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By : HeavyMist

From ANON - Iceprincess on March 26, 2013
Oh my god this is my favorite chapter so hot. I love your story sorry to didtnt rewiew before but Im lazy maybe Our lord could spank me to. ;)
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From ANON - lysana on March 25, 2013
Anather great chapter thank you
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From ANON - Mark's Pet on March 22, 2013
HM,

*panting* that was an AWESOMELY exhausting chapter!!!!! I am sooo glad that I had the towel on the seat before I started reading!

Oh my gosh, that is THE BEST chapter I have ever read!!!

Now, I have to go take a cold shower; since my Master is not available *sob*.

I know that it took a while, but I don't know how many of these types of chapters my heart can take!?!?!?!?!

MORE...PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Mark's Pet on March 21, 2013
HM,

Oh my gosh, that was sooo H-O-T!!! And all that happened was touching and looking at the dungeon. The visualization was 'off the charts' from your AWESOME prose. This is one of the things that I LOVE about your writing.

Now the antisipation for the punishment part is 'sky high'!!!!!!!!

LV's dugeon is an absolute DREAM for any submissive *rapidly beating heart*!

Please, please, please...don't keep me waiting too long. Or I may spontaneously combust!!!!!

p.s. I loved the preview and can't wait!
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From ANON - Tundeboszi on March 21, 2013
When I read your story I turn to be greedy I always want more. Please I beg you I love you Update soon. I hope Hermione didnt hurt much
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From ANON - Ice Empress on March 21, 2013
Ok I've officially melted into a puddle of lustful goo! This slow, decadent, sensual and heavily dirty build up is driving me crazy! I really love the way you twist the words into delicious mind chocolate fuckery. I can't wait until Our Lord claims his reluctantly willing slave! I appreciate the slow peeling of betrayal that Hermione is finding out, it's like the poor girl can't get a break! Every chapter is shaping and molding her into the woman she was always meant to be. I can't wait until LV shows her the pensive of the Weasley sluts and males and their true thoughts and desires to break her. This story is as usual fabulous and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - Mark's Pet on March 19, 2013
HM,

Guys (LV, SS, & others), when are you going to learn, that information overload, is still detrimental to Hermoine's psyce. Hence the passing out...AGAIN.

I enjoyed the story that Malfoy told about Molly and her aunt. Seems being a 'trollop' runs in the family (Ginny too). I liked how he pulled in the deceipt of Albus. Better that Malfoy told her and not LV. She might not have believed him about Harry's parents.

Now to the best parts...in my humble opinion. Which is why I get to review these stories *smart-ass smirk*.

'Shoeshine Girl'; priceless. Especially when Hermoine empties the couldron of black polish on KIA. Take that you smart-ass bitch *arm pumping*!!!!!!!

The "3 Musketeers" referance was wonderful. Yes, we MUST have LV, SS, and LM involved if the dark side wins *duh*. And Hermoine would never be d'Artagnan...she would definatly be the 'damsel in distress', that the Musketeers MUST save *bang head on desk, laughing so hard*.

You have finally articulated what many of your readers have always thought. "All Slytherins' male students should have (wonderful description) fucking voice?!!!!!!! YES, YES, YES...they must. That is why we end up with 'damp knickers' when they speak and could orgasm if they get too close and talk dirty to us with that voice *melting into a puddle, while thinking about it*!!!!!!!!!!!!!

As far as the a-n-t-i-s-i-p-a-t-i-o-n...I will willingly wait. Especially when you give teasers (punishment in his dungeon). I am glad I had a towel handy when I read that!?!?!?!?!

So, all I have left to say is...More PLEASE & Soon!
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From ANON - Tundeboszi on March 19, 2013
Oh you are very good you finish a chapter and I m waiting a new one
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From ANON - selene on March 18, 2013
Oh Lucius shows up I love him. Please update soon
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From ANON - Mark's Pet on March 15, 2013
HM,

What a way to discover the 'man behind the curtian' of the great and powerful Dumbledore! And you even had KIA speachless, in the end. Poor Hermoine, she has always believed and stuck to her convictions of what she was "told" was 'right and good'. Especially in a world she knew nothing about prior to her impressionable age of eleven. But once she knows the truth, she will be loyal to the end...THAT'S MY GIRL!!!

Now about KIA and her fiesty attitude in the Restricted Section *snicker*!!! Yes, Hermione, HD, His4Ever, and myself would "rather hear HIS voice"; that "dark chocolaty voice" that is so Decadent, Delicious, and Devilish. His voice can make me break out the towels *wink and nod*.

