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By : HeavyMist

From ANON - Tundeboszi on May 13, 2013
Hello Darling! Wonderfull chapter I love your story I dont forget you. Keep going Xxxx
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From ANON - Ice Empress on May 11, 2013
Beautiful! I'm sorry I didnt review the other day my darling author but I loved both chapters. The mesmerizing detail that went into discribing the beautiful art of rope binding is simply craveable. I enjoyed the previous chapter also and I can see how on this chapter Hermione would be overtaken by being immortal along side her dominate mate. I'm so sad that this story is ending and I can't wait for more of your brilliant writing to grace this delicious site. I'm sorry that we didnt get the wedding scene since Im sure Voldemort did something dirty to his bride to be. Breathlessly awaiting the next chapters.
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From ANON - Tundeboszi on May 05, 2013
It is a wonderful story I hope you write a new one
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From ANON - Ice Empress on May 03, 2013
My darling love! This chapter was AMAZING! The showing of his real face with such exquisite detail and reverence of his "hot and sexiness" is mind blowing. The twisted machications of the mind of Lord Voldemort is better than any psychologist. Facing your greatest nightmare and willing surrendering to them would be greater than seeing a beautiful face and falling into deep lust but never true love wouldnt satisfy anything for either of them. she realizes even more in this chapter: Tom Riddle is playing for keeps. This simple yet complex entwining of the past, present and future is mind boggling and incrinate.He was absolutely right but I'm going to miss those red glowing eyes shimmering or burning with red hit lust. The silky timbre of his voice calling her name, explaining how much in so few words he needs and must have her undivided love and submission. Then he seamlessly and shamelessly tells her pick out a wedding gown love, don't worry about anything Narcissa has you covered! Well what a way to tell someone your getting married! I can't wait for the next chapter and to see Hermione's dazed reaction. Throw in some sassiness and make him fuck her until she agrees since she's blinded by his potent mix of pain and pleasure.
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From ANON - His4Ever on May 02, 2013
Skippedy doo dahinnnn...into the review room!!!!!!.....hey hey HM...betcha thought I forgot about you....no sir-reeeee....still here...just real life busy and crazy!!!!!! Dances over to you typing away......gives you and that proof reading hubby of yours two hip checks...lol........

Annnnnndddd now for the serious down low ..*w*....I have loved this story from the get go......I just knew the sexiest Dom/Master in the universe was back to His original sexy self......though like Hermione I feel head over heels in lust/love with His snaky version.....about dies as Hermione started her freak attack in bed ..thinking she was with a stranger....
My heart is a bleeding to think this story is wrapping up....I'm still waiting for this happy slave potion...hmmmmmmm....how in the world is He going to get her to drink it...I can't see Him asking her too and even if He tells her I see one big punishment on the way for her...because I mean heck she already love Him in either form......

Alright I wait as always with bated breath and towels galore....
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From ANON - Tundeboszi on April 27, 2013
Anather great chapter. I LOVE IT
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From ANON - Ice Empress on April 27, 2013
You sexual goddess! This chapter instantly made me lose my already lose morally ambiguous mind! The correct thoughts and know how that sex does actually hurt the first time and is no where near the flowery mess that most people write was simply scientifically perfect. Now Voldemort calling his previous pet baby and said he loved her?! I melted and became a boneless mass who lost her breath and saw the cosmos bloom in front of my eyes. This was such a sensual, fucking filthy chapter I believe Hermione needs to marry him immediately and not to mention go cut those floppy tits off that rude waitress. I can't wait for more chapters, I'm too high from your wonderful prose to write a decent review. My apologies but it was so amazing!
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From ANON - slytherinish on April 24, 2013
wow, i love this fic! It's the first time i read the whole story written 'the right way' and i also love the way you built the relationship between voldy and hermione.... The perfect D/s couple (together with sev/herm)... I hope I could read about another session and some more smut... You write very well both *wink*compliments again
slytherinish
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From ANON - notlori925 on April 22, 2013
Yay for another great chapter. Your idea is a very interesting take on the original plot. Turning everything around to make Dumbledore out to be the bad guy. You support it wonderfully. Dumbledore always seemed like he could be a villain if given the chance. He definitely made some questionable choices at times.
I also like the flirting going on. Sexy! Looking forward to more!
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From ANON - Ice Empress on April 22, 2013
My sweet slave! You are fantastic. I love this chapter the loose ends are tied up and I'm ready for dirty sex between Voldemort and Hermione. I'm shocked she could even follow the conversation as aroused and JEALOUS she is. Saggy mammory glands my left booty cheek! I'm shocked her waspish tongue didn't run away with her and cause Voldemort to spank her in public and cause her to orgasm in front of everyone. I can't wait until he proclaims her his Supreme Queen to the whole world. I want very dirty dominating sex and I can definitely tell it will be since he dragged her from the table. She was trembling in need I could feel it through the screen and is so desperately on the edge to orgasm it's amazing no one has noticed. Or maybe they just don't want to risk his displeasure. Anyways, I'm anxiously waiting for her Acceptance! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - notlori925 on April 21, 2013
Caught up on the last few chapters. Enjoying your story very much. Very interesting take on the whole storyline, particularly the machinations of Dumbledore. And very intriguing that Snape is in a relationship of any kind with Lavender of all people. Glad to see though that Hermione has some women to help her better understand her new found situation. Thanks for continuing!
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From ANON - Holly on April 19, 2013
I like the idea, but it's kind of awkward in the reading. Almost every sentence is a run-on sentence, and it's very, very difficult to read a paragraph and understand it the first time through.
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From ANON - Ice Empress on April 18, 2013
Heavy Mist may I say I love your devious, sensual, dark and absolute twisted mind that devises these plots and the way it seems to caress my mind with its fluid symmetry and words. I love how Hermione's resistance melted from our Lordship's sinful and seductive lip licking! LL Cool J eat your heart out baby! The soul hard fucking was amazing I felt like I was staring into Voldemort's hypnotic eyes just demanding me to submit. You my dear have alleviated my depression and given me the uplifting happiness with this chapter. The dark manipulations of Albus make me scream to see the pensive of their punishments and I can't wait to hear more about the Weasles. May I beg prettily for more fucking? Hermione restrained by his magic and given so many orgasms that she blacks out and before getting this gift allows herself to beg and prove her need and want to be his sub? I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - Nathoca Malfoy on April 18, 2013
This fic is perfect! Amazing! But I tough Hermione would be mad about the magical cores, she would be almost insane to read a book about it. Even more now that they did what they did in front of everybody. If I were her, I would be crazy to go to library... Hogwarts library would have a book about it? If I remember well, Hermione said she had already read something about it... Please, don't take to long to update. Kisses.
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From Haydron on April 18, 2013
Tease! This chapter was clearly angled at all those dramione fans out there. They were almost having a civil conversation, which was really weird, but I'm digging it and loving the insightful Malfoy. I noticed your story needs a bit of betaing in terms of putting punctuation in the appropriate place. I think you even capitalised in the middle of a sentence, several times too, and it wasn't even a noun you were capitalising!

Gee. I'm stoked :D
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