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By : goldhorse
  • From XiaoZhen on March 17, 2013
    I was reluctant to read this at first because honestly speaking, your summary isn't the best one out there that really captures my attention. But I'm glad I read this at the end. I was just skimming the first few chapters to get a look whether I like it or not and was instantly hooked! I read all 32 chapters in one go. It's 3 am and I'm dead tired, but it was worth it.
    The theme of star-crossed lover is something that never died with age, and I love the fact that you put that in your story. How centuries worth of love and separation flashed before their eyes.
    I read the summary and it has 'preg' tag on it, so I'm assuming that Hermione will probably pregnant upon further examination (I mean, they did have quite a lot of sex going on and during that time I don't think they're thinking of contraceptive spell) or probably not.
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jo on March 17, 2013
    Another great chapter. I am really enjoying this story. As for the next story choices I hope you eventually get around to writing all three, but I like choice #1 best, followed by #3, and then #2.
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  • From ANON - Robbin on March 16, 2013
    Hi I love all your stories and have read everyone and anxiously await more chapters in the current stories you are writing. In response to your question I would love if you wrote all three of your ideas for stories. Happy writing :D
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 16, 2013
    Oh well crap! He just had to appear to piss me off. lol I can't wait for someone to put that egotistical jerk in his place finally! Thanks, hon!! Still a brilliant story! HG4eva
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  • From deathraven on March 15, 2013
    Love it....and go with #3 sounds good!!
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  • From Solariel89 on March 15, 2013
    I'll read them all! :D And, if it's any consolation, I caught the hints. :) I can't wait to see where this goes! I wanna see this so bad!!!!
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  • From ANON - jordan on March 15, 2013
    #3
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on March 15, 2013
    I hope somebody hexes the shit outta Lucius, Harry, & Ron. Idiots! I like #3 best then #2 & finally #1.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2013
    nuber thr33 sounds good
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoenix on March 15, 2013
    I like #3 the best, please.
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  • From ANON - margiere on March 15, 2013
    Lucius always ruins the party. Well, things will most definitely be hitting the fan now. And what is going on with Harry, he is usually very observant? I expect Ron to be an clueless and rash but Hermione has to look very weak and ill. Even if they were in a huge rush to see their friend she is in the hospital ward for pete sake! Those two have the worst timing...really. I hope Snape can come up with a good cover for them.

    My vote is for Option 1. Draco as a MMA fighter is two good to pass up. Although a strong second is Option 3. Snape is always the best *Vampire* Father
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  • From Hardygirl133 on March 15, 2013
    I would love to see how you do #1. The others kinda remind me of the other stories you've written

    Ps
    Love where the story is going!!!!
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  • From ANON - anaidra on March 15, 2013
    Please someone teach Harry and Ron that they really should listen to what people say and do it. Want to hit them... hard! Lucius too!!!!!!
    Anyway, loved the chapter and once again, cant wait to read more.

    All three ideas sounds interesting and I would like to read any of them...well, but if you want to hear which one more then I would say 1 and then 3 and then 2 ;).
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  • From demonsangel on March 15, 2013
    Great chapter. Someone hex Lucius, Harry and Ron for me please. Especially Lucius for calling Hermione a mudblood. Glad Snape seems to be on their side at least.

    I would have to vote the second one where they are dancers, with a secondary vote of the 3rd on lol. Though all ideas sound interesting.

    Thanks for answering the questions!
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  • From ANON - margiere on March 14, 2013
    What a way to tell Severusknow about some of his secrets. I hope he doesn't take it out on them. They've been through so much already. At least they know now that someone is going to be an advocate for them *hugging Snape now*.

    Very curious about how Hermione is a Lady. And Severus swears no one else knows their out of the room, so who called that scary Emmauel Healer? And is Severus or the castle proventing Pomprey from informing McGonngall? Sorry if it seems I'm so full of questions, I'm just enjoying this story so much I can't help it. Keep up the great work!
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