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Reviews for Through the Veil and Back Again

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From ANON - ChaosLady on August 17, 2013
    Oh no! Not another bloody prophecy!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2013
    Was reading this story and got to chapter four before realizing an annoying pattern in the way you write, and it basically boils down to "show, don't tell." You basically would describe everything that was going on from each person's point of view, and thoughts, then had dialogue of them telling each other what they were thinking. I noticed I seemed to read the same thing several times. I think in chapter 3, Remus thought to himself that he agreed with sirius, then a paragraph later he said "I agree with sirius"

    I do like the plot so far, it's an interesting concept, but the problem I've been having, coupled with a lot of OOCness, it's just a little difficult to read.
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  • From demonsangel on August 07, 2013
    Interesting chapter. I am curious as to whether or not the locket is the same one from the original books or what. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on August 07, 2013
    They are being too trusting.
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  • From ANON - Thumper56 on August 02, 2013
    I am loving this story. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - psychosmurf on July 27, 2013
    ch 15: Poor Harry. Hope things get better for him soon
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on July 26, 2013
    What is Voldemort up too? Is he a good guy or a bad guy?
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  • From demonsangel on July 26, 2013
    Interesting chapter, glad to see they are opening up a bit.
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  • From Sealpotter on July 23, 2013
    This is my favorite of all your stories and I look daily for updates. You have inspired me a bit with this one, but that is for much later. Your telling and growth of the relationships speaks well to the depth of your writing. I won't comment for each chapter, as I like it all. I won't ask plot questions, because I know that is the joy in the reading, discovering the answers to your questions, and the journey you lay out before each of your readers.

    I am very excited about where this particular story is going, I do like the portrayal of Voldemort here. Your intricate web of how the connection works and how each element reveals it self, feels perfect, not rushed or too slow in the plot. I like your tempo. I also Like that you do not abandon your stories. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more. MUCH more.
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  • From ANON - psychosmurf on July 21, 2013
    ch14 oooh all sorts of secrets coming out. cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - psychosmurf on July 21, 2013
    ch 13: oh wow. poor harry
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  • From ANON - psychosmurf on July 21, 2013
    ch 12....oooh Dudley might be a W too but had his powers bound at birth??? that would be interesting. Glad Draco is being a normal person with everyone.
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  • From ANON - psychosmurf on July 14, 2013
    ch 6: Yummy Yummy end.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2013
    really tired, I almost finished what you had written before I went to sleep [6:00 am] and finally finished when I woke this morning/afternoon. I really hope you finish this story soon, I really like it!!!
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  • From ANON - psychosmurf on July 11, 2013
    ch 5 ooh a new prophecy and a not evil Tom???? interesting.
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