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Reviews for The Mirror of Erised

By : tbird1965
  • From xxfawnpwincessxx on September 08, 2015
    Poor Hermione! She just found out about the woman in the mirror?
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 14, 2013
    SSSSSSSSSSSSSSS



    Hermione folded up the Invisibility cloak and tucked it under her arm as she walked through the deserted castle corridors. The early morning light cast a soft glow over the stone walls. She had left him sleeping, exhausted after making love for the third time. Her legs ached and she wondered vaguely if she had any pain potion handy in her dorm room. She didn't feel guilty about leaving him sleeping, sure that he would appreciate avoiding the awkward moment when they would have to part ways as much as she did. A small thrill ran through her as she remembered how he had looked and sounded when he had guided her hand down to his hard cock and shyly asked if she would get on her hands and knees for him. He had made her come again, his large hands running up and down her spine, while his thighs and balls slapped against the swell of her arse. He had cried out her name, her first name, when he had come, his cock pulsing inside her as it emptied. Reaching the portrait opening to the Gryffindor common room, she leaned forward and whispered
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 14, 2013
    'Oh Merlin!' Hermione had to slap her hand over her mouth to stop herself from gasping, when he dropped the robe to the floor and sat naked in the chair. From her place on the floor she had a clear view of his long lean frame. 'Oh Merlin, Oh Merlin, Oh Merlin.' She screamed inside her head as he wrapped his hand around his semi hard cock, rubbing his thumb across the ruddy tip. Staring into the mirror, he ran his hand up and down his cock until it stood up hard and eager. Hermione was disappointed to see she could only catch a glimpse of what the mirror showed, two shadowy figures moving together in what appeared to be the throes of passion. 'Who could it be?' She wondered. 'It must be him, but who does he see himself making love to?' Focusing her attention back on the chair, her heart thudded in her chest as she watched the Potions Master stroke himself.

    IF YOUR GOING TO WRITE A STORY SUCH A THIS PLEASE GET THE FACTS CORRECT AS JUST SO YOU KNOW THAT CANT HAPPEN BECAUSE whatever it is that severus see in the mirror Hermione cant see it even if she was to stand in front of it as the same time as him she wont see it unless its what she feel truly at the time and even then she wont see it like like how ron in first year couldn't see what harry in first year saw!! harry saw his parents but Ron saw him self as prefect and etc!!!! I wonder what they would see now though if harry and ron looked into it???!!!
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  • From ANON - AriHera on February 23, 2013
    Sequel?
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  • From ANON - Kirida on January 23, 2013
    Oh..goodness!! Do I truly enjoyed this story, though I did want to read more about what would happen after their time together in front of the Erised Mirror. Please keep me in mind, if you do find yourself writing more about this storyline. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.
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  • From Lauren_W on January 22, 2013
    This was glorious :)
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  • From SherlockedInSlytherin on January 21, 2013
    I loved this story. It was hot and sweet and a little sad and I enjoyed it so much. I have such a soft spot for virgin!snape.
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  • From IrishChic20 on January 21, 2013
    Noooo! Please don't leave it there! The poor man had a horrible childhood, a horrible adolescence, and spent 20 years as a spy only for that biatch JK Rowling to kill him off! His entire life was a tragedy! Please consider writing a bit more and giving him and Hermione the happy ending they deserve. After all, you wouldn't want her to end up with that gobshite Ron, would you? Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Missycam on January 21, 2013
    Beautiful story!
    Thanks for the ride ;-)
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  • From ANON - wick on January 20, 2013
    ....wowza....
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  • From ANON - Cat on January 20, 2013
    Gah you're evil ending it there!
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  • From ANON - Missycam on January 19, 2013
    Huh... What!? You end the chapter here!?
    More, please! ;-P and thank you ;-)
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  • From Lauren_W on January 19, 2013
    This story is incredible. I always love a virgin Snape ;)
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  • From IrishChic20 on January 19, 2013
    I can't believe you stopped it there! What an evil cliffie! More soon please. Like, in the next 30 minutes would be great! Lol!
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  • From ANON - Mellana on January 19, 2013
    McClaggen?? What??
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