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By : goldhorse
  • From ANON - anaidra on April 01, 2013
    Hope Severus finds his family soon. It must had been hard for him to know they are somewhere there and not be able to be with them. He deserves to be happy after everything. Also, look forward to seeing Harry and Venus meeting for the first time :).
    Anyway, poor Harry. But I guess once he is told about Venus and everything he will understnad why Hermione did what she did and why she didnt want to tell even her friend(s) more about her and Draco and their RoR experience just yet.
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  • From Solariel89 on March 31, 2013
    Public librarians are such stiffs.... And I really do hope this thing with Sev really works. He's always so damn sad. :(
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  • From Kimbovet on March 30, 2013
    Looking forward to Snape & Venus reuniting & Harry getting to know his half sister.
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  • From ANON - Josie on March 30, 2013
    I've been wondering how Hermione was going to get Harry's blood - didnt consider she would stab him though :) I hope Harry gets to know Venus she's probably the only nice member of his family that are still living :)

    Keep up the good work :) xx
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  • From DB1 on March 30, 2013
    @36 lol poor Harry!! Update soon

    DB
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  • From demonsangel on March 30, 2013
    Yeah, the library can be a bit uppity in that respect, but at the same time, it is understandable. Great chapter! Really great idea on Hermione's part to use that as an excuse to get the blood. Poor Sev, I really hope it works. Can't wait to read more hun!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 29, 2013
    I trust you to write your story your way, so I will hold off on comments about Harry and Ron for now... I hope Severus gets his family back, too. He's suffered long enough. Thanks again! :-) HG4eva
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  • From ANON - GoodGirlsBadBoys00 on March 29, 2013
    I like this story very much! I like the added dimensions to Snape, and I love the way the D/H relationship is developing. The declaration kiss in front of McGonagal was perfect.
    I am confused though. I must have missed a chapter that explains why Hermione now hates Harry and Ron. As far as I remember she was still best friends with them and enemies with Draco, when she went into the RoR... But she came out of the room hating them. She's now spiteful and cruel to them with no remorse. Did miss something?
    Thanks!
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  • From demonsangel on March 26, 2013
    I would LOVE to see Hermione hex Lucius to the ceiling...I'm sure Draco would too XD Great chapter. Poor Nott and Daphne, hope they can get a happy ending.
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  • From ANON - anaidra on March 26, 2013
    Lovely chapter. It is so nice to see them together and being there for each other. Keep going. I love this story!
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  • From Solariel89 on March 26, 2013
    Poor Daphne and Theodore.... :( I feel so bad for them now.... They better do something really public. And soon. It'd open eyes and rally the troops.. so to speak. lol Now that I've had my therapy... :D I'm going to bed. I'm so glad you're back! Perfect way to go to bed. :D
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 25, 2013
    Gld to see you nd the story back. :-) I am glad they are so happy with one another. But, I have to mention that her dislike and annoyance with the people who used to be her friends is a bit worrisome. It seems she's completely done with them and that's sad. My friends and I made a pact a long long time ago that no relationship would ever end ours and I'm glad we did. Boy/Girlfriends come and go, as do husbands/wives, sadly. But, you should never toss away your friends, like she seems to be doing. I really do want Hermione and Draco happy together and to break this curse for all the couples in love. But, now I pray they make it for the long haul and never fight with each other, because she will have no one to turn to now. Sorry about the rant, but her being so giddy over hexing them when they simply want to know what happened to their former best friend, was a bit shocking. Everything else is wonderful, as always though. So, keep writing! :-) Thanks, HG4eva
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  • From Citten on March 25, 2013
    poor sweet-hearted hermoione, wonderful draco- comforting her i love it! :) well i cant wait to see how they are going to help others that need it so! :) i hope that you are well & that you will get everything settled, thanks for the chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on March 25, 2013
    Disco? Wow! Whatever works to settle Hermione. Update when you can. I know life can be a pain.
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  • From Bickymonster on March 25, 2013
    sorry things are going wrong, hope they work out soon. great chapter, nice to see them figuring out how to be with each other out of the room, even if it is in baby steps.
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