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By : HeavyMist

From ANON - Kendogurl on August 29, 2020
This is the first time I've ever left a review and while I'm only on Chapter 18, I love what I've read so far and am looking forward to reading the future chapters.
I love how Voldemort is acting towards Hermione I see so much potential and hope as I read on it shines through. He's Voldemort written perfectly!

I appreciate how you make sure to not involve rape in your story, the victim joining in on the pleasure is one thing but plain RAPE is disgusting and I find very immoral.

let the reading continue.

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From ANON - Kendogurl on August 27, 2020
This is the first time I've ever left a review and while I'm only on Chapter 18, I love what I've read so far and am looking forward to reading the future chapters.
I love how Voldemort is acting towards Hermione I see so much potential and hope as I read on it shines through. He's Voldemort written perfectly!

I appreciate how you make sure to not involve rape in your story, the victim joining in on the pleasure is one thing but plain RAPE is disgusting and I find very immoral.

let the reading continue.

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From ajenni on August 15, 2014
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story i cant brlieve its over but it was brilliant
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From ANON - aberlioness on August 11, 2014
Just a small note to say even though this story is done and dusted... only because it's something that's rather jarring to a British reader - British (and European men for that matter) are not circumcised. Whilst it's routine in the US, it's seen as barbaric and unnecessary in Europe (and as such the NHS won't even perform it on Jewish or Muslim babies). Otherwise this is a well written foray into a rare pairing.
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From ANON - Lauren on June 26, 2013
I spent the entirety of today reading this story. I fell in love with it early on, and didn't look back. I wanted to wait until the end to review, and I was so devastated to read about your mother's passing. I wish you all the strength in the world, my love. You are a gifted with a beautiful mind and a way with words. Please consider writing again in the future. For now, know that you have a community of people who are inspired by you and who wish you the best. Take care.
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From MariaTeresaQuintanar on June 05, 2013
My well wishes go out to you and yours. Don't worry about the story. It's a story. You lost your mother and, as such, have bigger things to deal with than fanfiction. Take care.
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From ANON - Ice Empress on May 23, 2013
Hi love I'm sorry I haven't reviewed and I'm ending my very deepest and sincere condolences on your poor departed Mother's passing. I know how hard it is to lose a family member. I haven't reviewed the last chapter due to my uncle's inoperable liver cancer and making plans for my family. It doesn't compare to your pain but I understand. I have loved and enjoyed this story to the very end. You have such an erotic, technical, dynamically fluid style of writing that makes my dirty mind sing. As for the last chapter it was lovely and interesting to see a slice of life for Voldemort and Hermione. There will always be some type of slutty and desperate female who will drool over his dark good looks. Also the mention of subspace was simply beautiful and I envy Hermione. I truly hope you come back one day and continue to write in this delicious dark kind of love known as Voldemort and Hermione. I wish you fortitude and strength during this trying time. Many hugs and affection my darling author.
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From ANON - Annie on May 23, 2013
Wow. Just wanted to say what an amazing story. Incredibly well written, brilliant plot line and some fabulous twists. You are a very talented writer.
Thank you for such a great story.

I am so sorry forum loss. Stay strong, xxxxx
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From Bogarto on May 20, 2013
I'm very sorry for your loss! I'm also sorry that this is my first review even though I've read your fic from the beginning.

I am generally a bad reviewer, partially because I usually stick to completed fics, but mainly because I don't take advantage of the anonymity that the Internet offers. Since I've only ever admitted to a couple people that I read fanfic, I tend to continue that secrecy and "closet reading" when it comes to reviewing as well. Adding to that the genre of this fic is a bit more on the taboo side and I tend to hide even deeper in the closet. None of that is a good excuse when considering your message to the readers, but i imagine I'm not the only reader that "hides" from reviewing. You are right of course...what motivation do writers here have if they don't get any feedback? It should be obvious, but your message should probably be posted in bold at the beginning of every fic.

