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Reviews for Fire and Ice

By : Original-Sin
  • From iluvmysato on March 04, 2017

    Hi my friend, my other two Harry Potter stories were also posted on HP Fandom but those stories and the archive are being moved to A03. I am going to post Fire and Ice there too once the transfer is complete but wanted to let you know. If you have a problem with it, please let me know. I am still having some health issues and thought trying to get back into writing may help with my recovery. I won't use the chapters you wrote only the ones I did.  I just wanted to let you know about it. I hope you are doing well. Thanks for adopting this story, Ari.

     


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  • From ANON - HP1990 on March 31, 2016
    Really loving this! I like your twisted mind 😉 some of the time skips were a bit big for my tastes, and I would have liked a short recap of a little bit of what happened, but I do get it. The story must go on and if you wrote out every inconsequential day, the story would be like... Two hundred chapters of mostly fillers.

    I also noticed your notes about people nagging about short chapters and asking for quick updates: Ignore them! You have a life outside of writing which needs to be lived!

    That being said, I'm looking forward to reading about Harry's chat with Draco!
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  • From Doragonkage on March 30, 2015
    Ha haaa first review i write in aff...goodness me :-) t'was a fun little read. Can't wait for the rest.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on February 19, 2015
    Uh... That was rather stupid of Ginny. Killing Roger or attempting to would have made more sense rather than leave her kids without one of their parents.
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  • From ANON - SlapNuts on February 08, 2015
    Dude, sorry about this and no offense but this is my notice that I am discontinuing reading your story due to the fact I thought it was a Drarry pairing but now Ginny and Harry are back in love with all of Ginny's whoring past deeds seemingly forgotten.
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  • From ANON - Lola on January 18, 2015
    Hey, your story is missing! Where did it go? What happened? Will you repost it?
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  • From Jan on January 18, 2015
    I hope Harry doesn't believe that Draco is truly involve with the murders, I can't wait to find out, please update chapter 10 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - SlapNuts on January 12, 2015
    Dude, I know you adopted this story and am enjoying reading it but could you please make the chapters a little bit longer. It's rather annoying to anticipate an update and the click the new chapter only to find it's an extremely short one again.
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  • From ANON - mr mystery on January 11, 2015
    hiii, i really like this fan fiction i advise all to read it. it has a excellent plot and lots of twists and at only nine chapters it bound to be fabulous when finished.10/10
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  • From ANON - daenerys targaryen on January 05, 2015
    Happy to see you updated again and tried to fix the previous chapter too! I love this story and my only fault with it now is the really short chapters plus please find a Beta to help you out.
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  • From ANON - staar on January 05, 2015
    you will make Ginny pay for all of her shit with harry and the kids !!!!!!!!!!! Astoria also needs to pay and man don't let Draco get in any more trouble please ....loved this , thanks for the update !!!!!
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  • From ANON - Aisling on October 01, 2014
    Hi! I am a new reader of your story and wanted to drop you a note to let you know that I do like this story. I am a big Drarry fan so always enjoy finding new stories featuring my favorite duo. I just wanted to mention that as I was reading along starting with the first chapter, then continuing by clicking the next chapter links, it flowed rather nicely until I reached the latest chapter which then turned out to be an eye sore and rather difficult to read so I didn't enjoy it as much as the previous chapters.

    I hope you can fix this problem because I am afraid it will deter others from attempting to read it.

    Please go to the Harry Potter archive and scroll down the latest story list until you find this story and then start reading it from the same perspective as your readers so you can see what I am talking about.

    Good luck and thanks for sharing this story!
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  • From ANON - Chrissy on September 30, 2014
    Thanks for the update! I am glad you are continuing this story and that you adopted it. I do feel like like you rushed this chapter (8) a bit and hope you don't lose track of what has already happened in the previous chapters. Thanks for letting me know there will be no mpreg too.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 30, 2014
    Chapters 1-8: Good story. My favorite kind of Harry story is where someone (or more) is after him and yet no matter what they try his Potter "magical luck" prevents them from getting the better of him. A little angst is all I can do but I'm staying with this story till Cormac and his lover (Ginny's also) makes it too sad because of how they are making Harry look. Albus and Scorpius are just so sweet!!!
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  • From ANON - Chrissy on September 25, 2014
    Will you be continuing this story! I would love to read more soon. Thanks for sharing. Oh, and will this story feature mpreg? I didn't see it in the story tags so was wondering. I love Harry being the one pregnant not Draco.
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