But the paddle AND the book, were priceless. By the way, where can I get a copy of "Punish Me Please, Master"????

This story is such a D/s and M/s story!!! You write is very well. My favorite line from this chaper was "and the cherry on top, she is a natural submissive"...that was so HOT from a submissive's POV!!

I know there is more plot to get through. But if LV does not 'take' her soon and teach her,what she is. I may just go insane from all the a-n-t-i-s-i-p-a-t-i-o-n!?!?!?!?!

MORE, PLEASE *sobbing plea*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have a stack of towels ready and waiting. As I am sure His4Ever does too.
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From ANON - Kara on March 15, 2013
Has it seriously only been five days??? O.O Is hermione going a little crazy? Her little alter ego is starting o take on a mind of her own - though she is my favorite character. That would actually be an interesting plot point. But, seriously, shes starting to remind me of the hallucinations in Perception.
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From ANON - Gamma on March 14, 2013
I love your story, I really hope you haven't abandoned it and stopped writing. My only criique is that it's a little slow paced.. after 26 chapters there should be a little sex, no? haha :P
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From ANON - Mark's Pet on March 13, 2013
HM,

While this was a rather 'cerebrial' chapter, the insertion of play and sexual inuindos was excellent.

I always knew that knowledge was an aphodisiac for Hermoine!?!?!?! Apperantly, teaching and speaking with Hermoine about knowledge is the same for LV.

I can't wait to find out what happened to LV in the temple with the 'snake goddess'.

Please post again...soon.
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From ANON - His4Ever on March 12, 2013
...lol....hey Mark's pet....waving my towel .....see got mine too!!!!!!

Right there with you on Our Lord Sex on a Stick being always Dominant Demanding and Delicious in His commands orders and tasks

Just waiting till the story finally reaches the pint where He unleashes His true nature upon her...*swooning*...man what a lucky girl and what a lucky day for us when we get to read it

HM...you are the best darlin !!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - His4Ever on March 12, 2013
Haaaaaallloooo.HM...you incredible writer you...*giggles*...I am so unfreaking real in luv with this story!!!! Was away for a few days...work and stuff...but tonight oh sweet tonight I got to read and catch up...I have never wanted to be a character in a story as much as would want to be Hermione right now...darn that lucky girl...thought I was in melt down gooey ness by the end of ' her punishment day'....oh man do I love her inner KIA bitchy self.....her going through the kissing of his shoes...*snickers*....life is not fair...I want a Lord Voldemort....oh please oh please I want one....marking that on my Christmas List...and I like my list because being naughty gets counts as being twice as nice...*weg*

Ok...now for the serious part of the review...yeah yeah gotta go there...time out need to do my quick hippy hippy shake dance....wait....wait....wait....ok done!

*breathing....and here we go.....I was wondering about the immortal without the houcrux (sp).....glad you went the naga goddess route...I love when mythology play a role considering I studied ancient civilization ..their culture religions and myths and legends. I have a feeling as the real Hermione emerges..I see her surprising herself and really surprising her Master...man is He going to have His hands full with her. I enjoyed her observations of Our resident Hunkiness Himself...and from His looks to His power..to the Way He just simply is...but I gathered a feeling that because of their magical core compatibility it is going to be much more than He even realizes....Hermione at this point is focusing and rapidily process rebirth of her true self...and apart from processing the surface of her Lord...her acknowledging His slow training of her ....*didnt I mention Pavlov in an earlier review'...if so Yay Me!!

She is figuring out Master/slave is more than just the words but something deeper more sensual more carnal that sinks into a person's very being...She does recognize but only hints of the power she hold over Voldemort .....for anyone in the lifestyle will tell you that the real power lays within the soul of the slave/submissive...it takes subtle strength of character...an unbreakable trust to give willingly oneself over completely into the hands of Another...there lies true power in baring the not just the body but the heart and soul...it's heartbreakingly beautiful...

I find myself being excited and anticipating where The Lord Himself will lead her next.....for a Sadist He's been exceedingly kind and gentle with her...part of me just wants to fast forward to when He no longer holds back...then the other part of me is loving the time and care the detail you are taking in creating by far the best LV/Hermione love story I've ever had the pleasure of reading..You by far are one of this couples best storyteller over ever had the pleasure of reading ....so thank you sincerely and until next time I wait with bated breath.
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