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Reviews for A Black Stone in a Glass Box

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on January 31, 2013
    about #5...

    1. No, not a needle in a haystack.. :-) like you had mentioned what this
    story was based on the myth about Koschei, who had hid 'his ''soul'' in a needle, in a
    egg, in a duck, in a hare, etc... bottom line it was 6 things. So I thought you
    would base your story on that but with changes to what Harry's ''heart'' was hidden
    in.

    Therefore, I thought you would play upon the part about the needle, but from what I'm seeing
    you have a different idea on how you're going to do this.

    That's all, got it?

    Despite all that, you got yourself an interesting story here.
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  • From moodysavage on January 25, 2013
    I think this is one of my favorite chapters I have read of any of your stories. I really like dry humor and this one had several spots that I just found hilarious. When Harry was like 'oh yeah, it (the bird) will defend itself' and Draco thinking there weren't words to describe what he thought of that lol. Also when Harry didn't tell Draco the bird could break magic 'because you didn't ask me' and when Draco asked what else the bird can do and Harry said 'I don't think I want to tell you.' Those lines are freakin' priceless and I totally loved them. Very very awesome chapter :)
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  • From makochan0217 on January 24, 2013
    I'm a little late to the party this time, but I'd prefer to think of it as fashionably late. This story is going to be *fun*. I can already tell. Draco's boredom is as good a reason for him to want to help Harry as anything else I suppose. Who else was going to tell Harry just how utterly stupid he was in performing this ritual? And Narcissa and Lucius can't complain that Draco is annoying them with his whinging now. =P I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 23, 2013
    con't AGAIN..

    Okay, this is embarassing. Forget 'the fly', I confused the
    myth with something else small, I meant 'a needle'.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 23, 2013
    con't..

    oops, I just read your response.

    Okay, so the trials will be harder, but I'm curious, will you
    play on the myth about 'the fly', if you get my meaning?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 23, 2013
    about #4..

    I forgot that this would possibly have 5 or 6 trials in it. But, each
    one shouldn't be that hard right?
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  • From ANON - Seiren on January 23, 2013
    Hahah you never know what you've missed until its gone. Ace. I love this story. I have enjoyed all of your stories (tho i think the one i dont read is the House that Lovers built or something like that) and i love your writing style.

    Cant wait to see what happens next and what the next creature will do (and how itll try to kill Draco) :D
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on January 22, 2013
    Coming along nicely. One down & what? 7 more to go I think. Maybe they will get to know & value each other better working their way through this puzzle. At least Harry is quiet enough to maybe listen to what Draco says.
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  • From LadyHemlock27 on January 18, 2013
    LOL this just keeps getting better. I really hope Draco succeeds in his quest. Makes me wonder if he should leave little clues or twisty little notes for Hermione or Ron to uncover on their own. They might take an annonymous tip.
    Hmm... Of course the ministry likes the new Harry, he's not got any real passion left, so there is no urge to fight their stupidity. Heh did you ever want to do a crossover fan fict betwewen your own stories?
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  • From ANON - Seiren (again) on January 16, 2013
    Haha of course to the manor. Why wouldnt I have thought of that.

    Draco is ace, and this looks to be one interesting journey. Bet he isnt going to be complaining of boredom for long. :D
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 15, 2013
    #3...

    Wooow..I honestly couldn't be in a room with Harry, I'd wind up smacking
    him upside the head a couple of times JUST to get a good reaction out
    of him. O_O

    So, is Draco in for a ride of his life?
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on January 15, 2013
    Here we go...the begining of the real story...Draco & Harry figuering out a relationship. Neither was happy as they were. Together at least they won't be lonely & bored & can work at answers for the publics rumors etc.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on January 11, 2013
    this fic goes nicely with Monoral's Kiri.
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  • From ANON - Seiren (forgot to log in) on January 11, 2013
    Hahah, thats awesome. I cant wait to see where Draco is taking him. ^______6
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 10, 2013
    about #2...

    Hunh...well I didn't think HE would have been affected also. O_o
    All I will say is...I hope Harry thanks Draco at the end, for saving
    him from his idiocy & his grave mistake.

    After all, i feel people should have the freedom of choice to choose how
    they feel.
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