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By : Bickymonster
  • From ANON - deno on January 26, 2013
    nyc
    gr8 story line/plot
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  • From moodysavage on January 21, 2013
    whoo hoo! sexy and embarrassing! you're going to kill me with this story you know... but man am I smiling while you do it :)
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  • From ANON - Ritsu66 on January 21, 2013
    Keeps getting better and better. As far as pairings, I like the idea of Severus/Lucius, although I really don't know why I find them kind of attractive, lol. You could always have Narcissa and Lucius get divorced and she runs off to travel the world with some lover that you've created. As for Pansy, perhaps Seamus? Their personalities seem like they would go well together. If you're aalso looking for someone for Blaise, perhaps he could corrupt Neville a bit.
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  • From EasyReader on January 21, 2013
    Everyone seems to put Pansy and Neville together but I think maybe another way to go would be with Seamus. That could be one that Harry and Draco plan out. Can just picture Harry suggesting possible matches and Draco shooting them down with his usual caustic wit. I love the way they made up, the emotional link was a quick way to get past Harry dithering around about his feelings yet again. Looking forward to the next chapter [no pressure I am patient look who I follow LOL]
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  • From djaddict on January 21, 2013
    I really like Severus and Lucius together.

    Hard to think of someone for Pansy because most of the time I don't like her.

    Nice update do we actually get the sex scene next time?
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  • From ANON - darkscytherei on January 21, 2013
    I really like this story. It is cute, creative, and quite funny. I look forward to seeing how it all plays out. To answer your question that you posted at the end, I would like to see Severus/Lucius together. As far as Narcissus goes, maybe you could pair her off with an OC possibly make him someone she use to date before meeting and having to marry Lucius. Pansy might go very well with either Seamus, Dean, or Neville.
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  • From Hollibell on January 20, 2013
    Hm. Nothing says you have to pair Narcissa up with anyone. Their marriage could be arranged and open with both parties having lovers on the side as long as their discrete. That frees up a Severus/Lucius pairing, and Narcissa could just have some French guy in Paris or something, lol. I don't think you need to complicate things too much with lots of side pairings unless you want to. I loved the Great Hall scene, once again! When his legs came up around Harry, I thought, "Uh oh, here it comes! (with a silly little internal squeal added in)
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on January 20, 2013
    awosome chapter :) idea: how about a hermione/blaise pairing insted of the normal ron/hermione? i think they have a lot in commen and would be cute togeather. they could challenge each other both in bed and in class.
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  • From ANON - tony h on January 20, 2013
    Very good. I love reading HP / SMALL stories that are more than just sex. Love a real good love story. Can't wait for next chapters to come out. Just wish they were longer and more frequent. lol
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on January 20, 2013
    Wonderful! How about doing a threesome with Severus, Narcissa, and Lucius? Although it should not happen as quickly as Draco and Harry got together, it should be a more gradual and subtle thing. Maybe have it start when Narcissa and Lucius come to the school wondering what's going on with their son and Harry Potter. Have Pansy pair up with Seamus, that would be funny if they have a passionate and somewhat secret love affair. Kind of a love/hate thing.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on January 20, 2013
    Glad they are working things out a bit. Would Like to see more of Draco acting out in his preg. state...food cravings that make Harry gag but he runs to get it for him, Harry trying to make Draco take better care of himself & fussing over him when he feels he's not, deciding on names & baby furnishings as well as where they will live/who will take care of baby.
    I think I like Severus with Lucius but Narcissa? They seem like too rigid, too somber, too internalizing to ever even say anything or feel enough for each other to say/do anything. Pansy? An opposite would be Neville who can be surprisingly strong minded (to control her) when he wants to be.
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  • From Meechypoo64 on January 20, 2013
    Blaise is always great for some light humor to ease the tension and rev up Draco's emotions. I loved how you settle the boys differences by making them "feel" just what the other was upset about. Sure does work better than words and any stumbling through misunderstandings due to a lack of communication! Ah if it was always that simple.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Chiyanna117 on January 20, 2013
    I love this story. Just found it today and read all three chaptersand now I want more! Lol. I see your asking for help with your plot-bunnies but you also sayyou want to keep it light and fluffy, have you considered a creature/erote hunter thats not very good at his job idea? Like his/her attempts to expose/kill the boys ends in harmless failure, and each "attempt" could span several chapters at a time along with whatever else the boys are up to.
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  • From ANON - Kermit on January 18, 2013
    Can't wait for more! Hopefully soon.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on January 18, 2013
    So good! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! I haven't been this excited about a story for a loooong time!
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