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Reviews for Pareo: Obey

By : kateofallpeople
  • From ANON - EndlessDarkDramieoneDesire on April 05, 2013
    Loving the direction of the story going.. Eagerly waiting for the next Chapter.. Update Soon.. :)
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  • From ANON - Aranel on April 05, 2013
    Oh this is my little gem! All my usual stories aren't being updated as fast as I would like but this one just made my day. I think I've read it three times now! Just the right amount of drawn out torture, dubious consent, and cheating on Ron Weasley(my favorite pass time for hermione)! Loving this story, feed my habit smutty pusher man! Can't wait till the next chapter. Gonna go shake down some old stories to get my fix till the next update.
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  • From ANON - anaidra on April 05, 2013
    Great chapter. Well, think it will be very interesting to see what Draco has planned to teach Hermione and how she will take it :). Please keep going!
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  • From ANON - No seriously on April 05, 2013
    You're four chapters in and this is amazing. Please don't be one of those crappy inconsiderate authors who takes forever to update. Please know that we live your work and deserve updates. There is nothing more frustrating that trying out a WIP and having the author not care. Please update when you can its awesome!
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  • From ANON - Selena Malfoy on April 04, 2013
    Whew! This is HOT! Not only is the idea of forced obedience really exceptional, your ability to describe Hermione's conflicting thoughts and feelings is great! Please continue to update...quickly. I feel I'm as hot and bothered as Hermione! xoxo SM
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  • From ANON - lamiko on April 04, 2013
    Wow =) , i really like the way this story is written, cannot wait to see the next chapter =)))))

    Marie
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  • From ANON - shaymars on March 20, 2013
    Please update more of this story
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  • From ANON - AmberONIE&cheese on March 19, 2013
    I am in love wit this story do far. I want to see how far you take it.
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  • From ANON - yess on March 09, 2013
    Obsessed with this story. Very well written, the best I've seen in ages :)
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  • From FalconLux on March 03, 2013
    Excellent. I'm loving this! Creepy and erotic at once!
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  • From ANON - shaymars on March 03, 2013
    Update more...This is a really good story and it is an original ideal...
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  • From ANON - Siona_the_Green on March 02, 2013
    I love this story, very original idea and very hot. I like how Hermione is still her strong willed self and not a submissive husk of a character. It would be nice to see her eventually turn the tables on him. Please don't wait so long to post the next chapter. Thanks
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  • From ANON - anonymouse on March 01, 2013
    I love this story, and I think you've done an excellent job conveying the confusion going through Hermione's mind because of all this. Some more introspection in the next chapter wouldn't go amiss, though, as it seems to be more of a passing thought, rather than taking over her every waking thought!
    I don't know where you're going with the storyline where Harry notices, but you've done a good job so far so I trust you! The compulsion to beg you to update more often is there, but I'll try to contain myself!
    Generally I love it. I think you've captured Draco well, and even if he is still completely made up of a little black heart, there's glimmers of good in him that you're hinting at subtly, which is nice.
    Thank you for this story. It's new, interesting and really hot, so I look forward to the next installment!
    (sorry for the bitty review as well - I haven't done this in a long time, but I felt compelled!)
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  • From ANON - Mark's Pet on February 28, 2013
    Oh, I am so happy for another chapter *doing happy dance*. This story has ENDLESS possibilities, very, very naughty possibilities!!!!

    Draco is so Slytherin...his commands that make Hermione 'enjoy herself'. The Oral Sex scene was PRICELESS! I wish I could have someone forbid me gag...what a handy talent that would be *wink, wink*.

    I am so looking forward to plenty *hint, hint* of chapters to explore this situation!?!?!?!?!?!

    More, Please!!!!
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  • From ANON - anaidra on February 28, 2013
    Look forward to reading more. So far it is really good!
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