Reviews for If This Is How You Treat Your Heroes...By : SpeedyTomato |
Dear gods, that was heart-wrenching. I'm actually in tears. I knew it was coming, and I'm still devastated by the events themselves. I know I said this last time, but I once again have to emphatically thank you for not detailing the events. The description of them as you've given it is more than enough.
I like the dynamic you're establishing. While I'm extremely curious as to the events that transpired to create such interaction, I'm thrilled at the way you're unfolding this tale. I'm truly looking forward to seeing Narcissa give Tom an earful.
Lucius' confusion over the unnamed other party is certainly understandable. I can also grasp why he would not have thought the student was Draco. First and foremost, Harry called the student friend, but there's also his statement of the other boy's fear of Snape. You're demonstrating Lucius' ability to hold on to the capacity for rational thought when faced even with such devastation very well.
Admittedly, I did not expect Lucius to agree so readily to staying in the room with Nagini, and I'm very curious as to how that is going to play out. As always, I'm looking forward to your next update! Thank you for sharing!
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