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By : HeavyMist

From ANON - IceEmpress on March 03, 2013
Excellent chapter! I can't wait for the the memories to start flowing and for Hermione to see and hear with her own ears the traitors. I also love the sexual tension and dizziness that Hermione experiences with Lord V. You're doing fantastic! I check daily for updates and can't wait to see Hermione's deflowerment by our Lord.
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From ANON - IceEmpress on March 02, 2013
HeavyMist, this is one of the most well written Lord Voldemort and Hermione shippings I have ever read. You belong in the Hallowed Grounds along with Nerys, Serp and my other fave authors. The story is so exciting, fast paced and intricate I often forget she has only been awake for three or four days. Im on the edge of my seat waiting for the memories to be revealed so she can bask in betrayal's pain and slowly but surely turn to our Lord for dark pleasure and pain and rise to becone his Dark Lady. Please keep up the good work and finish the story. I really love it and hope with our overzealous praise you even write more fanfictions. Thank you.
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From ANON - His4Ever on March 01, 2013
Allo..Allo...my Dear...and oh yeah girlfriend listen to your inner k-I-A....and the hubby!!!!!!!..you better keep writing because I'm totally hooked on this story....it's Aaaaaaammmmaaaazzziiinnngg!!! Besides I'm half in love with Voldemort..and well I have always loved Severus..that voice ..oh please whip me..spank me...just don't send me home...lol.....ok...enough of that...serious reviewing needs to happen...down libido down!!!

Poor Hermione with her friends...to wake up and to be hit with information on so many different levels...this girl has moxy....me I'd be hiding under the cover whispering its just a dream.....Jewel..actually covered most of what I was thinking about Chapter 18.....though I resented how some actually were getting mad at her ...they haven't been in a coma and have had a couple of years to adjust...everyone is just expecting her to listen be given the facts and all should be great for her.....I hope they all see her struggle and yes Luna cut through the bull but...everyone always sees and thinks Hermione can handle anything thrown at her....I'm really wanting these people to feel like dirt...and finally see her as a witch whose lost...though never and I mean never broken....cause what doesn't kill you makes you stronger...and if I was Voldemort...yep, Dark Lord Sir...good luck...because I think even he under estimates her....

Ok...ok...*head back laughing*....Lordy Lordy .....Hermione is something....her power is incredible...Severus alive and she is one pissed off witch.....the end broke my heart ..she has such a tender heart is so good and true inside....toes men need to feel like crap....Draco and Blaise redeemed themselves in my eyes...but only a smidgen...they need to beg her to forgive them...gah!!!! But I do love my Slytherins!!!!!
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From Jewels812 on February 28, 2013
It is hard to face facts when you have been fed lies for half of your life...you have developed Hermione very well so far, so will be hard to convince due to her logically brain. She will have to face all of the lies and deciet she has been presented with and it will be a hard adjustment for her. So many things happening to her in just 3 days since she woke up from her coma...first has to deal with a completely new world, punishment from her "master" and be introduced to a lifestyle she had never considered and now to be told almost all of her previous "best friends" were liars. That is a lot for the brain to process in a short amount of time...i do hope Tom gives her a few days to process and work things out before inflicting more punishments. I understand why he started out handing out punishments, to break her stubborness among other traits, but he needs to be careful or he will break her spirit and then it will all be downhill. Keep up the good writing, it is an enjoyable story.
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From ANON - Mark's Pet on February 27, 2013
Leave it to Luna to cut through all of Hermione's excuses and the bullshit...to stab at the heart of the matter. The Order needed Hermoine's research ability and to keep Harry under some control.

I love the descriptions of how insidious Molly, Ginny, and Ron were. And also, glad that the older boys could see past their mother's and sibling's crap. I am glad that the traitorous Weasleys got what was coming to them.

Hermoine had her back up, including Lupin. He just had to love her.

OMG, the horcrux quest was a decoy?!?!?!? I did not see that coming *shocked expression*.

You cannot leave us hanging on this cliffie!!!!!! More, Please!

p.s. I LOVE THIS STORY!! OK, are you happy now?
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From ANON - Mark's Pet on February 27, 2013
I had to write this semi-review before I even started the chapter.

Your discussion with your alter-ego was priceless *Nearly fell out of my chair laughing*. Listen to your alter-ego, your hubby, and most of all your LOYAL READERS. We LOVE this story!!! It is moving along nicely and we are just on the verge of the good Kinky, Smutty stuff!!!

My alter-ego has this to say - MP "Do not leave us hanging...that is an order". I know, my alter-ego is a little (LOT) demanding when it comes to Voldemort/Hermoine smut. And she HATES stories that get to the good part and then are abandoned. It has happened too many times for her.

So let ME finish reading this chapter and YOU get to writing the next *pleading submissive on the floor begging*.
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From LadyAngelEuropas on February 27, 2013
I am loving this story, I do tend to get so caught up I forget to review. Your writing is amazing and I love how detailed your story is. Can't wait to read more!!
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From ANON - Mark's Pet on February 25, 2013
Wow, that was A LOT to take in. Hermoine's 'knowledge' cup runneth over.

I did like the sarcastic remarks made by K-I-A. Especially the one about intimate, intercourse and foreplay!!

I wonder who is next on the list for Hermoine to meet? And when is he going to kiss her again?!?!?!?!

More, please!
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From ANON - Karen Lioncourt on February 25, 2013
Count me in with the Voldemort groupies, lol^^
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From ANON - Tundeboszi on February 25, 2013
Blaise and Luna nice pair Im very curious. Voldemort is so sexy. Draco be careful dont cross the line

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From ANON - His4Ever on February 24, 2013
First off please don't ever write about how You hope the writing is less.....boring....because I can tell you right now I don't read boring ever!!!!!! There now thatis out of the way...*grinning*....oh yeah got my fix.....poor Hermione surrounded by a bunch of Voldy groupies......I wonder is Hermione going to retreat into herself...distance herself from the survivors friends or not she woke still believing the way of the past. And. Really can't see her just jumping on the All Hail Lord Voldemort train....and I'm really hoping that Draco and Blaise have to really work at gaining her trust and friendship back......oh and that seed that Neville is off to get.....it wouldn't happen to be one of those 51 ...excuse 50 ingredients needed for a certain potion *wicked laugh*....and I'm so hoping since Hermione spouted off the right name that it's an ingredient only used in a couple of potions...man I'd love to see her run or escape hiding a dodging for a while...oh please let her really give Voldemort a run for his money and the others as well.....even though I want to join the Voldemort club...in no way should it be as easy as He thinks it's gong to be.....oh man do I love this story...waiting with bated breath for the next installment......*wink wink*
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From ANON - Kara on February 24, 2013
This entire society reminds me of Brave New World, so I can't help but wonder what the downside is? Who doesn't this society work for?
More importantly (and on a completely different note
), what exact lies was Dumbledore spreading? Why did everything go down like it did in the 90's? Knowing what's going on in the present is really confusing without a bit more background on what was going on during canon. I know you probably have this all jotted down, but this chapter is a bit frustrating without that knowledge.
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From ANON - selene on February 23, 2013
Anather great chapter keep going please
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From ANON - Anon on February 23, 2013
feel really stupid, been trying to do reviews and just tried this part...anyway, I am really liking this story, there are parts that actually freak me, but then that is part of this kind of story. will try to review, but I find myself getting into a story and just clicking the next chapter button...on to the next chapter!
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From Burnedx2 on February 22, 2013
Haha I was waiting for Blaise to get punched in the face to stop talking. I'll be interested to see how Hermione reacts to seeing her friends in the next chapter.
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