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By : goldhorse
  • From ANON - Margiere on February 16, 2013
    Snape is such an enigma, how was he able to conjure the mirror for Hermione to see her hair with no problem? And the way he caressed the door before exiting has me wondering just what kind of history he has with the RoR. So happy that Hermione and Draco decided to enjoy the present and no let the world outside of the room stop them from enjoying each other. They have so much time to learn from each other, what will you have the learn next? I can't wait for your next chapter. I find that I'm now checking everyday for new updates.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 16, 2013
    I love poor Severus and hope he finds some happiness, too. His amusement and snark are too funny. I wish these two smart kids would realize they need to admit their want to be together, so they can start to fight for one another. I love seeing the castle throw more and more at them, though. lol I hope she can somehow calm Harry down and that Draco doesn't antagonize the poor guy too badly. lol Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Annie on February 16, 2013
    I love your story. I check on it at least once a week to see if a new chapter is up. I really hope you continue working on it.
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  • From demonsangel on February 15, 2013
    Nice to see Sev opening up around them a bit. I think it's good for them all and if Draco's parents end up disowning him, he will need a father figure he can lean on. Since it is the christmas holidays is the room going to at least let them have presents? o.O Great chapter as always hun! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From Trelweny on February 15, 2013
    That was both hot and sweet. It's both great and sad how Draco and Hermione each want it to last, believe not only that it won't but that the other Doesn't, and aren't whispering a word of their true hearts' desires. And yet Snape seems to see right through them. That's one of my many, many theories/possibilities for what he meant with what he said.

    I DO hope this story has a happy ending for the pair. Happy beginning.... whatever. ;)

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From Trelweny on February 15, 2013
    This is absolutely delightful. I look forward to when Draco starts believing that his dream could actually become reality.

    The room's manipulations keep making me giggle.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on February 14, 2013
    Another great chapter! Definitely not boring. I liked their interaction & the introduction of wandless magic.
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  • From Solariel89 on February 14, 2013
    Yes! This helped me tremendously! Thank you! :D And it wasn't so much a boring chapter as it was a teaser chapter. :) I'm anxious for the rest of it. :D
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  • From ANON - anaidra on February 14, 2013
    Please keep going. Cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 13, 2013
    ohhh you had me going there- i thought you were going to let them out!! i hoped they would fall in love first so mow there is a chance! :)) yay!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 13, 2013
    Hmmm, now you've got me looking at the chapter for clues. Which, by the way, I stink at, so I don't know why I try. lol But, I do think I picked up on a couple things that might have some bearing on his future decisions. :-) Nothing boring about that chapter at all. I loved his thoughts and her taking note of it, without saying anything to embarrass or push him. Thank you!!! HG4eva
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  • From demonsangel on February 13, 2013
    Very nice job! Now Hermione gets to practice something new lol. Draco should be grateful, with Hermione around, they can not only catch up but surpass their class mates probably. And he should look on the bright side, after sitting hunched over studying for so long, they are going to be sore. Then he can use that as an excuse to touch her which can lead to other things he is hoping for! Great chapter hun!
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  • From ANON - margiere on February 13, 2013
    Intriguing chapter. The wandless magic gives the both so much potential to grow closer. I wonder about that testing facility though. Sounds so dubious. I was so glad to see Draco's reaction to the expected future of the Malfoy Heir. I hope he takes Hermione's advice.
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  • From ANON - Chantal on February 12, 2013
    You are legitimately a good author; trust me I edit enough stories to know this.
    However as if you were writing a novel for publication, you wouldn't leave it incomplete.
    Your work should be your pride.
    It seems as if there are a plethora of fans for this kind of genre, therefore finish a story before you post it.
    People with lives don't really wait on chapter updates, I got to the end and probably will not remember to come back.
    Your goal should be repeat visits, re-reads of this story. So allow your fans the courtesy of a complete thought
    before rushing to post it.

    Keep writing and do something original, your work has merit.

    C.N.
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  • From ANON - bre95 on February 12, 2013
    Thats all you gave us!!!!!! thats cruel!!!!!! But smart. it makes sure we come back for more but still thats unfair!!! lol Thank you for the update though!!!until next time.
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