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By : goldhorse
  • From ANON - white dragon on April 19, 2013
    thank you so much for continuing this wonderful story. as stated before, i too am in bed waiting to die from bronchitis. turns out i herniated a disc in my neck and bruised my ribs from all the coughing. your stories are great b/c they take my mind off an otherwise horrible world of agony. again, my thanks!
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  • From demonsangel on April 19, 2013
    Aw, I like Venus! She seems fun lol. Strutting snape...hmm, now that is an interesting image. I am glad everyone is getting along better! Someone aught to put Pansy in her place though. Maybe Venus XD Can't wait to read more hun and I hope you are feeling better!
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  • From DB1 on April 19, 2013
    @50 great story. Loving each new update!!! Can't wait for more

    DB
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  • From Solariel89 on April 19, 2013
    Well, considering you're STILL posting full chapters within days of each other, AND you have me checking every hour on the hour for each new one, I'd say you're doing splendidly! :D Also, you suck. lol I have LOTS of questions. ...meanie... lol
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 18, 2013
    Yay!!! I hope they get to be eternally happy now. :-) Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From Solariel89 on April 18, 2013
    Yay! Snape's happy! And another wedding in the works!!!! YAHOO!!!!! Okay, so now when do we get to see Draco beat the snot out of Lucius...? He's gotta get his ass kicked for something! lol Also, what's going to happen with that creep healer...? Knowing you, he'll make a surprise appearance SOMEWHERE....
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  • From ANON - SadieW on April 18, 2013
    This is a review for chapter 38. I knew it would happen. (The pregnancy.) I picked up on the clue in the prophesy. But I didn't expect it to happen now! They're not even out of school yet! And how can she withstand whatever occurs in the woods if she's pregnant? Further, how in the world did Draco's little swimmers drop their "sterile" status?? And I'm so sad for the other couples who are torn apart! :( And oh man...Harry....when he finds out about Venus! (I wonder if she's read all the books, newspaper articles, etc. about her baby brother? Aww) I'm not much of an avid Snape fan so that part of the story, while it does touch me, doesn't drive the story for me. (For me, it's about Venus and Harry and their link to Lily and to each other.) This is a well-written story and I look forward to the other chapters that you've already posted (I'm coming into this late.). Thanks and keep it up!
    Cheers,
    Sadie
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on April 17, 2013
    Yay!!, Naomi's back! Now for the double wedding. Could it be a triple wedding with Snape & Naomi? Maybe the Muse wants you to finish this story before she lets you write on the other 2 stories. Keep on plugin' on!
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  • From ANON - margiere on April 17, 2013
    Yeah, Naomi is back. I'm so happy for Severus. He has his family safe and together for the first time. That man so deserves all the happiest and love he can get. Hopefully the loving part doesn't tire him out to much. Although it would be extremely funny, I don't think the student body of Hogwarts is ready to see a bone-wary and deliriously happy Professor Snape. The poor kids are still getting us to Hermione and Draco's relationship, a grinning Snape may cause chaos.

    I have a question about Draco's former marriage contract. If he was to marry Pansy, what has she been doing the last couple of months? Draco's 'dating' relationship with Hermione is common knowledge at Hogwarts now so is she just looking at it as his last hurrah before she gets him? Or are their friends keeping her away from the couple? Maybe Pansy has her own secret love interest somewhere in the Castle?

    And Draco's dear father has been quite silent. I kind of hoped that Severus would be the one to put Lucius in his place for his cruel comment about Severus not being a real father. Maybe Narcissa can free herself and take the man down a few pegs. Just as long as in his final moments Lucius gets to see everything he has lied, cheated, bullied and killed to get go drain the drain and he will have less than nothing. A forgotten waste of a man (not even the honor of being consider a wizard). I think being forgotten and dismissed by everyone would be a punishment that Lucius enormous ego couldn't take. Sometime just killing off the criminals is not enough of a punishment, don't get me wrong some evil simply needs to die. I just get happy thinking about a magic-less Lucius working as a Walmart Greeter:-)
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  • From demonsangel on April 17, 2013
    Glad she is back! I'm surprised Sev didn't just flat out tackle her lol. Ooh, more weddings! Wonderful news. This is going to cause quite the stir around the school lol. Poor Hermione though, morning sickness sucks. Can't wait to read more hun! Good luck with the other two stories.
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  • From DB1 on April 17, 2013
    @48 love it!!! Update!!


    DB
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  • From demonsangel on April 16, 2013
    Wow, they are really pushing for this aren't they? Good for them! If this works, there will be two more happy couples! Great chapter hun, and thanks for explaining that for me!
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  • From ANON - anaidra on April 16, 2013
    Chap 47 and 48 - good job! :) Also Draco and Hermione are doing really good job helping others find their happiness. And I loved it when Draco pushed Nott againts the wall ;). It is nice to see how he protect and defend Hermione. Cant wait for update.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 16, 2013
    Well my fingers are crossed for them. I hope they get some supporters quickly, because I have a feeling Lucius will be appearing again soon. EEK! I loved the scene with Draco and Theo. Thank you!! HG4eva
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  • From Solariel89 on April 16, 2013
    Yay!!!!! I get a little confused on the technical stuff, sometimes.... Especially since I'm usually reading these at three in the morning. And shock therapy is an EXCELLENT strategy. :D If you're going to change the world, jump in with both feet. Half-assed gets you nowhere.

    P.S.: I have the same problem all the time. Mine gets so bad that my chapters have been months apart. I had 1 year and 14 days between chapters 8 and 9. So, yeah.... As far as I can remember, the most you've gone is a month.... So, yeah. Don't feel bad. :)
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