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  • From ANON - margiere on March 05, 2013
    Whoaaa!!! They had a baby girl together! Didn't see that one coming. Now I have so many questions, I can imagine Hermione and Draco have just as many. What other secrets has the room held onto? Is Snape with his daughter during the Hoildays? And will the room ever give Hermione and Draco some food and warmth?
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  • From DB1 on March 04, 2013
    @25 wow wasn't expecting that!! Looking forward for more!! Please update soon

    DB
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  • From ANON - jordan on March 04, 2013
    Harry has a half sister?!?!?!
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  • From ANON - buttercup on March 04, 2013
    so harry gets a sister!! does he ever get to meet her?
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  • From Solariel89 on March 04, 2013
    WHAAAAATTTT?!?!?!?!?!?!?! SNAPE AND LILY HAD A GIRL?!?!?!?!?! What's she like? Are we going to meet her? Did Snape stop checking on her when Lily died or did he continue in earnest? And WHY DOES MUSE BOG YOU DOWN SO DAMN MUCH?! But we love the stories you crank out when she gets into slave-drive mode. :D You never disappoint.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 04, 2013
    Nope! Did NOT see that coming at all. Wow! Okay, I know you're really busy, but please update again soon, okay? I need to know who this baby became! I have my theories, but you keep surprising me, so I will wait and see. lol Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From demonsangel on March 03, 2013
    Wow...didn't see that coming o.o...is that where sev keeps going? To see his kid? I'll bet Harry would love to know that he has a sister...even a half sister. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From MegWebs94 on March 03, 2013
    I absolutely love this! I love how you're going into Severus' and Lily's relationship... it's something I've not seen much in stories and I love the idea! I think the baby is Hermione? Maybe? haha I can't wait to see if my thoughts are correct ;) I love your writing and can't wait to read more of Beyond the Pale either!
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  • From Kimbovet on March 03, 2013
    Ahha! That's who Snape's going off to visit. Didn't really see that coming. Eagerly awaiting whatever your Muse has you writing.
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  • From Kimbovet on March 02, 2013
    I'm thinking the room should give them some food soon. Wouldn't want them to starve to death. And then maybe Snape will stop by just to make them more uncomfortable. Keep 'em coming. :-)
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  • From Solariel89 on March 02, 2013
    I think the room needs to do something nice, for once.... Hell, maybe it'll let Dumbledore try to lead them in the right direction. lol
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 01, 2013
    First and foremost... ME!!!!! I volunteers *waves hand madly* Man, they are so close and so far away from figuring out what they need to do. lol I can't believe how hard it is for them to see it. ha ha ha I can't wait to see how the room surprises them next. But, I also hope they get some food soon, too. lol Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Margiere on March 01, 2013
    *Lots of hugs to Snape*. The Room has shown our couple Love torn apart maybe it will take another angle now? Maybe a couple that despite the adversity stayed together? Hey maybe something totally unexpected like a Boogart! They each would have to see the other worst fear and confront it. Whatever the next challenge I can't wait. I hope your interview went well. Great chapterm
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  • From demonsangel on March 01, 2013
    Wow, that was really sad. Poor Sev. *gives him a hug* Honestly, at this point I am half expecting you to go "surprise" and have it be the room and the past spirits of those people, or at least the women working together to try and show these two what they need to do. Great chapter as always, can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - margiere on February 28, 2013
    This is so heartbreaking. All those centuries have past and there has been no improvement in blood purity relations. And does Snapes cryptic comments before he left for the holidays have a similar history? I hope the Room grants them some food soon. It got to be terrible being naked, cold and hungry.
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