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By : SpeedyTomato
  • From ANON - delia cerrano on August 21, 2013
    That meeting with Snape should be very hard emotionally for Harry & those that care for him. What can Severus possibly say to defend himself for what he did to Harry & Neville. Want to hear more about what the Weasleys and Hermione think and are doing.
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  • From demonsangel on August 21, 2013
    Great chapter! I'm glad most of the Weasley's are smart enough to get out of this mess. They may be partially at fault for just stepping back, but they thought they were doing what was right and simply trusted the wrong man. I can't wait to hear what Arabella has to say and see what you have in mind for Sev. Normally I would feel bad for him, and in a way I do, but he is clearly not the misunderstood good guy in this.
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  • From devilsmomma on August 18, 2013
    love this story so far and can't wait for more! please send me updates at onecent1960@hotmail.com
    thanks
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  • From Jan on August 10, 2013
    Lol, poor Sirius... Though I think I feel for Narcissa more then I do for him, can't wait to see what happens next, please update chapter 18 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on August 09, 2013
    What on earth could Dumbledor possibly think is so important that Harry had to go through years of horror and now Neville also? I wish we read more of Lucius and Harry. Poor Percy is going to be left to the wolves huh? What do Hermione and Ron have to say?
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  • From Danae1972 on August 09, 2013
    Love it! At least Moody is going to help out and not just stick behind Dumbledore. Now I have Snape's 'comeuppance' to look forward to. Dumbledore's too. Sirius is just too funny and I'd love him to use his pickup lines and get smacked about. I'll just imagine that for a while. As much as I love him, that's too good to pass up.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on August 09, 2013
    Please tell me that Severus is going to pay for his crimes! I can't believe that Dumbledore, even after watching the horrid memories of what Severus did, helped him escape. In my mind, that makes Dumbledore just as guilty as Severus. Thank you so much for the updates! This is an absolutely fabulous story! Can't wait for more!
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  • From demonsangel on August 09, 2013
    Interesting chapter. I knew as soon as you mentioned a plan for Sev that it would not be shown in this chapter XD Such a cruel little teaser there. Something tells me that Seri is going to get slapped...a lot lol. Does anyone know about Skeeter being an unregistered animagus yet?

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  • From PeriLover on August 02, 2013
    I'm really impressed with this story. Wonderful writing. I really like what you are doing with the characters. Thanks for all your hard work!
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  • From Danae1972 on August 01, 2013
    I am truly enjoying this story, and this chapter what an amazing addition. My most common complaint, not long enough :). Of course, it could be three times longer and that would still be a complaint. Incredible work and looking forward to the next installment (please let it be a confrontation with Moody?? That's always enjoyable although I can and will be patient).
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  • From demonsangel on August 01, 2013
    Great chapter, I love how things are progressing and can't wait to see who the retired aurors are and how Moody is handled.
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  • From BAFan on July 31, 2013
    Ch. 16

    Yay, another update! This story is one of my favorites, along with "Through The Veil." (I think that's the title.) It's good that Draco is starting to understand how wrong some of his actions have been and just how deep a hole he's dug for himself. Part of me hopes that Lucius doesn't come to the rescue, at least not right away, but I also don't want him to abandon Draco, either. Albus continues to make me shake my head and wonder if he's going senile. I'm glad he retains enough humanity to be sickened by the Pensieve memories, at least.

    I very much enjoy your stories, but have to admit it took me a while to adjust to your syntax and some of your word usage - like "being" instead of "person," which others have commented on. The one major correction I would like to offer is apostrophe use - and this is something I estimate 75% of fanfic writers get wrong. Apostrophes are used ONLY for:

    1) Contractions, such as "you're" for "you are," or "isn't" for "is not," or I've" for "I have";

    OR


    2) Possessives, such as "the dog's tail" or "Vernon Dursley's hat." Both these examples use the singular form (one dog, one person named Dursley). If we were talking about two or more dogs, for example, then it would be "the dogs' tails." Likewise the house belonging to the Dursley family would be "the Dursleys' house." The exception to this is possessive pronouns, which never have an apostrophe (his, hers, yours, mine, ours, theirs, etc.)

    APOSTROPHES ARE NOT USED FOR NON-POSSESSIVE PLURALS. Harry is meeting with the Dursleys, Weasleys, or Malfoys, not the Dursley's, Weasley's, or Malfoy's. Harry and Lucius are not "lover's"; they are "lovers."

    These are all examples I have seen in fanfiction, not necessarily yours. I tried not to turn this into a lecture, but your stories are so interesting I wanted to point out to you and your beta this one error that's been bugging me. I look forward eagerly for the next update!
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  • From LadyFreak on July 31, 2013
    I can't say enough times how much i love this story. it is progressing nicely and i look forward to each and every chapter. Thank you for posting an update!
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  • From ANON - quaff on July 12, 2013
    It's a fabulous chapter and story. I like that the French minister will be hammering the Brit government. It's shocking that Rita, Albus and others got that information. Thank you for writing this and your other stories. You have a wonderful talent.
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  • From demonsangel on July 11, 2013
    Glad to see another chapter out! I love this story and hate the wait between chapters. But it is always worth the wait. I can't wait to read more. Normally, I would say "poor dumbles" but in this case, I am more interested in seeing his reaction when he realizes that several of his ideas won't pan out because the option has been taken from him. I can't remember though, has the french minister gotten in contact with Madam Maxime and informed her it would be in her best interest not to talk to others about Harry? Then again, one would think that were obvious. Again, can't wait to read more!
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