Reviews for Locked InBy : goldhorse |
Oh gods...Hermione's caveman talk...🤣🤣
great job. you're a fantastic author!
this is an amazing, wonderful story, but this last chapter really makes it a favorite for me. Every delivery in every book or movie seems to forget birthing the placenta, leading to so many women being more shocked and uncomfortable than they should be at that time of delivery. it's just a sentence, but the fact you remembered it makes me so happy!!!!
Very fun, very inventive, and very sweet. Thank you for the enjoyable read!
Write this one please:#2: Hermione and Draco are both dancers and have been since they were 5. They were friends, though Hogwarts strained their relationship. The war is over and they are both severely damaged. They are creatures in this one, but I'm not saying what kind just yet. They'll have a mission from the Ministry... and their love lives to figure out.
All your stories I have read have been great! Loving this and I vote for #3. We need a Snape centric story. I don't know if you still look at these reviews or not, but I am so glad I found you. However- I can't bear the thought that you use bare instead of bear for a burden. LOL I am so pissy, sorry. If I could do better, then why don't I write. Because you are so good I would be shamed.
Mary
In reading this I was wondering 2 questions. 1st is poe's love Lenore; Mellora; or Annabelle Lee? 2nd if you do write a sequel to this story are you going to continue to have the Unspeakables be like the Leverage crew ( regular cases are like corrupt politicians, & Voldemort & Lucius are like larger like Damian Moroe)?
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