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By : goldhorse
  • From Tinkerbabe7 on April 16, 2013
    looooooooooooooooooooooooving it :D
    This story is so amazing with awesome twist.
    I can't wait to see what happens next ;)
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  • From ANON - AtlanteanDiva on April 15, 2013
    I've very much enjoyed this story. I'm very happy that it has focused mostly on Hermione and Draco. Your other stories spend to much time focusing on other pairings, which is one of the reason why I never finish them. The other reason is that the stories are often bogged down with either superfluous detail or to much filler.

    You know how to pull a reader in with your work, which is something many authors lack.If you do decide to publish in the future (I think you'd do well) get a good editor because he/she will help you focus your story and cut the fat.

    Again, I really like this story.

    eta:I don't mind the side pairings in this story because you're not spending to many words on them, unlike in your other stories.
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  • From Solariel89 on April 15, 2013
    As someone who works the night shift of a very physically demanding job every day of the week, I feel for you. It sucks. Anyway....

    So... if Daphne's still a virgin, and the contract is still intact, what now...? Is there another way to wheedle their way out of it...? I'm sure there has to be someone they can bribe, persuade, and/or threaten to get this thing voided, yeah...?
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 14, 2013
    Hello! I am not sure if I reviewed the last one, so if I didn't, I do apologize. I have had a VERY busy weekend with the opening of my show and rehearsals for another. lol But anyway... another lovely chapter and I hope they are right that Naomi will find her child, and therefore Severus. :-) Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From demonsangel on April 14, 2013
    Great chapter as always. I am slightly confused on the marriage contract thing though, are you saying that because of the magic placed on them due to the contract itself that if they sleep with each other it is considered a marriage, or if they sleep with someone else, ie, the one they really want, it is considered a marriage? Or either/or? Anyways, can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - anaidra on April 14, 2013
    More please :)!
    So glad they are helping Daphne and Theo.
    And what was it at the end of the chapter? Hermione fighting with everything she had againts Dracos probation ;).
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  • From ANON - Marji on April 12, 2013
    This story makes me so giddy. I absolutely love when Draco shows his protective masculine side *sigh*. I so hope that Theo and Daphne end up with who they love. All of these couples are like the never ending cycle of misery and hopefully the cycle is broken. Please update soon I am defiantly looking forward to the next chapter.

    P.S. I can totally commiserate with whatever sicky germs you have because I have the sunburn from hell and everyone at school insist on telling me I have a sunburn and the proceeding to touch it and let me tell you it really hurts! So anyway I hope you feel better.
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  • From Solariel89 on April 12, 2013
    The game is afoot! :D I really hope they can give back the dowry. It's nice to know Nott can make his own decisions with his life.
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  • From EmbersandFlame on April 12, 2013
    I absolutely love this story. Thank you for posting so frequently.
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  • From ANON - Kimbovet on April 12, 2013
    More, more please. Viva revolution!!!
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  • From demonsangel on April 12, 2013
    Great chapter! I hope they can get them out of the marriages. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Marji on April 12, 2013
    Oh My Gods! I hate you, I hate you, I hate you. You just had to leave a damn cliffhanger didn't you. I very nearly had and aneurism when I read the last line, and I nearly fell off my chair. I absolutely adore "Locked In", you writing style is magnificent, the grammar is accurate, the plot is intriguing and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. May the Muses look favorably upon you and bring lots of inspiration.
    Sincerely Your Adoring Fan,
    Marjorie (Marji)
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoneix on April 11, 2013
    AArrggghh!! I feel like we're dangling by our fingertips, gain a handhold and then *someone* pours massage oil on the rocks. (Narrowed eyes and foot tapping). I cannot wait until Narcissa finds out not only is she going to be a grandmother, but Draco is cleverly providing her with a girl. I also extremely hopeful (big, puppy dog eyes) that the other star crossed lovers get their happy endings and that our happy couple is starting a revolution. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - margiere on April 11, 2013
    Ok, so maybe Ron has more than 2 brain cells knocking around in his head. I just wish he thought everything out like that comment he made about Hermione's future child. Ron really can be an insensitive pig when he doesn't think things through. I like how Draco is taking a different path in announcing his and Hermione's relationship. Hiding their love didn't work for any of the past couples so a more direct route will have the effort the castle (and everyone else) is hoping for.

    Venus is wonderful. I had hope she would be a good fit with the group. Since she didn't go to Hogwarts she shouldn't be lumped into the house prejudices. So maybe she can be kind of an ambassador to all the houses. One of the biggest problem with Hogwarts was that the houses didn't really intermingle outside of the classroom. Hold on, does the school at large know the she is Snape's daughter? If they do than that blows my theory out of the water. Maybe not, she is still Harry Potter's sister. Just forget I said anything, this could get confusing if I keep this up!
    I knew it wouldn't bee long before you through another cliffie at us. Who knows, maybe Daphne has some inside knowldge that could help her sister?
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  • From Solariel89 on April 11, 2013
    RON SAID SOMETHING INTELLIGENT!!!!! :O Mark this day on the damn calendar! :D And I do so hope they've found a loophole in the contract. No one deserves to be locked into a marriage they don't want to be in.... :( Now the question is... Did anyone overhear Ron talking about Hermione and Draco's kid...? Not everyone in Hogwarts is as understanding as their little group.....
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