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  • From PLacIDwiCkedNEss on May 18, 2013
    Unspeakables...I didn't see that coming. I have this feeling that defeating Lucius and the faction was a bit too easy and it's far from over. I certainly hope so, I love the drama. Draco and Hermione are absolutely adorable. I love this.
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on May 15, 2013
    Great chappie! More! More! More!
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  • From ANON - Christopher on May 15, 2013
    Sorry, but I have to take issue with the latest chapter. The only way that they could keep a Voldemort from 'happening again' is by killing every single magical and muggle being on the planet. Bottom lining it there.

    Dictators are going to rise for whatever reason. If it's not based on 'blood purity', it will be based on religious beliefs or something else. The problem is that until they do something or kill someone, you have NO RIGHT to intervene and if you do? You are more dangerous and a problem than those people are.
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  • From Solariel89 on May 15, 2013
    AAAAHHHH!!!!!!! By the way, I just have to say it.... You are setting this up for a sequel right now.... Just sayin'..... Anyway.... So glad this was up when I got home. Had three marvelous days off with my boyfriend, but came back to find out I have seven days straight in hell... and it's only getting worse.... So... YES! EXCELLENT WAY TO END THE DAY!!!!!!
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  • From demonsangel on May 14, 2013
    Aw, what a sweet chapter. I love the image of the little baby sucking its thumb before its even born. I hope the meeting with Cissa goes well. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From EmbersandFlame on May 14, 2013
    Loved it. But sad to know that this story is almost at its end. Thank you again for sharing such a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - Christopher on May 13, 2013
    I'm sorry, but the Unspeakables are being pricks here and I REALLY hope that Harry says no to them and helps to take them down. What they are doing is nothing more than blackmail that the Unspeakables should be EXECUTED for doing, period and done with, argument finished forever.
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  • From serialcabbit78 on May 13, 2013
    I have to say.. I read a few chapters of this.. and had to re read them and then decided to read the full story. I like the thought of Snape being a vampire.. and.. we all know that he could have been Harry's father. I hipe to read much mofe form this story!!
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  • From EmbersandFlame on May 12, 2013
    Another great chapter. Thanks.
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  • From Trelweny on May 12, 2013
    oh good. I about had conniptions thinking Severus and his mate died taking their killing curses.
    Unspeakables... really? Hm... except for all the double duty it really sounds like a win-win situation. Especially on the "protect their daughter" front.

    Whyfor does the Auror have no name?

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 12, 2013
    Hi, I didn't see that coming, but I like the idea of it. They get to live their lives and save people in the background. Tiring, but otherwise sounds great! I know they like to have a choice to say yes or no, but minus that one choice, I don't see the problem. lol Thanks!! HG4eva
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  • From demonsangel on May 12, 2013
    Well that was one heck of a twist that I wasn't expecting! Though I always wondered how they could just take people off and experiment on them. Great chapter! I can't wait to read the last two, yet at the same time, I dont wanna! lol.
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  • From ANON - white dragon on May 12, 2013
    thank you so much for such a great story. i always get excited to see it updated and now that i've finished my undergrad coursework, this was a great way to cap off my day. please continue writing stories, they always make my day.
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  • From Kimbovet on May 12, 2013
    Well that helps make more sense of things. I will be sad to see this story end, too.
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  • From ANON - bre95 on May 12, 2013
    OH MY GOSH. That is my only thought. wow that was a chapter. :)
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