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Reviews for Plenitude

By : HeavyMist
  • From Haydron on April 18, 2013
    Hey! I visted this story a few days ago, and I just want to say Hermione/Tom Riddle is my favourite ship, right after dramione :D Considering english isn't your first lang, there are a lot of words used here that even I don't know! It's written well and I'm excited to read more.
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  • From ANON - Tundeboszi on April 16, 2013
    Sorry I didnt rewiew. I havent had time to read and I just catch your story. I love it what can I say
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  • From ANON - Ice Empress on April 16, 2013
    Hermione, Hermione. Such a suditty, always jumping to conclusions, overly emotional, even slightly prudish when it comes to sex little know it all! Hermione in this chapter acts like a scandalized virgin who has read porn for the first time. Deeply aroused, but her earlier training by her self imposed restrictions from Hogwarrs make her gasp like a 90 year old cat lady who never had sex or married. Lavender's vaguely detailed attempt at relieving the pain was very clinical and written in a tastefulanner so extreme cusps to you and your fluid writing skills. I wasn't shocked at all that Snapey-Pooh punished her after that nickname and I'm quite happy you put Snapey in a sarcastic but caring situation. Narcissa is the perfect submissive sister to talk to since she has many years and deeper insight to share and her advice was so patient and direct. I love that they are so adamant about Voldemort's interest in Hermione. She definitely needs more punishment with the way she assumes things, it's getting a little irritating since she can grasp a lesson and it slips away so quickly. But now hopefully she can think rationally and have a conversation with Voldemort and explain her side and get more details from him. Thanks for the update and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Burnedx2 on April 16, 2013
    Haha loved Lavender's nickname for Snape. I do enjoy reading about the trio of Slytherins (Lucy, Sev, and Voldie). You've chosen a good mix of characters. Lavender is an interesting choice, but you've included her well. I can't wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - Ice Empress on April 13, 2013
    OMG!!!! That sizzling claiming kiss made me lose it. Hemione was so wound up at being dismissed and he so easily soothed her ruffled feathers while giving her the psychological boost she needed and also training her with positive and deliciously, dirty, naughty negative reinforcement. Absolutely delicious! But Lavender killed me she's such an annoying character to me and I'm curious about the way you will present her, from what I've read so far she isn't that bad. Too giggly and bubbly for my taste but very in line with her portrayed self. Narcissa was simply perfect! Her poise, sweetness and absolute pleasure at being owned and claimed and the dreamy "I was punished in front of two Masters". She also seems to view Hermione as a daughter for the sweet way ahe cared for Draco and aoon to be sister is submissiveness. Simply brilliant! I also enjoyed the previous chapter it was quite well written also. I must say I'm worried about Hermione's brain she has so many mood swings and zone out moments that it seems that she will burst a blood vessel with her silly tantrums but nevertheless she is interesting. And giving Ms.KIA such a long and dangerous cane, quite arousing and dirty! I cant wait for the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - Tika on April 13, 2013
    Great chapter. I can't wait to hear what Lavender with Snape. Hope you manage to fight off the writers block!
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  • From ANON - mkv on April 10, 2013
    You are awesome! I have cannot stop reading your chapters. Hermione's internal monologue is sooo funny! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!! I cannot wait to see what happens next! LV seems sooo hot! I love the LV-HG pair!
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  • From ANON - Tika on April 10, 2013
    Please continue writing. Your story is addicting and I have really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for writing.
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  • From ANON - notlori925 on April 10, 2013
    Finished all of the current chapters. This is a great story. I hope you continue it and post more soon. Thank you for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Kara on April 01, 2013
    Screw you and your cliff hangers. Is Remus headmaster or something? That'd be kinda awesome.

    I was actually referencing 50 shades of grey in my last review. It started as a twilight fanfiction, and then ffn went on its deletion rampage and she just changed a few details for a copyright purposes and got it published. And once it did, a billion and two people decided to write D/s fanfics off of the slew of misinformation in that book and it makes my head hurt.
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  • From ANON - Ice Empress on April 01, 2013
    Im in tears! That Pureblooded Pekinese bitch Narcissa! I loved this chapter its simply delicious chocolate covered passion fruit! LV is being so malciously cruel yet in doing so is showing her how she ticks. She had a breakthrough that was quiet but broke her sound barrier: she's a masochistic little bookworm and he's the one who can give her what she wants and needs. Oh Snape, Snape, my juicy grape. That's beyond funny I wonder if she will get a taste of LV's jealousy when Lavender regales Hermione with orgasm enducing Tales of Deviance by Prof. Snape! I love it! Your work is as arousing and causing me to beg for more. Please for my sake?
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  • From ANON - Mark's Pet on March 30, 2013
    HM,

    This was a truely elequent and beautiful chapter. Your description of the TPE (Total Power Exchange)was better than I have read in ANY book on the subject.

    I can totally see Narcissa as a sub. Not so much Lavender, but I can't wait to see it through your eyes.

    I don't know how else to tell you...this was a truely AWESOME chapter *lump in my throat and tears in my eyes*. Especially for a submissive. THANK YOU!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ice Empress on March 28, 2013
    HeavyMist you have officially reduced me to a burning mass of goo! The two chapters have been simply sublime and My Lord wanting to cuddle? Simply amazing and oh so realistic; sadly I think you have ruined me for mortal men and other stories besides you and the other amazing Volmoine goddesses. I can't wait for more chapters, especially since Hermione will be sitting and talking to Narcissa, who is now an engima to her with her dual Ice Bitch rememberance of her and this new she's a perfect and happy submissive and to Lavender, the female who irritated her by being beauty and "Won Won" obsessed. And I simply adore the way she is blossoming in the warmth that Lord Voldemort is inspiring for her and its so realistic with her losing control and having her walls crumble and afterwards she determinedly tries to rebuild and yet they become weaker each time. Smashing good job!
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  • From ANON - Kara on March 27, 2013
    You win. I literally had to get up and walk away for a few moments due to fangirling about a third of the way through. It really is nice, though, to see a D/s fic that doesn't seem to have its roots in the Twilight-fanfic-that-must-not-be-named and has some knowledge behind it. And I also like cuddly Voldemort. Cuddly Voldemort's cute ... okay, I need sleep ...

    On an unrelated note, I'm having more trouble seeing Lavender as a submissive than Narcissa. I can, however, see Lavender calling Snape "Sev-sev" and Snape hexing her into oblivion.
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  • From ANON - Aisa on March 26, 2013
    It is great so hot and sexy more more pleade update soon
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