting some back story in there about how they knew each other, that was very helpful. I liked the twist that Narcissa had been cheated on as well, it gives them common ground. Man is ickle Ronnikins in for a shock when everything in the house is gone XD He is just going to "LOVE" how utterly SOL he is. Are Hermione and Draco still friends even after the rivalry? I mean, they are both brilliant, so I can't ever see them not having at least a small rivalry together, but from the sounds of it, rivalry aside, they were trying to keep each other and their families safe. Can't wait till Harry finds out, he will blow a gasket at Ron...at least that is how Harry strikes me, the weasleys too. Who knows though, maybe your version they all take Ron's side...though I never could see the twins doing that.

    ANYWAYS, long story short, looking forward to more, this is great ^^
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  • From demonsangel on January 03, 2013
    Well I must say, this sounds interesting so far. Though I am a bit surprised that Hermione did not tell Narcissa why exactly she was there. In a time like that, it is nice to have someone who knows, and I can see Narcissa understanding and being supportive of her. Plus, she might be able to give advice on the "leaving him" part. I look forward to more.
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