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By : Bickymonster
  • From moodysavage on January 28, 2013
    omgosh I was rolling right along with Blaise! Poor Snape... he has to help Draco but he'd rather be yelling at them and taking house points lol. I especially loved when they both walked out of the classroom with one shoe and sock off. So glad you added this scene :)
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on January 28, 2013
    I'm glad that Draco got to choose the right side this time. Excellent update!
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  • From Meechypoo64 on January 28, 2013
    Wall se is always good for the libido, too bad the boys didn't get to experience it in full. Snape seems to be very accomodating for the boys an dim sure he's very amused at the situation. Kudos to Draco for standing up to his father and coming clean to Harry. Let's hope Sev can save Narcissa and soon.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Akari-Seikatsu on January 28, 2013
    This is a very interesting story and I am enjoying it quite a bit. I have a suggestion about Lucius Malfoy, in the books he does finally desert Voldemort during the final battle to find his son. I would suggest using that bit of cannon information when working out how he responds to Draco not doing what Voldemort wants. If you haven't already worked out how Harry's fifth year ended for your story I would suggest you also take some time to work that out. ^_^ It will make thing easier for you and for your readers if you know for sure what did and did not happen for your story verses what happened in cannon. I'm guessing that Lucius was not arrested? As stated before, I'm really enjoying this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Brandi on January 28, 2013
    I love how you are taking your time in getting Harry and Draco comfortable with each other but still give the the sexual tension that keeps people on the edge of their seats. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From Hollibell on January 28, 2013
    Hm...I like the idea of Blaise and Ginny together. Interesting idea. And Harry ambushing draco all over the castle to snog him is just adorable. I'm glad the kissing is helping him. I'd hate to see them pushed into sex before they were both ready. I look forward to the next one!
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  • From jujukitty on January 27, 2013
    lol awwww. liked watching the teachers trying to be all stern and angry when all of them just wanted to laugh over it. and draco winding harry around his little finger was a trip too. keep up the great work :D
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  • From ANON - kayla on January 27, 2013
    I love this story! I can't remember if I have reviewed already or not so I'm doing it now just in case. I really love this whole concept; the erotes, their beautiful wings, and all their special abilities.Very awesome and so creative. Loved the make out scene in the Great Hall! I thought the sharing of emotions was so sweet and just plain adorable. I can't wait to see what you have planned for other chapters, and the other characters as well :)
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  • From Jan on January 27, 2013
    Gotta love Draco ^_~

    Please update chapter 6 soon.
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  • From ANON - RandomGuy on January 27, 2013
    Hey! I like your story so far, so I wouldn't mind beta'ing it. Mail me at arum@kantara.tv
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on January 27, 2013
    Not a bad story but while its all light and fluffy when is the good stuff gonna happen lol cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Diana on January 26, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on January 26, 2013
    Thanks, for your response to my review! I loved this update and I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - blj.14 on January 26, 2013
    Ch4 was yummy,ch5 absolutely delicious! That sharing of feelings was a great way to resolve the distance between them. I absolutely love cute,scheming Draco. I'm so glad Draco's friends are being supportive and helpful. Why would Pansy and Blaise's families not want any contact? I thought creature inheritances were mostly common to purebloods. Can't wait for the pregnancy to advance but also want some romance and lemons. How scary is Lucius going to be? LOL Ginny got told off -and I don't think she deserves Blaise.
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  • From ANON - Nari-Chan on January 26, 2013
    i love it. u are a brillent writer if i must say my dear bickymonster. and i cant wait to find out more on those plans. i will be eagerly awaiting the next update
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