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By : Bickymonster
  • From ANON - ChaosLady on May 21, 2013
    Nice.
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  • From Leania07 on May 21, 2013
    Your welcome, I understand sometimes one can overlook the most simplest of things. Especially since our minds will automatically insert the proper words.
    I liked this chapter...okay so I've liked them all so far, :P, and I'm glad Draco could use his wings for flying. In my mind they were too small, so I'm glad my estimation was off ;). It would be disappointing to have wings and not use them. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - acherongoddess on May 20, 2013
    i just started this story tonite and i have fallen in love with it..great story and i would like updates plz..acherongoddess@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - AR on May 18, 2013
    Hm. Interesting. Caught up with this today. Like the premise of the cupid/angels and how it's regulated to myths and fairy tales even in the magical world. So much so that Ginny found the story in her children's book. Like the interplay of characters. Neville stepping up, quiet, solid support. The Blaise-Ginny bit is amusing. Kinda sorta hoping that even if you touch on a Ron-Hermione ship, that it doesn't sail very long or far. Never agreed with that pairing. Wondering what the Ministry is after in regards to Harry. Will you be playing the Hallows? Horocruxes are already creeping into the story line. We're blind, though, to Voldie's actions. What has he been doing these past few months? And now, the Malfoys are missing... is it possible Lucius actually defected ranks? Ran away to hide with Narcissa? How would Bellatrix take that rejection? Is another Junior DE given the orders to find a way into Hogwarts? The Lucius-Severus ship is interesting...think I like it. I do wonder though, will you be keeping this a drama, long and slow-moving plot?
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  • From ANON - ichigopudding on May 16, 2013
    Came over from ff.net haha. Loved it so much. I would like to be added to your email alerts too if you don't mind :D

    ichigopudding@live.com.au
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  • From Jan on May 13, 2013
    Poor guys, hope things start getting better with Lucius soon, please update chapter 20 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - shiibana on May 13, 2013
    Ahhh I m so glad to see that you updated the story! Can't wait to read the next chapter :)
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  • From Goofys_angle_baby_x3 on May 11, 2013
    This story is very good and u are an amazing writer
    Jymiet@gmail.com po
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  • From ANON - Mercy Janelle on May 11, 2013
    I like the story so far, it is flowing great. I also liked this chapter even though I kind of had a hard time connecting with it. The way that Lucius acted and behaved was okay to me. I did not see how it was wrong in the way of how Draco or the rest of the characters in the story acted. That kind of seemed normal to me. I guess what I am trying to say is that affection does not necessary have to be saying I love you or hugs and all that jazz; it could be showed in other ways especially it they are not used to that themselves. Anyways lolz awesome story
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  • From Meechypoo64 on May 10, 2013
    Um...yeah...dinner with Severus and Lucius was never going to end well, at least not the first go around. Right now emotions are too high, past memories are too close and new love is way too fragile. Maybe after some thinking and quiet introspection things may take some small baby steps forward in the want for everyone to just get along!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Akari-Seikatsu on May 10, 2013
    I started reading this story because it was an interesting twist on the Magical Creature idea. I keep reading it because the story is well written and because I want to see how everything is going to turn out.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on May 10, 2013
    One other thing I like about your story: There's not too many grammatical mistakes, typos or misspelled words. I don't mind a mistake here and there, I usually overlook it and can easily fill in the blanks. But to have it happen to where every sentence is completely garbled, I never read those and usually tell the author to get a beta-reader and/or a spellchecker.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on May 10, 2013
    I like how you have an interesting plot with twists but stay true to everyone's characters. I like the romantic banter between Harry and Draco and how Harry and Snape are not automatically friends. The sex scenes are written well too. The fight between the four of them was interesting. I hope someone breaks down and apologizes soon, but considering how much pride everyone has, I don't see it happening soon. Excellent update!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on May 10, 2013
    "Draco knew how much Harry(1) it when he was dismissive of being unwell but he already felt weak enough in his father's eyes,"
    "But I just need to... just be(2) for a bit. And I need you to(3)treated me like I am fragile and about to break." Draco tried to explain; he gave Harry another chaste kiss and left the room."
    "To be honest the two times I called him I was think(4)ONLY about Draco and making sure MY boyfriend and child were taken care of."
    (1)insert, hated?
    (2)insert, alone?
    (3)insert, not?
    (4)change to thinking?

    the small things i found. and other then that LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!
    this reminds me of my family and well that's a scary and bad thing to be like. lol.
    Lucius is a stupid man who needs to think before he speaks, or he will lose a lot more then he realizes. you can be high strung and arrogant all he wants but these things come at a high price i don't think he is willing to pay them and all the money he has cant ever fix it when its broken and gone. love harry sticking up for himself to snape and telling him off. please update soon cant wait for more:)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on May 10, 2013
    Why do I like this story? Partly...probably...because I love Harry and Draco as well as Severus and Lucius. Those 4 in various combinations seem so needy yet so complimentary to each other. I enjoy the banter, the way they get so tied to each other to become a solid unit - the loving family they never had. Anyway I think this chapter where Draco seems to be closer than ever with Harry & Severus as well as Lucius showed how much they cared for each other & Draco was very satisfying to me. Severus even acknowledged Harry's caring & efforts...sort of.
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