Now for the actual review I have thoroughly enjoyed your story! I usually stick to Dramione, but my "dark" side loves stories with an initially reluctant slave and master theme (most that I've read have been original fiction though), so I've read the occasional non-Dramione that appear to fit that mold. Of that style, yours will definitely be remembered among the best I've ever read. At times it felt too descriptive but not to the detriment of the overall flow. You did a great job of twisting the canon plot and I actually believed that LV was in the right. You did so well that I actually looked at Dumbledore a bit differently when watching a few of the movies in the past months. You also did one of my favorite things in making Ron a villain...hate hate hate Ron. I might have liked it better with Draco as the hero, but even though I usually see LV as evil, you had me liking him in the end.

As the story progressed I had invisioned it going long past the stage of Hermione's acceptance and their marriage. I figured we would see the many ways that they would grow after their bonding. LV had already made huge social, economical, political, and other changes, but I got the feeling that even he expected great things from Hermione once she stood at his side. I'm not sure if the story arc was consistent with your original plans, but I hope it didn't get cut back because of those of us that failed to review. If it did then that would be even more of a reason for us all to review because it is a big loss to the community to lose out on quality writing.

Again, I'm sorry if I helped contribute to your frustration with lack of reviews. Based on the hits I'm sure you had lots of silent fans. I hope you won't be discouraged to write more in the future. Please accept my condolences for your loss and I hope for all the best for you and your family.
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From Burnedx2 on May 20, 2013
I'm sorry to hear about your mother. You do what you need to. For what it's worth, I quite enjoyed your story. The smut was wonderful :) If we're lucky maybe we'll see you again.
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From ANON - Lunalyne on May 20, 2013
First of all, I'm really sorry about your mother and I hope that you'll be ok.

So, I've been reading this story for awhile and I absolutely love it and I'm really sorry that you haven't heard from me before, I most definitely am absolutely horrible at reviewing and should do it more often, not when it's practically too late.

But better late than never, right?

I love this story, I started reading it when it first popped up. To be honest, I didn't like it too much at first with all the information and stuff (don't get me wrong, I really liked that aspect too), I felt like I had to wait for the actual story to unfold. When it did, I fell in love. I find your story to be funny, intelligent, sexy and romantic and I am amazed at what you can do and how you can make things come to life.

I hate that you are going to stop the story at this point, but I completely understand your reasoning.

I only hope that you will one day decide that this story is indeed forth completely finishing and that you can find it to forgive an avid reader, who finds reviewing one of the most terrifying things to do.

Much love,

Lunalyne

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From ANON - Karo on May 20, 2013
Your story is AMAZING!!!!! I just spent my whole weekend reading chapter after chapter, completely unable to stop. Your characters are mesmerizing and your ideas are so unbeliebably unique! I loved your Voldemort and your Hermione is just perfect! Even if you decide to leave it like this it's still perfect. I just wanted to let you know just how much fun it was for me to read your story.

I know these words may sound empty from a total stranger (and it's not like they could ever sooth an unsoothable ache), but I'm so incredibly sorry for your loss!
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From LadyAngelEuropas on May 20, 2013
I'm so sorry to hear of your loss. My thoughts are with you in this tough time. This has been an amazing story. Thank You for taking the time to let us all read it.
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From ANON - clarinetchik06 on May 20, 2013
I'm terribly sorry to hear about your loss! My thoughts and prayers are with your family.
I'm also very sorry I've not reviewed before. I've been enjoying this story quite a bit, but it seems as if every time I sit down to read a chapter, something else comes up and it ends up slipping my mind. It's no excuse, but I wanted you to know that your work was appreciated.
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From Jewels812 on May 20, 2013
I am sorry to hear about your mother. Take care of yourself and know that there are always people saying a prayer for you.

I have enjoyed this story from the beginning and enjoyed your idea but did feel myself waining in reading. Here is my main reason for this; I didn't think the characters spoke enough to one another, they reflected into their own minds about situations but not enough conversation between them. It is your story and if that is how you want to write you did a great job of writing it but I like more interaction between the characters when I read. I felt that there should have been a chapter where they talked with one another about what he expected from her with their relationship, she needed to be able to talk to him and i never got that she really could. I did get the feeling he loved her and cherished her above all others but I feel like they needed to talk more and relect less on what she was feeling.

Overall I did enjoy this story and I know I rambled above and I hate to say anything negative to writers when I know they are doing this as their hobby and for their own enjoyment. It was a well thought out story that was extremely complex.
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