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Reviews for Locked In

By : goldhorse
  • From ANON - Mark's Pet on January 19, 2013
    Just the tought of Draco and Hermione, locked in a room together makes me smile. Then all those naughty little images of them doing naughty things just take over!?!?!?

    I am so hoping that you too have some naughty plans for our little duo *evil grin*.

    More, please.
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  • From ANON - Cat on January 18, 2013
    Never thought about how you'd have to expel the dark magic. Good thing he thought it through or they'd have ended up dead. So if the room isn't working right-other than locking, how are they supposed to survive in there long? I fear they'll need a bathroom and food and such. Here's hoping it decides to allow them that much. Why do I have a feeling it can only be fixed when it feels their hatred for each other dissipate-like it can only be "heal" or be fixed when they are able to as well. can't wait for more
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  • From demonsangel on January 18, 2013
    Welcome hun! I do love your stories. Interesting chapter. I like how instead of just fizzling out when the room stopped the spell, Draco had to expend the energy in another way, and the use of elemental magic was a brilliant one. I'm glad he was level headed enough to choose carefully what kind he would use. The effect the dark had in him was an interesting twist as well. I have to wonder if they will attempt a patronus in order to contact Dumbles and let him know they are stuck. At the very least, letting someone know is a good idea. Given that elf magic is different, will the house elves be able to get in there to at the very least, give them food and other things they may need. I doubt at this point the room would let them leave even by elf help lol. Great chapter! Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoenix on January 18, 2013
    If your muse is telling you to work on this story, then let her! I like the premise and a lot of times you can work out a block on another story by re directing your brain.
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  • From demonsangel on January 16, 2013
    Poor Draco, it's always hard when people won't give you the space you need. Have to wonder what Sev is up to each night that makes him seem sad o.o Can't wait to read more!
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  • From demonsangel on January 16, 2013
    Ooh, another one from you! How exciting ^^ This sounds interesting. I love how you always leave Sev alive, and make him a vampire XD Interesting twist on letting everyone know. Also, killing off the two most worthless professors of the school in one go? Goodness woman, talk about cleaning house. I can't wait to read more. I have to admit that I think the room isn't working for her because she keeps adding "to avoid malfoy." After something so traumatic happened at the school because of all the hatred and intolerance, one would think the magic itself would rebel against it. Thus, maybe if she omitted the desire to avoid someone she hates, it would respond. Also, I hope Sev isn't always snarly with her...I love how they interact when they get along. I will be looking for more ^^
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  • From Solariel89 on January 15, 2013
    I'm intrigued. :) I'm anxious to see this story unfold in true devious goldhorse fashion.
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  • From ANON - Cat on January 15, 2013
    You've peaked my interest-keep it up!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on January 15, 2013
    good i like it alot update soon
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  • From ANON - Shani on January 15, 2013
    I think it's a beautiful start to a great story.
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