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Reviews for Erotes

By : Bickymonster
  • From ANON - Diana on May 10, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From Leania07 on May 10, 2013
    Yep, Lucius is an ass, plain and simple. I love Sev, but jeeze, does he have to always pull the "your just like your father" card when he's pissed? I wouldn't exactly call it 'running away scared' more Harry's inner Slytherin of 'self preservation'. As for why I started reading this well 1.) There wasn't any new Snarry that caught my interest, 2.) I was taking a break from writing my own fanfic, and 3.) it caught my interest (summary and that it wasn't a Veela fic for a change), so I thought to give it a try. Why do I keep coming back? Well if there is updates at a decent pace (I can understand not every day, but at least you're not once a month) I'm happy, if the story doesn't start going flat (way too predictable, no balance between good things and bad things happening), and the grammar is decent. You have some errors, mainly missing words, I would recommend reading it over as if it was someone else's story and don't allow your mind to put the missing words there as you read. Example: '"I know you don't trust either of them but you are here to us safe." Draco said,...' missing word is keep; there's also a few where you're missing a 'do' or 'do not'. Keep up the good work though, I look forward to the next!

    Leania
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 10, 2013
    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - kristy on May 06, 2013
    I am really loving this story, I cannot wait for the next chapter to be posted, do you have any idea when it will be?

    Thanks for a brilliant story and please keep on writing, I will be waiting impatiently for the next instalment.

    Kristy x
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  • From Pane on April 28, 2013
    You had me at Erotes lol I'm in love love with this story.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on April 28, 2013
    Glad to see this updated. Draco and Harry's banter are so amusing.
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  • From Leania07 on April 25, 2013
    Okay you got me hooked; I'm more a Snarry fan but this one has got my attention and smiling. So kudos to you. You're doing a wonderful job dealing with certain issues that would come from Harry and Draco becoming an item; all with out the dark Harry, Mione/Ron/Ginny/Dumbledore bashing that is most common. I find it rather difficult to do personally (the stories I'm currently working on are really Dumbledore bashing), so I tip my hat to you. Interesting twist with Lucius there, I laughed my butt off when I read the way he 'crawled towards Snape'. A Malfoy...Crawling...Oh the mental image! Ron is being quite mature and even though he admits to still not liking Draco, he isn't being his hot-headed self. It's rather refreshing; and Ginny, wow, I never thought she would be so hateful of Slytherins, makes Harry and Draco's job of getting her and Blaise together more challenging. Keep up the good work, I'd like to know when you update!

    Leania
    (leania07 @ gmail . com )
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  • From Jan on April 23, 2013
    Lol, Draco is just to funny whrn describing women, but really Hermione needs to relax a bit, and not take everything to heart, here they are talking about sex and she takes it to mean that Draco would never be into her because of her blood! I mean really how can you jump to that conclusion when they're talking about sex!?
    And Luna! Gods I love her character, with her personality and her ability to predict things, yes definitely one of my fav.
    Can't wait to for you to update chapter 19 to see if it'll be a disaster or a success, with Harry having his first dinner with both his father in laws, seeing how it went when he visited Narcissa and all.
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  • From Meechypoo64 on April 22, 2013
    If Luna professes it, the fates will make it so. A little girl for Harry and Draco will definitely be adorable and keep them on their toes. God, I don't know if I'd be brave enough to have dinner with both Lucius and Severus together. If nothing else it should make for interesting or exceedingly quiet dinner conversation. Guess we'll just have to wait to see which way it goes!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on April 22, 2013
    awesome update. and yay i moved up in the response lol. i must be growing on you :) i hope Draco's high blood pressure doesn't hurt the baby and i love Luna's clairvoyantness. i cant understand her coded talking but that's ok she has always been one of my favorites. are rare odd beauty.
    great update and cant wait for more. update when you can
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  • From ANON - Diana on April 22, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - tony h on April 22, 2013
    So lived the little joking of sitting next to granger! Curly parts? Tuck! Was another really great chapter. Hurry up with exams and get back to work...loved it!
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  • From ANON - mahogany on April 18, 2013
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  • From ANON - BlueEyedGirl on April 14, 2013
    love the was this story is going!
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  • From Jan on April 11, 2013
    Hope things work out well for Blaise & Ginny, please update chapter 18 soon.
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